Traveler's Will: Chronicles of the Lost Worlds

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vorlefan

Hey there, author here xD If you have any questions about the novel, you can leave reply here! 1. First, I must say that this is my first attempt to write and create a novel, my only experience in this regard is that I have read tons of novel. So please, if you have tips, send me. 2. The english language isn't my mother language, so if there are gramatical error or strange sentences, please let me know. 3. How often are you updating? Well, currently I work as a freelancer software engineer — I need to make a living xD, so I'll try to maintain at least 1 chapter per day. 4. What to expect? Comedy, dark scenes, heated enemies, ruined society, interesting worldbuilding and a unique cultivation system.

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Riley_23

WRITING QUALITY: 5/5 The grammar is really good. The way that this was written was so easy to understand. No unnecessary expositions. Straight to the point just like how I like it. STABILITY OF UPDATES: 4/5 It's still too early to judge but I am giving 4/5 because I checked the table of contents and found that the first chap was uploaded a month ago while there are only 13 chaps. I'm not complaining because at the end of the day, I'd still prefer to read the book that updates only once a week but well-written than the other way around. (But I still prefer a well-written daily update.) STORY DEVELOPMENT: 5/5 No need to say anything. Read the first chapter and you'll know. CHARACTER DESIGN: 5/5 They have their own accent, baby! Need I say more? The interactions between characters are believable. Not cardboard cut outs. WORLD BACKGROUND: 5/5 I can visualize the place as I read. And there are no unnecessary expositions. PS. It was good but I just wished the paragraphs were a tad shorter though you can ignore this one. I just prefer shorter paragraphs. That's why.

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BeckyAnimeGirl54

This is a interesting story with a cool color. I liked the interactions of the characters. I would recommend this story. Keep up the good work.

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krish_patel

This book is amazing! It got a likeable mc, the plot is interesting,good pace, good writing quality and great fight scenes. One small suggestion is to improve sentence structure in the early chapter

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Ghostuchichq

I have ridden till ch 10 and from what I have ridden I can say that this story is pretty interesting and good. I liked the way how you describes the world and the characters. I also liked the MC as he is kinda op and cool and not dumb as in other novels. But I would like to say that you should work on world-building. Overall this novel is pretty good and intresting.

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Coyle

When I was reading this story I felt like I was reading a fairy tale (an enticing one I must say). The fighting scenes are very well written and the characters are likable. As a fellow author, I applaud you for that. You did a great job!

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AceAmbrosia

This is one of the best novels I've read. The beginning was beautiful, and it felt like I was reading poetry. I love the accents of the characters. The descriptions are well-made and offer insight to the events as if I were a spectator. Amazing!

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Suzu_Rim

The story has been good so far. The world building is great! I love how Javer character has a different kind of speaking (?) because he was from different region! it's a nice touch!

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INK_arcerated

I love the start to this. The detail almost flows around you as it drags you under and into this world the author has created, like the rapids of a river. One thing I would say however is that it is slightly hard t understand sometimes when it comes to the dialogue.

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baandrews

Different from what you usually find her. The start is dark, and by the time you realize what's happening, you are invested in the story and the style. The author uses colorful language, which might be hard to read if it's not your first language, but very enjoyable.

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ImmortalClown

I was really impressed while reading this story. The writing quality was good and there were no grammatical errors which shows how much effort the author put in this story. I won't say anything about the updating stability but I'll rate it as a 4 out of 5. The world building and the story development was nothing but amazing. In fact, I have no words. Even the characters interaction feel realistic to an exact. Overall, this is a good story. Keep up the good work author 👍

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Ash_Monarch

Wow, wow, wow!!! Coming into this, I did not expect the quality on display at all! It's insane and most definitely blew my mind away. Furthermore, each character has their own little quirk and is very likeable - a big sign that the Author knows what he's doing. The story has managed to hook me in, and I can't praise it more! 🔥

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UnreliableJones_

Just from the first three chapters, I can already assume that the novel is gonna be a blast to read! The most important aspect of any novel: the way it is written. All I can say about that is the fact that it is PERFECT! The way things are described, the way the text is written just flows perfectly, it is just perfect all the way! The characters are also very complex and good to understand! The other aspects of the novel are very well handled, it was just a fun read overall; I can't wait to read more of this later TL;DR Good novel, make sure to read it if you have time to spare!

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Vanilla_Chino

Guys when I say the author is a master of crafting a scene with descriptive language, I truely do mean it. The world and characters are also just really well paced; not too fast for you to digest. This story reminds me a bit of berserk and frieren. Just a good vibe with well balanced action as well as slice of life dialogue banter moments. Keep it up author! Amazing work.

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Kuroitsuki

The beginning of the book was nothing less than poetry itself. Descriptive writing will force you to imagine things you have never thought about. Like a cherry on the top the grammar is perfect as well. Hope this reaches the target audience

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Zenith_Seraph

based on what i read i don't believe that English is your second language its well written i can feel what the characters feel understand what the go through the author made a very unique and understandable characters i give this novel 9.7/10 its so good if any one want to read a good novel i highly recommend.

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WriterTheos

I like it! If your genuinely looking for a unique and fresh twist to the every day boring novel, this is for sure for you. Give it a go, Im sure you won't regret it!

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mcmagical

It is really good for my liking they describe the world good it is really a good book asrid is the main character right? cool name

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CcSupremecC

First of all, I can confidently say that this is a story you won't regret reading. The writing quality improves after the chapters the author mentioned. The world is intriguing, and the events aren't rushed or overly complicated. When something happens, the author explains it in detail and consistently to avoid leaving any questions in our minds. Moreover, as you read, you can see that the author progresses in a planned, not random, manner. It's a great story, well done to the author!

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Haizao

Traveler's Will is very solidly written, especially once the chapters reach the 20s and over. The author's sense of pace is very deliberate with the details, and really makes you feel the situation in a granular sense. The main character, Asdras, is strongly crafted, and while there is a System, it's not front-and-center in a way that interferes with the enjoyment. (Though that does make it a little harder to wrap one's head around). There are a few word use issues that are more obtuse than incorrect, and narratively I did find the MC gets his hand held by the plot somewhat, with other characters pushing him along a lot at times. But overall it's a solid read and quite enjoyable! Definitely good potential.