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It does have some potential. Although i do reccomend giving us the info slowly. But considering its author's first novel, pretty good. Waiting for actual devil chapters. If author makes the mc truly evil, this may acually be decent.
I would love to get some suggestions from you guys on how you would like to see our mc improve and do stuff. This is my first novel so it may have some mistakes and will have a good read. Every comment you post or review you give will be seen by me and I will try to improve my novel to the best of my abilities I will try to update this novel one - three chapters per week but depends.
start seems interesting to be honest. I hope the expectations can be matched.
It does have some potential. Although i do reccomend giving us the info slowly. But considering its author's first novel, pretty good. Waiting for actual devil chapters. If author makes the mc truly evil, this may acually be decent.
I would love to get some suggestions from you guys on how you would like to see our mc improve and do stuff. This is my first novel so it may have some mistakes and will have a good read. Every comment you post or review you give will be seen by me and I will try to improve my novel to the best of my abilities I will try to update this novel one - three chapters per week but depends.
start seems interesting to be honest. I hope the expectations can be matched.