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HOW IS THIS BOOK NOT NUMBER 1? Seriously, people vote and use your power stones. The book is amazing, and the development of the dis" If dis was original Danmachi. It would be with the likes of Naruto and all the other big anime
Vulkizaro_Zoromi Great Fanfic Keep up the great work you can do this Seven Deadly Sins fanfic idea immediately after Chaos has come to Orario (A Seven Deadly Sins X Danmachi SI story) Reborn as a Saiyan in Seven Deadly Sins A soul has been reborn into Sds as a Full-Blooded Saiyan. What will he do now? Shows : Seven Deadly Sins and SDS: Four Knights of the Apocalypse Harem Sennett Jericho Guila Veronica Liones Jillian Vivian Margaret Liones Merlin Derieri Matrona Jenna Deldry Nerobasta Jelamet Gjalga Greib Sabunak Roxy Freyja Skadi Dolores Isolde
Al inicio es algo lento pero es fácil empatizar con el MC, una vez que pasa el arco de entrenamiento la historia empieza a tomar profundidad y los personajes también, considero que si bien los personajes son entrañables estos no poseen un desarrollo fluido o razonable, simplemente se desarrollan por tener que hacerlo o porque tuvieron un combate, comprendo que puede ser complejo pero intentarlo debería estar bien, sobretodo cuando el MC se autodenomina "Kratos" osea, perdón pero no le veo necesidad más que para obtener un power up a futuro, otra cosa que me gusta de la historia es el uso de Beast Quest, que si bien adapta el orden y todo a DanMachi lo logra hacer bastante bien. En lo personal me gusta la historia y quiero seguir leyendo pero ya la completé hasta la última actualización, seguiré leyendo y la recomiendo.
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Si te soy sincero ya no me gustaba este fanfic cuando se dio a conocer que incluso despues de reencarnar tenia que estar de sirviente con el mismo dios de mierd que lo mando a danmachi y con lo que lo siguió lo termine odiando es prácticamente un esclavo. ( siempre pensé que los peores fanfic eran los que las diosas que los reencarna son parte del romance ahora se que me equivoque esto es 100 veces peor)
Just so people are aware because clearly the author doesn’t want you to know until you’ve spent HOURS getting halfway through the story. THIS IS A HAREM STORY. So if you have any good taste and rightfully think harem is gross and ruins every story then steer clear of reading this. If this didn’t have a harem in it then it would have been one of my favorite stories I’ve read on here. But sadly the authors Patrons made a vote to make this harem.
I love this story but for me personally, the MC is just too edgy for my taste. I also heavily dislike harem but this story has a proper harem so it doesn't trouble me much.All through the story is pretty good 💪👍
It's a fantastic piece of fiction and I have enjoyed the journey so far in reading this. It is well written and the character development is done quite well. The harem is also developing in a good direction where every girl doesn't just automatically fall for the MC and the harem members actually have personalities. keep up the great work 💪.
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Ok honestly story so far is kinda average maybe because it doesn't really speak to me it's not bad except for the stupid things mc does at the beginning Honestly thing that bothers me the most is the it's not harem in a Harem world i have rule is that if it's a harem world like dxd to love ru danmchi etc etc story must follow the trop and if it's not don't have one only except if it's necessary otherwise it's just weird
I really like the concept of the fic it's good that he is trying so hard to go back but after his fight with ottar and he realises that he needs to take things slowly and with efficiency, I think that now that he starting to become more stable mentally and emotionally it would be good that he stats treating this world as his for the time begin and try to change and plan ahead as he has meta verse knowledge like for example he already helped lily but there is still the 7 day nightmare of orario so he could start to prepare for that and make allies such as the asterea family and saving shakshi little sister so as to gain favours and create his own set of network since he himself don't know for how long he will be in it. In any case this fic is really great and we can see that the author has the way to describe battle accordingly, emotional development of both the mc and side characters and the story development is at a good paste, so all in all it a really great fic an with consistency of chp per week hope u keep it up author cause I know where my power stone are going 😀.
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There is a troll in the reviews, he gives every book on Webnovel a 1*. Completely butchering good story’s reputations.
REALLY LIKING THIS STORY SO FAR. THERES A LOT OF THINGS GOING ON AND A LOT OF POSSIBILITIES THIS CHARACTER THAT YOU HAVE CREATED HAS A LOT OF POTENTIAL AND I ENJOY READING IT, JUST ONE QUESTION... WHO IS THE WAIFU THAT HE MENTIONS? IT MAY HAVE SLIPPED MY MIND BUT I DONT REMEMBER HIM MENTIONING ONE BEFORE PLEASE CONTINUE UPDATING AND STAY SAFE FROM C19
We want moremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremore Keep it up !
This Story is a must read, it’s all about a boy who is reincarnated with the power of chaos and his strives to return to his original world. The author keeps to the story very well and shows that chaos can be everything from evil to good, light to darkness, and love to hate. He tells a story on how chaos is the very definition of contradiction and at the same time it’s not.
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The story idea in my opinion is pretty average, the execution is pretty boring, the MC is basically a slave to a superior being and bows to the strong which I find very uninteresting to read (Google Translator)
It’s a fine story! I hope this story gets more than hundred chapters! And I hope there’s no harem or something
Me aburrí . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . ......p. . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. ..
I really like the story, the characters are well developed and the little thing I don't like is that they leave too many questions about why and how the MC got his powers, it's also frustrating how MC basically has no choice but to put up with everything that happens to him Finally, my only hope for the future is this story that Freya does not become an "important" character apart from being the typical antagonist or villain that annoys the MC
Bro its an interesting plot but the past 5 ch have been them going on a shopping trip. nothing is happening and all the dialogue in these chaps have been a whole slew of lots of words with no substance.
De mí gusto es algo que me está transmitiendo lo que está sintiendo el personaje se puede entender lo que está tratando de trasmitir,para mí gusto es perfecto es lo que busco como un lector
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Great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍
this was an amazing story all the way up to chapter 16 and then author did an unforgivable not maximizing mc character growth and potential and there isn't any significant reason or reward for doing so it was spontaneous and seemed so rushed now it is redeemable by rewriting the end of chapter 16 forgoing level up to maximize potential but otherwise after chap 16 so far I have lost interest in this story
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This is a great novel keep up the great work.........................................................................................................
HOW IS THIS BOOK NOT NUMBER 1? Seriously, people vote and use your power stones. The book is amazing, and the development of the dis" If dis was original Danmachi. It would be with the likes of Naruto and all the other big anime
Vulkizaro_Zoromi Great Fanfic Keep up the great work you can do this Seven Deadly Sins fanfic idea immediately after Chaos has come to Orario (A Seven Deadly Sins X Danmachi SI story) Reborn as a Saiyan in Seven Deadly Sins A soul has been reborn into Sds as a Full-Blooded Saiyan. What will he do now? Shows : Seven Deadly Sins and SDS: Four Knights of the Apocalypse Harem Sennett Jericho Guila Veronica Liones Jillian Vivian Margaret Liones Merlin Derieri Matrona Jenna Deldry Nerobasta Jelamet Gjalga Greib Sabunak Roxy Freyja Skadi Dolores Isolde
Al inicio es algo lento pero es fácil empatizar con el MC, una vez que pasa el arco de entrenamiento la historia empieza a tomar profundidad y los personajes también, considero que si bien los personajes son entrañables estos no poseen un desarrollo fluido o razonable, simplemente se desarrollan por tener que hacerlo o porque tuvieron un combate, comprendo que puede ser complejo pero intentarlo debería estar bien, sobretodo cuando el MC se autodenomina "Kratos" osea, perdón pero no le veo necesidad más que para obtener un power up a futuro, otra cosa que me gusta de la historia es el uso de Beast Quest, que si bien adapta el orden y todo a DanMachi lo logra hacer bastante bien. En lo personal me gusta la historia y quiero seguir leyendo pero ya la completé hasta la última actualización, seguiré leyendo y la recomiendo.
Reveal Spoiler Si te soy sincero ya no me gustaba este fanfic cuando se dio a conocer que incluso despues de reencarnar tenia que estar de sirviente con el mismo dios de mierd que lo mando a danmachi y con lo que lo siguió lo termine odiando es prácticamente un esclavo. ( siempre pensé que los peores fanfic eran los que las diosas que los reencarna son parte del romance ahora se que me equivoque esto es 100 veces peor)
Just so people are aware because clearly the author doesn’t want you to know until you’ve spent HOURS getting halfway through the story. THIS IS A HAREM STORY. So if you have any good taste and rightfully think harem is gross and ruins every story then steer clear of reading this. If this didn’t have a harem in it then it would have been one of my favorite stories I’ve read on here. But sadly the authors Patrons made a vote to make this harem.
I love this story but for me personally, the MC is just too edgy for my taste. I also heavily dislike harem but this story has a proper harem so it doesn't trouble me much.All through the story is pretty good 💪👍
It's a fantastic piece of fiction and I have enjoyed the journey so far in reading this. It is well written and the character development is done quite well. The harem is also developing in a good direction where every girl doesn't just automatically fall for the MC and the harem members actually have personalities. keep up the great work 💪.
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Ok honestly story so far is kinda average maybe because it doesn't really speak to me it's not bad except for the stupid things mc does at the beginning Honestly thing that bothers me the most is the it's not harem in a Harem world i have rule is that if it's a harem world like dxd to love ru danmchi etc etc story must follow the trop and if it's not don't have one only except if it's necessary otherwise it's just weird
I really like the concept of the fic it's good that he is trying so hard to go back but after his fight with ottar and he realises that he needs to take things slowly and with efficiency, I think that now that he starting to become more stable mentally and emotionally it would be good that he stats treating this world as his for the time begin and try to change and plan ahead as he has meta verse knowledge like for example he already helped lily but there is still the 7 day nightmare of orario so he could start to prepare for that and make allies such as the asterea family and saving shakshi little sister so as to gain favours and create his own set of network since he himself don't know for how long he will be in it. In any case this fic is really great and we can see that the author has the way to describe battle accordingly, emotional development of both the mc and side characters and the story development is at a good paste, so all in all it a really great fic an with consistency of chp per week hope u keep it up author cause I know where my power stone are going 😀.
Reveal Spoiler There is a troll in the reviews, he gives every book on Webnovel a 1*. Completely butchering good story’s reputations.
REALLY LIKING THIS STORY SO FAR. THERES A LOT OF THINGS GOING ON AND A LOT OF POSSIBILITIES THIS CHARACTER THAT YOU HAVE CREATED HAS A LOT OF POTENTIAL AND I ENJOY READING IT, JUST ONE QUESTION... WHO IS THE WAIFU THAT HE MENTIONS? IT MAY HAVE SLIPPED MY MIND BUT I DONT REMEMBER HIM MENTIONING ONE BEFORE PLEASE CONTINUE UPDATING AND STAY SAFE FROM C19
We want moremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremore Keep it up !
This Story is a must read, it’s all about a boy who is reincarnated with the power of chaos and his strives to return to his original world. The author keeps to the story very well and shows that chaos can be everything from evil to good, light to darkness, and love to hate. He tells a story on how chaos is the very definition of contradiction and at the same time it’s not.
Reveal Spoiler The story idea in my opinion is pretty average, the execution is pretty boring, the MC is basically a slave to a superior being and bows to the strong which I find very uninteresting to read (Google Translator)
It’s a fine story! I hope this story gets more than hundred chapters! And I hope there’s no harem or something
Me aburrí . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . ......p. . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. ..
I really like the story, the characters are well developed and the little thing I don't like is that they leave too many questions about why and how the MC got his powers, it's also frustrating how MC basically has no choice but to put up with everything that happens to him Finally, my only hope for the future is this story that Freya does not become an "important" character apart from being the typical antagonist or villain that annoys the MC
Bro its an interesting plot but the past 5 ch have been them going on a shopping trip. nothing is happening and all the dialogue in these chaps have been a whole slew of lots of words with no substance.
De mí gusto es algo que me está transmitiendo lo que está sintiendo el personaje se puede entender lo que está tratando de trasmitir,para mí gusto es perfecto es lo que busco como un lector
Reveal Spoiler Great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍
this was an amazing story all the way up to chapter 16 and then author did an unforgivable not maximizing mc character growth and potential and there isn't any significant reason or reward for doing so it was spontaneous and seemed so rushed now it is redeemable by rewriting the end of chapter 16 forgoing level up to maximize potential but otherwise after chap 16 so far I have lost interest in this story
Reveal Spoiler This is a great novel keep up the great work.........................................................................................................
I know I've already given a review but this is peak,it's peak