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Write a reviewHonestly I’m enjoying you’re story. They only thing that throws me off is your grammar. Other then that good stuff!
Cool! Such a great story I have read so far. Its plot are great. A fallen hero who should rise. well everyone has their own path, but they should learn on their own how to climb the ladder of hardships in their life. All you need is your courage and bravery to keep your hold. Pretty interesting book. The plot is great. The writing style is easy understanding and simply to flow. Great job author. Keep up the great work.
I read four chapters of this book and it was amazing . The writing quality is good. it's a promising novel.
I really like the world that the author is creating around the MC which also explains a lot of personality that the MC had. He is also quite relatable. The story/mystery slowly build up and you will soon find yourself immerse in the story. Keep up the good work author.
First if all, I love how you have put the synopsis. The plot is really interesting. The characters and scenes, everything is written very well. Keep up the good work.
This story has a very promising start. Most people can relate to the struggles of being a teen in grade school. I also like the older sibling angle. it give s the main character depth and lets the reader connect with them on a personal level.
So Ive read like 1 chapter or so, and its pretty good. Well better than how I would write anyway but it has a lot of potentional but the character design kinda lacked.
This is an interesting story. So far, the characters are intriguing The writing needs work (the switching from the first person narrative to third person and back can be a bit confusing sometimes) but the story so far is worth reading. Welldone Author.
The synposis and characters were really on point, and they give to the story this flavor that pushes this story further. It's very good, and being there's only 4 chapters, things are soon to happen.
It is a very intriguing story. I was hooked from the synopsis.I already love Kai.The descriptions are written very nicely. looking forward to more updates. you just need to work a little bit on your english.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
It is an interesting story with very mysterious elements, much isn't revealed yet but I am eager to find out more. The 'English' needs a little work.
I read it all and found it interesting. I can already tell that this will be a good story. I like Kai and feel bad that he gets beaten up. Keep up the good work.
Hello author! I really like the backstory of the characters. And I especially like Kai. I think there could be some improvements in the writing style but its still amazing!
Really good plot and characters are well designed. The writing style could be worked on a little, with the change in person but this book has a lot of potential. Good luck author and keep working hard. You've got a great story here.
Interesting story. The characters are good and there is a great plot. Grammar is generally good, but the first chapter changing from third person to first was a little confusing. Otherwise, good work author
the beginning is quite good and entertaining, it has good characters, it has a good backstory that gets you into the story.[img=recomendar][img=recomendar]
I am already in love with Kai & Maka and I can't wait for more. I love it that you've given the characters personality. Hands up, the story is engaging and builds anticipation. Now going to chapter 2, adding this to my library
The title itself arouses curiosity in the mind of the reader. This already tells us that something action packed is in store. Can't wait to have more from you author!
Wonderful story, I like the mystery of it all, it doesn't give away the plot too much which keeps you interested. Cannot wait to find out if his trusted friend is that trustworthy because I am getting bad vibes already.
Reveal SpoilerGreat story, can't wait to read the rest of the book. Love the characters and i love how you discribe them. The story really drags you in and can play on your emotions.
I have read up till Chap 25 and this is my thrid review for this book. It's a really good read. Great storytelling so far. The mystery just keeps pilling up in the story, there were unexpected twists and turns which draws you in and keeps you contiuning reading. What can I say, this is a MUST read, so give this book/story a chance. It worth's the read. Great job author!
Honestly I’m enjoying you’re story. They only thing that throws me off is your grammar. Other then that good stuff!
Cool! Such a great story I have read so far. Its plot are great. A fallen hero who should rise. well everyone has their own path, but they should learn on their own how to climb the ladder of hardships in their life. All you need is your courage and bravery to keep your hold. Pretty interesting book. The plot is great. The writing style is easy understanding and simply to flow. Great job author. Keep up the great work.
I read four chapters of this book and it was amazing . The writing quality is good. it's a promising novel.
I really like the world that the author is creating around the MC which also explains a lot of personality that the MC had. He is also quite relatable. The story/mystery slowly build up and you will soon find yourself immerse in the story. Keep up the good work author.
First if all, I love how you have put the synopsis. The plot is really interesting. The characters and scenes, everything is written very well. Keep up the good work.
This story has a very promising start. Most people can relate to the struggles of being a teen in grade school. I also like the older sibling angle. it give s the main character depth and lets the reader connect with them on a personal level.
So Ive read like 1 chapter or so, and its pretty good. Well better than how I would write anyway but it has a lot of potentional but the character design kinda lacked.
This is an interesting story. So far, the characters are intriguing The writing needs work (the switching from the first person narrative to third person and back can be a bit confusing sometimes) but the story so far is worth reading. Welldone Author.
The synposis and characters were really on point, and they give to the story this flavor that pushes this story further. It's very good, and being there's only 4 chapters, things are soon to happen.
It is a very intriguing story. I was hooked from the synopsis.I already love Kai.The descriptions are written very nicely. looking forward to more updates. you just need to work a little bit on your english.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
It is an interesting story with very mysterious elements, much isn't revealed yet but I am eager to find out more. The 'English' needs a little work.
I read it all and found it interesting. I can already tell that this will be a good story. I like Kai and feel bad that he gets beaten up. Keep up the good work.
Hello author! I really like the backstory of the characters. And I especially like Kai. I think there could be some improvements in the writing style but its still amazing!
Really good plot and characters are well designed. The writing style could be worked on a little, with the change in person but this book has a lot of potential. Good luck author and keep working hard. You've got a great story here.
Interesting story. The characters are good and there is a great plot. Grammar is generally good, but the first chapter changing from third person to first was a little confusing. Otherwise, good work author
the beginning is quite good and entertaining, it has good characters, it has a good backstory that gets you into the story.[img=recomendar][img=recomendar]
I am already in love with Kai & Maka and I can't wait for more. I love it that you've given the characters personality. Hands up, the story is engaging and builds anticipation. Now going to chapter 2, adding this to my library
The title itself arouses curiosity in the mind of the reader. This already tells us that something action packed is in store. Can't wait to have more from you author!
Wonderful story, I like the mystery of it all, it doesn't give away the plot too much which keeps you interested. Cannot wait to find out if his trusted friend is that trustworthy because I am getting bad vibes already.
Reveal SpoilerGreat story, can't wait to read the rest of the book. Love the characters and i love how you discribe them. The story really drags you in and can play on your emotions.
I have read up till Chap 25 and this is my thrid review for this book. It's a really good read. Great storytelling so far. The mystery just keeps pilling up in the story, there were unexpected twists and turns which draws you in and keeps you contiuning reading. What can I say, this is a MUST read, so give this book/story a chance. It worth's the read. Great job author!