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It has a good start, I'm enjoying the characters and the story, there hasn't been any depth to the world's history so far, but it's understandable since there's no need at this point.I hope the author can maintain the quality of the story he has demonstrated so far.
you lock your chapters way too early most authors lock chapters at 40 so the readers can actually tell whether they like the book enough to spend money on it. (haven't read yet)
Not much of a review since it's only past 15 chapters currently, but I guess it'll work for now.. Writing Quality: So far it's good. Far better than your average WN novels. Just a few occasional word mistakes and a few sentences inbetween doesn't mix well enough but those are just minority.. Story Development: We already have the plot which is the game MC played, but with more characters and visualisation to it. Not much to tell considering it's just starting here.. Character Design (spoilers): Good work here. MC is someone with brains, he doesn't just hope to get his supposed level-up system because he isn't sure of it so he went to the route of hardwork to gain strength instead of wasting time. Other mentioned characters so far aren't monotonous either, they have their own personality and characteristics to stand for. Kids act like kids, the basics honestly (which most of the novel make it seem like some well crafted plan of evil mastermind).. Update Stability: So far it's good but considering the short chapters many would want it to be more stable or periodic like after a day or 2-3 days interval, as it's a original novel.. World Background: Nothing to say here since the novel is just starting. Couldn't get much info for now, but I guess it works.. Hope any new readers find this useful..
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You lock it at 19 chapters? Dam and I thought some other authors were money hungry.
It has a good start, I'm enjoying the characters and the story, there hasn't been any depth to the world's history so far, but it's understandable since there's no need at this point.I hope the author can maintain the quality of the story he has demonstrated so far.
you lock your chapters way too early most authors lock chapters at 40 so the readers can actually tell whether they like the book enough to spend money on it. (haven't read yet)
Not much of a review since it's only past 15 chapters currently, but I guess it'll work for now.. Writing Quality: So far it's good. Far better than your average WN novels. Just a few occasional word mistakes and a few sentences inbetween doesn't mix well enough but those are just minority.. Story Development: We already have the plot which is the game MC played, but with more characters and visualisation to it. Not much to tell considering it's just starting here.. Character Design (spoilers): Good work here. MC is someone with brains, he doesn't just hope to get his supposed level-up system because he isn't sure of it so he went to the route of hardwork to gain strength instead of wasting time. Other mentioned characters so far aren't monotonous either, they have their own personality and characteristics to stand for. Kids act like kids, the basics honestly (which most of the novel make it seem like some well crafted plan of evil mastermind).. Update Stability: So far it's good but considering the short chapters many would want it to be more stable or periodic like after a day or 2-3 days interval, as it's a original novel.. World Background: Nothing to say here since the novel is just starting. Couldn't get much info for now, but I guess it works.. Hope any new readers find this useful..
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You lock it at 19 chapters? Dam and I thought some other authors were money hungry.