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This story is super engaging and with each chapter that passes I just want to read more and more.♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡ ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡
I think this is the best asoiaf Fanfic of 2024. When I even 50 chapters in and the writing quality in the storytelling of his fanfic, amazes me it blows my mind. Keep up the good work. I think the only thing that will be needed is like how did he make his underground organization and also would like to make it easier for the reader to tell like oh this is a flashback, however, other than that this book is top-tier[img=update][img=exp][img=golden ticket][img=coins][img=recommend][img=gift]
Reveal SpoilerOverall a really fun story to read I'd recommend it Not perfect of course and has some cringe moments but all stories do Can't wait to read more of it
A good Story overall wish there were more updates. The author is focusing on lot of works at the same time. Could Someone tell me if this is this reincarnation of MC from A prince of House Targaryen or Dragon Kissed By Sun??
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Too many flashbacks. There are multiple flashbacks for each chapter and that becomes annoying after the first few chapters. It becomes confusing as many of these flashbacks contradict what was already written.
Good start, only thing i dont like is that we still havent had jons snows POV and it seems like the plot i dragging on and could use a timeskip, reading about a baby isnt rlly that fun
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This story is super engaging and with each chapter that passes I just want to read more and more.♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡ ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡
I think this is the best asoiaf Fanfic of 2024. When I even 50 chapters in and the writing quality in the storytelling of his fanfic, amazes me it blows my mind. Keep up the good work. I think the only thing that will be needed is like how did he make his underground organization and also would like to make it easier for the reader to tell like oh this is a flashback, however, other than that this book is top-tier[img=update][img=exp][img=golden ticket][img=coins][img=recommend][img=gift]
Reveal SpoilerOverall a really fun story to read I'd recommend it Not perfect of course and has some cringe moments but all stories do Can't wait to read more of it
A good Story overall wish there were more updates. The author is focusing on lot of works at the same time. Could Someone tell me if this is this reincarnation of MC from A prince of House Targaryen or Dragon Kissed By Sun??
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Too many flashbacks. There are multiple flashbacks for each chapter and that becomes annoying after the first few chapters. It becomes confusing as many of these flashbacks contradict what was already written.
Good start, only thing i dont like is that we still havent had jons snows POV and it seems like the plot i dragging on and could use a timeskip, reading about a baby isnt rlly that fun
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