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не возможно нормально читать!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Есть ссылка на оригинал?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? ?
This is Mtl ,and even if you ignore the almost unreadable paragraphs the charcter act like npc with zero personality
This is a translation dont let them give no credit. Hejejehehehrhrhrjrhrrhhrurururiririririririrurjrjrjrjrurururrueuyeyeyeueueueueurur Kekroeieirieiejdiddididurururirurururueueueyeyey
This is a difficult read, the first chapter alone has so many jump cuts, incorrect terminology, and disjointed flow, that it feels that it was written by three people at the same and that all hate each other.
I know this is a translation but it is MANY times worse then other translations that I have read. Grammar inconsistencies, terminology mistakes, and no editing after translation to fix common translation errors
не возможно нормально читать!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Есть ссылка на оригинал?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? ?
This is Mtl ,and even if you ignore the almost unreadable paragraphs the charcter act like npc with zero personality
This is a translation dont let them give no credit. Hejejehehehrhrhrjrhrrhhrurururiririririririrurjrjrjrjrurururrueuyeyeyeueueueueurur Kekroeieirieiejdiddididurururirurururueueueyeyey
This is a difficult read, the first chapter alone has so many jump cuts, incorrect terminology, and disjointed flow, that it feels that it was written by three people at the same and that all hate each other.
I know this is a translation but it is MANY times worse then other translations that I have read. Grammar inconsistencies, terminology mistakes, and no editing after translation to fix common translation errors