Tyrant system in one piece

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DavidTheDemon

It's chinese but pretty well made names are a bit of a problem, but there are worse stories on Webnovel

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Daddy_strikes_

it's a good book for one piece fans. the mc is a bit cruel sometimes for his enemies as can be seen from his nickname in the novel but all in all it's a great fanfic.

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Lackada1sical

Evaluation: Great Potential. WQ: MTL translation, if and only if copyright'er is & was able to proof read and edit most grammatical errors the this would be a fabulous fanfic of OP-verse. Tons of gramm errors that greatly affect MC & story progression. 2/5 SD: With an average to fast pace development without affecting the story & MC progression. If you could only fix the gramm errors this would be a great fanfic. 3/5 CD: MC is a chaotic-neutral type of guy which Is apt to the OP-verse. Yes there is a system but it is not that influential to the story progression as MC itself utilize his foreknowledge but not to the extent that will greatly affect the cannon plot which in turn lessen plot holes & avoid OP-verse schemes. 5/5 US: Author-san is up to date when it comes to the availability of the updates, downside is that it all boils down if you can stand up to MTL translation. 3/5 WB: OP-verse is being utilize as well as the unexplored area so as the adventure is spontaneous which is a plus. 4/5 Don't be discouraged by the reviews but take it as a challenge to do better. Kudos to author-san and well wishes! xD

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DaoisteGdTpC

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Thanatos18

What is the name in chinese or mtl?

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Zikiziki

For one grammar is terrible and naming consistency is a disaster. Other than that well. It's a solid One Piece fanfic with strong MC and crew/kingdom building. But the problem is, as someone who read lots of One Piece fanfics, the plot development in this FF bores me. Especially since this is OP MC fanfic where MC is very unlikely to ever suffer a loss. So it's really just MC flexing on za warldo and that's all the story is about. (Though I will give some credit to opening chapters which were more on unique side. Or at the very least I haven't quite read this type of start yet.)

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FF_AIM_BOT

one of the best fanfic .like to have more chapters author atleast 2 chps a day hopes that the author will not drop the fanfic. the character design world background everything is good.

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TianXia

although this have already been uploaded here in webnovel. but I think the grammar is a bit better than the other one. the other one is name become a tyrant after fruit awaken, the grammar is pretty much trash.

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Guaca

I enjoyed the ride to finish line I love this fanfic may even reread this fanfic if there aren’t more good one piece fanfics that have been finished.

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necromancer5h_1356

Read till Chapter 183 one of the best fanfic novel of one piece that I read where Main Character is intelligent and plans stuff also not following the storyline or being a guardian of Luffy and other has his own agenda keep making nice novels like this

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mercaze

---------------------------really looking forward to new chapters( google translate)--------------------------------------------------------------------------

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Devine_Devil

The story was great, but for some reason I always felt bored after reading more than 5 chapters a day. But over all a great story. It would have twice as better if the MC have some cool flag, other than that stup!d unicorn gay flag.

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Bob_Uchiha_XD

Buena novela. Sin embargo, no hay protagonistas femininas, eso no es malo pero hubiera sido interesante. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Oleg_Nikitin

Мне очень понравилось, правда хотелось бы, чтоб история развивалась не столь стремительно. Но я не автор.) Спасибо за ваше творчество и успехов по жизни.

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Servydaos

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nonexistent_re

Some reading difficulties but not as bad as other translations. Over all a good read.

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Achraf2000

Good novel deserve to read it. Good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good

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Muta_Ali

It’ been an amaz journey thanks for all the hard work.ings

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LeonardoDiCaprio1

well it's a nice book [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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