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I like this story, it is well written and interesting but the concept of anti-villain makes me not want to cheer and follow the mc with how "evil" and "manipulative" he is. Don't get me wrong its within the character personality, it flows well and its not cringe at all but its just not for me.
meh, i feel like he is just wasting his hard work to do that sheet just to hide it? i mean, it doesn't really change the fact that he will be a bigger fish than others because of his popularity.... If he wants himself out of trouble and hide anything, why make himself popular In the 1st place?...
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Es una buena historia. Realmente no puedo encontrar grandes problemas, quizás el más grande sea simplemente aferrarse a la trama tanto. Es decir con un poder que te permite firmar contratos y los conocimientos de la trama podría haber ido y conseguir algunos subordinados fuertes, valiosos o atractivas además de Himiko. Un buen ejemplo sería Monoma, las chicas de la clase 1 B, Lady Nagant (aunque ella sería algo difícil) la hija del científico amigo de Allá Might, Mount Lady, Kamui Woods, o incluso Eri.
I've never really kept up with MHA but this FF is good and kinda has me wanting to get back into it.
I have nothing to complain about, overall the fanfic is good.........................................................................................
5/4/2/2/4. it is a fine story but I don't like the direction that it is going at all given that MC feels like a vessel for his quirk rather than someone who uses his quirk and builds control over it which is a missed opportunity and it feels as if his wish was not granted given the way his quirk took control over him as naturally as it did.
It's a great story with decent grammar and main character. the only thing I have a problem with is the pacing it took 30 chapters to get to the entrance exam ,when I feel like you could get away with about half that and still have the same information provided. Otherwise, a great start can't wait for more.[img=update][img=update][img=update]
it is good,be careful thou the MC is manipulative (and i love that), interactions are great and writing superb . read it
So far, so good. But it irks me that he has love for only his family and is very manipulative to his potential lovers. I hope later on he has some character development, so he can be more human
Hello author, can you make an oc character that has an quairk angel and make mc learn human emotions Because you said the mc can't make harem because he doesn't have feelings, so if you can give him person with angel quairk, maybe he can
Of course there is the obligatory self serving author review. Let me know what you think in your own review if you feel like it or not if you don't.
actualizaciónes muy lentas capítulos muy cortos, monólogos extremadamente largos y muy pocos cambios del manga original . 0 creatividad [img=sad]
I like this story, it is well written and interesting but the concept of anti-villain makes me not want to cheer and follow the mc with how "evil" and "manipulative" he is. Don't get me wrong its within the character personality, it flows well and its not cringe at all but its just not for me.
meh, i feel like he is just wasting his hard work to do that sheet just to hide it? i mean, it doesn't really change the fact that he will be a bigger fish than others because of his popularity.... If he wants himself out of trouble and hide anything, why make himself popular In the 1st place?...
Reveal Spoiler Es una buena historia. Realmente no puedo encontrar grandes problemas, quizás el más grande sea simplemente aferrarse a la trama tanto. Es decir con un poder que te permite firmar contratos y los conocimientos de la trama podría haber ido y conseguir algunos subordinados fuertes, valiosos o atractivas además de Himiko. Un buen ejemplo sería Monoma, las chicas de la clase 1 B, Lady Nagant (aunque ella sería algo difícil) la hija del científico amigo de Allá Might, Mount Lady, Kamui Woods, o incluso Eri.
I've never really kept up with MHA but this FF is good and kinda has me wanting to get back into it.
I have nothing to complain about, overall the fanfic is good.........................................................................................
5/4/2/2/4. it is a fine story but I don't like the direction that it is going at all given that MC feels like a vessel for his quirk rather than someone who uses his quirk and builds control over it which is a missed opportunity and it feels as if his wish was not granted given the way his quirk took control over him as naturally as it did.
It's a great story with decent grammar and main character. the only thing I have a problem with is the pacing it took 30 chapters to get to the entrance exam ,when I feel like you could get away with about half that and still have the same information provided. Otherwise, a great start can't wait for more.[img=update][img=update][img=update]
it is good,be careful thou the MC is manipulative (and i love that), interactions are great and writing superb . read it
So far, so good. But it irks me that he has love for only his family and is very manipulative to his potential lovers. I hope later on he has some character development, so he can be more human
Hello author, can you make an oc character that has an quairk angel and make mc learn human emotions Because you said the mc can't make harem because he doesn't have feelings, so if you can give him person with angel quairk, maybe he can
Of course there is the obligatory self serving author review. Let me know what you think in your own review if you feel like it or not if you don't.
actualizaciónes muy lentas capítulos muy cortos, monólogos extremadamente largos y muy pocos cambios del manga original . 0 creatividad [img=sad]