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I suggest you to download grammerly and clear the unnecessary spaces among word and marks. It will be a big help to your quality. So far, that was what I wanted to tell you... Keep going author... Kudos!!!
good plot, intresting read. overall a good novel, the only thing that could be better is the writing quality.
Great start! I can't wait to see what happens next. This does deal with a lot of heavy topics, maybe a warning for the readers might be great as well :) But still looking forward to see what happens next.
Haven't met racists for long. The way author builds conversations makes you feel like laughing. I mean, the story makes you laugh when Page is talking to her husband. Want to read more. I can also advice the author to explain characters more than white and black. Maybe their height, what they are wearing, etc. Keep up good work author.
Great piece. Prolific writer. This novel reflects on slavery and freedom. Can freedom befriend slavery? Can freedom rescue slavery? A story of love and bravery and how God orders the steps of the pure in heart.
This is a heavy story that treats an important topic in our society. And the perspective we get is a good one to enlighten the problem. To improve: Grammar: It has some issues that break the flow of the reader. Be it in the structure, or grammatical points to review. In this case, I recommend you use Grammarly and Wordtune for future rewriting. Depth: For a heavy topic, it lacks a bit of metaphor and inner work in the thoughts and little actions of each character for a higher connection with the reader. For that, I would suggest you watch the tv show: 'Lovecraft Country'. All in all, keep up the good work!
I suggest you to download grammerly and clear the unnecessary spaces among word and marks. It will be a big help to your quality. So far, that was what I wanted to tell you... Keep going author... Kudos!!!
good plot, intresting read. overall a good novel, the only thing that could be better is the writing quality.
Great start! I can't wait to see what happens next. This does deal with a lot of heavy topics, maybe a warning for the readers might be great as well :) But still looking forward to see what happens next.
Haven't met racists for long. The way author builds conversations makes you feel like laughing. I mean, the story makes you laugh when Page is talking to her husband. Want to read more. I can also advice the author to explain characters more than white and black. Maybe their height, what they are wearing, etc. Keep up good work author.
Great piece. Prolific writer. This novel reflects on slavery and freedom. Can freedom befriend slavery? Can freedom rescue slavery? A story of love and bravery and how God orders the steps of the pure in heart.
This is a heavy story that treats an important topic in our society. And the perspective we get is a good one to enlighten the problem. To improve: Grammar: It has some issues that break the flow of the reader. Be it in the structure, or grammatical points to review. In this case, I recommend you use Grammarly and Wordtune for future rewriting. Depth: For a heavy topic, it lacks a bit of metaphor and inner work in the thoughts and little actions of each character for a higher connection with the reader. For that, I would suggest you watch the tv show: 'Lovecraft Country'. All in all, keep up the good work!