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This fic is about as average as it can be. Nothing stands out. The story and MC are about as bland as can be. MC's interaction with the world is almost pointless. Might as well make up an original world. It's not bad but it's not good either and there are too many other novels that are more interesting.
It's ok if you don't have anything else to read, the story is readable and has a nice pace. However, sometimes the characters feel too two-dimensional. The MC just goes somewhere, tells everybody his intentions and everybody just trusts him for some reason. The characters in general don't feel like they have any depth, any hidden intentions or personality outside of their interactions with the MC. Also, there are some problems with the connector throughout the story. This affects the flow of the story.
it was good at first but later its so frustrating to read. author is trying so hard to ignore and so many Hypocrisy
extremely good character development , plot and relationship development between characters one of my personal favourite fanfic i really hope author post a lot and continues it
Más más más más mas más más más más más más más más más .as más más más más más más más más más ma sm qsm amo a m as más más más más m as m as m as m as mm qsm damas más más más más más más masm adm más más más mas
all i want to say is that the mc is one of the worst ones out there and that all those people who gave this "thing" five stars are either fake or have problems
Everything is great, but I find it strange that rogue and Jack started dating when you said he was interested in Natasha? so is this harem where there is Rogue, Jack and Natasha in relationships?
good writing quality. story development is also good but there are some plot mistakes, like for example sinister six were captured and were imprisoned in magic prison but after few chapters there were some member of sinister six loose on the street and dr octopus also killed Gwen's father. I am not sure if author explained on how sinister six got free from magic prison as I listen to the book while working so it could be possible that somehow they were set free but to me it does not make any sense as none sinister six can do magic so how they escaped. author has romance tag but I havens seen any romance since ch 50 so far. there was one date with Natasha but after that author have not made any progress. so until ch 50 I liked the novel somewhat but it was getting boring personally for me as the MC is somewhat beta MC and is not telling anyone that he knows something about future(can say that he can somewhat know little future to avoide other heros suspicion) but no our MC doesn't do that and always behaves as sidekick of the other heros. so all of this is my opinion so Atleast give this fanfic some try as some of other readers might like it. Good luck to the author.
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Idea was nice but neither the MC nor the author are mature or smart enough. The pricing in system is wonky and author and MC make bad decisions and seemed to believe they are right. I was thinking that maybe author is smart and deliberately giving MC worse powers but I was overthinking. This book is limited by author's wisdom. Good try for a young teen author but it's not good enough for veteran readers.
it's not bad, but dude you should go over the interactions and the way you explain some things.. it reads like one of those weird Chinese novels you check out at like 3 at night while watching a movie bored as heck. it's cringe and just.. ehhh
writing quality 3 stars story development 4 stars character design 4stars updating stability 4stars world background 3 stars... :)
Kinda disappointed mc ended being a simp gave a lot of benefits,improved her power, immune to mind control, eliminets her side affects and she breaks up when she has plane to break up whit him months ago but waited for him tu cure her and then the next day she just wants to go back and she ask mc to liberate mystic and mc agrees what a simp
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Neutral and truthful opinion here The MC is not a good planner, he gets powers in an alley and shines so a camera or the like sees him and baw! here he is on weird lists, SHIELDRA and others where the public as improved, in short this is the first mistake, he should have asked the system if he had a house before buying anything , His first power purchase is insane, instead of setting up a gym in his second bedroom, he pays a membership or everyone sees the freak guy who's gaining momentum very quickly but don't panic, he has some god behind him that people don't talk about 🙄. The system is so unlimited that he doesn't even have a shop, he can buy anything he can think of and above all he promises him that he won't let him die, which removes all stakes when you know that you are immortal in a sense of the word.
The only problem is that the story seems kind of bland… like maybe it’s just how the story is written.
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Author, I don't know how you'll be taking this, but i'ma say it the way I see it. This fanfic is way too centered around the MC, Jack. Everything goes his way, and nothing ever goes awry. It's weird. Very weird. Like God just created a world for him as his play ground or something. it lacks emotions, thrill, schemes and stuff like that that usually accompanies Marvel Universe. Also, characters like Tony, Peter, Natasha, In fact all the characters are just too trusting. Like they can't ever find a fault in Jack. That's weird on so many levels. Even the Year is weird. Keep up your good work though, this ain't for me
I'll say it here before you get annoying me, if you don't like my work just don't read it, it's a good fanfic with an MC that isn't that different at the beginning of any hero that reincarnates, and the pace is slow and there are no fights at all chapters. If you have constructive criticism to give, or a review to warn other readers not to waste their time reading, you can, but I will delete any Review that is only 1 star because I know that my work is not complete garbage to have this evaluation. You can write a bad review and give it 3 stars, you can write a bad review and give it 2 stars, if I see that it makes sense, I won't delete it. But I'm going to delete all 1 stars, even one that has a book as an explanation because I know that there are a lot of stupid people on Webnovel who just want to harm the writers and lower the stars, the webnovel knows that and that's why it created this author mechanism delete reviews.
The word trust is used too often and sometimes it reads a bit like a script but other than that I've really come to enjoy this Fic. The MC seeks power but isn't willing to screw others for it which is a plus and he genuinely seems to form a warm caring bonds with the other heroes.
I really liked this fanfic, the rhythm is a little slow, but I prefer it that way than stories where everything happens without a break
it had potential, but unfortunately the author made one of those dumb protagonists who think with muscle, seriously the guy could choose any starting power but chose physical strength just because he couldn't be as fast as the flash hahaha, nothing different, don't even waste your time here my friend, that the beginning already says a lot about how this story will be.
this is by far the best fanfic for marvel I have read till now . I like how the mc is growing to be so OP as well his interactions with other character can't wait for him to go to DC
Don't know why, it's so hard to continue reading this novel, first 10 chaps. some inconstancies, weird wording/translation, glaring plotholes. feels like author really doesn't care if the novel turned out good or not. first impression matters, not everyone want to continue reading in hoping it gets better latter. should have fix/rewrite it, i hope
The writing style is really monotone and doesnt really flow well, I understand english isnt your First language but it still affects your story. You should try to make your parag raphs flow better, rn its a lot of jack did this jack did that it gets repetitive and makes it hard to immerse yourself in the story
Not a proper review since I haven't actually read it yet, just a placeholder, so that any kind soul can tell me who the MC ends up with and if it ends up being harem or not. I like classifying the characters as "friends" or "love interests" when I read, so that I don't get too attached to a female character that won't end up with the MC (I know it is strange, but it's a habit I picked up after reading ISSTH and DE). Sorry about this author-san, since it's basically me saying that I won't read until I know, but pls don't yeet this.
This is a very developed and well thought out story takes a different spin on the marvel thing. Time lines all messed up leaving the mc wondering what canon knowledge is useful. I love this story
great story and I'm really happy with so many chapters . great power development too would recommend 10/10 . also , we want wandaaaaaaaaa......
Start was very rocky like different personality of heros etc but its getting better around 30 chapters......👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Hi everyone, this is the fake lion the author of this novel, this novel may have problems with grammar because English is not my first language, but it is a story that I will write with great affection, it is a Marvel and DC fan fiction, but the beginning is only in the Marvel universe, I hope you like it and read a few chapters to see if it's good.
This fic is about as average as it can be. Nothing stands out. The story and MC are about as bland as can be. MC's interaction with the world is almost pointless. Might as well make up an original world. It's not bad but it's not good either and there are too many other novels that are more interesting.
It's ok if you don't have anything else to read, the story is readable and has a nice pace. However, sometimes the characters feel too two-dimensional. The MC just goes somewhere, tells everybody his intentions and everybody just trusts him for some reason. The characters in general don't feel like they have any depth, any hidden intentions or personality outside of their interactions with the MC. Also, there are some problems with the connector throughout the story. This affects the flow of the story.
it was good at first but later its so frustrating to read. author is trying so hard to ignore and so many Hypocrisy
extremely good character development , plot and relationship development between characters one of my personal favourite fanfic i really hope author post a lot and continues it
Más más más más mas más más más más más más más más más .as más más más más más más más más más ma sm qsm amo a m as más más más más m as m as m as m as mm qsm damas más más más más más más masm adm más más más mas
all i want to say is that the mc is one of the worst ones out there and that all those people who gave this "thing" five stars are either fake or have problems
Everything is great, but I find it strange that rogue and Jack started dating when you said he was interested in Natasha? so is this harem where there is Rogue, Jack and Natasha in relationships?
good writing quality. story development is also good but there are some plot mistakes, like for example sinister six were captured and were imprisoned in magic prison but after few chapters there were some member of sinister six loose on the street and dr octopus also killed Gwen's father. I am not sure if author explained on how sinister six got free from magic prison as I listen to the book while working so it could be possible that somehow they were set free but to me it does not make any sense as none sinister six can do magic so how they escaped. author has romance tag but I havens seen any romance since ch 50 so far. there was one date with Natasha but after that author have not made any progress. so until ch 50 I liked the novel somewhat but it was getting boring personally for me as the MC is somewhat beta MC and is not telling anyone that he knows something about future(can say that he can somewhat know little future to avoide other heros suspicion) but no our MC doesn't do that and always behaves as sidekick of the other heros. so all of this is my opinion so Atleast give this fanfic some try as some of other readers might like it. Good luck to the author.
Reveal Spoiler Idea was nice but neither the MC nor the author are mature or smart enough. The pricing in system is wonky and author and MC make bad decisions and seemed to believe they are right. I was thinking that maybe author is smart and deliberately giving MC worse powers but I was overthinking. This book is limited by author's wisdom. Good try for a young teen author but it's not good enough for veteran readers.
it's not bad, but dude you should go over the interactions and the way you explain some things.. it reads like one of those weird Chinese novels you check out at like 3 at night while watching a movie bored as heck. it's cringe and just.. ehhh
writing quality 3 stars story development 4 stars character design 4stars updating stability 4stars world background 3 stars... :)
Kinda disappointed mc ended being a simp gave a lot of benefits,improved her power, immune to mind control, eliminets her side affects and she breaks up when she has plane to break up whit him months ago but waited for him tu cure her and then the next day she just wants to go back and she ask mc to liberate mystic and mc agrees what a simp
Reveal Spoiler Neutral and truthful opinion here The MC is not a good planner, he gets powers in an alley and shines so a camera or the like sees him and baw! here he is on weird lists, SHIELDRA and others where the public as improved, in short this is the first mistake, he should have asked the system if he had a house before buying anything , His first power purchase is insane, instead of setting up a gym in his second bedroom, he pays a membership or everyone sees the freak guy who's gaining momentum very quickly but don't panic, he has some god behind him that people don't talk about 🙄. The system is so unlimited that he doesn't even have a shop, he can buy anything he can think of and above all he promises him that he won't let him die, which removes all stakes when you know that you are immortal in a sense of the word.
The only problem is that the story seems kind of bland… like maybe it’s just how the story is written.
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Author, I don't know how you'll be taking this, but i'ma say it the way I see it. This fanfic is way too centered around the MC, Jack. Everything goes his way, and nothing ever goes awry. It's weird. Very weird. Like God just created a world for him as his play ground or something. it lacks emotions, thrill, schemes and stuff like that that usually accompanies Marvel Universe. Also, characters like Tony, Peter, Natasha, In fact all the characters are just too trusting. Like they can't ever find a fault in Jack. That's weird on so many levels. Even the Year is weird. Keep up your good work though, this ain't for me
I'll say it here before you get annoying me, if you don't like my work just don't read it, it's a good fanfic with an MC that isn't that different at the beginning of any hero that reincarnates, and the pace is slow and there are no fights at all chapters. If you have constructive criticism to give, or a review to warn other readers not to waste their time reading, you can, but I will delete any Review that is only 1 star because I know that my work is not complete garbage to have this evaluation. You can write a bad review and give it 3 stars, you can write a bad review and give it 2 stars, if I see that it makes sense, I won't delete it. But I'm going to delete all 1 stars, even one that has a book as an explanation because I know that there are a lot of stupid people on Webnovel who just want to harm the writers and lower the stars, the webnovel knows that and that's why it created this author mechanism delete reviews.
The word trust is used too often and sometimes it reads a bit like a script but other than that I've really come to enjoy this Fic. The MC seeks power but isn't willing to screw others for it which is a plus and he genuinely seems to form a warm caring bonds with the other heroes.
I really liked this fanfic, the rhythm is a little slow, but I prefer it that way than stories where everything happens without a break
it had potential, but unfortunately the author made one of those dumb protagonists who think with muscle, seriously the guy could choose any starting power but chose physical strength just because he couldn't be as fast as the flash hahaha, nothing different, don't even waste your time here my friend, that the beginning already says a lot about how this story will be.
this is by far the best fanfic for marvel I have read till now . I like how the mc is growing to be so OP as well his interactions with other character can't wait for him to go to DC
Don't know why, it's so hard to continue reading this novel, first 10 chaps. some inconstancies, weird wording/translation, glaring plotholes. feels like author really doesn't care if the novel turned out good or not. first impression matters, not everyone want to continue reading in hoping it gets better latter. should have fix/rewrite it, i hope
The writing style is really monotone and doesnt really flow well, I understand english isnt your First language but it still affects your story. You should try to make your parag raphs flow better, rn its a lot of jack did this jack did that it gets repetitive and makes it hard to immerse yourself in the story
Not a proper review since I haven't actually read it yet, just a placeholder, so that any kind soul can tell me who the MC ends up with and if it ends up being harem or not. I like classifying the characters as "friends" or "love interests" when I read, so that I don't get too attached to a female character that won't end up with the MC (I know it is strange, but it's a habit I picked up after reading ISSTH and DE). Sorry about this author-san, since it's basically me saying that I won't read until I know, but pls don't yeet this.
This is a very developed and well thought out story takes a different spin on the marvel thing. Time lines all messed up leaving the mc wondering what canon knowledge is useful. I love this story
great story and I'm really happy with so many chapters . great power development too would recommend 10/10 . also , we want wandaaaaaaaaa......
Start was very rocky like different personality of heros etc but its getting better around 30 chapters......👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Hi everyone, this is the fake lion the author of this novel, this novel may have problems with grammar because English is not my first language, but it is a story that I will write with great affection, it is a Marvel and DC fan fiction, but the beginning is only in the Marvel universe, I hope you like it and read a few chapters to see if it's good.