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I'm really enjoying this story morning it does have adult content but it doesn't Focus only on that there is a story behind it and there are other things going on author jumped through time a little bit at one point and it made it a bit hard to follow but since then it's been in chronological order which might just be a personal issue I have trouble following ones that jump around a lot so maybe that's my issue more than anyone else I think his character design is good but I think it could be better it needs to be fleshed out a little bit more in some places main character seems to be okay for the most part and some of the other characters he didn't spend enough time with so maybe that's part of the issue as well I think he'll be going back to them eventually the main character will see them again and maybe we'll get more information then but there's a lot of questions left which isn't a bad thing if you're trying to make things a mystery but it's something that frustrates me that's all the world seems interesting I'm hoping he's going to start learning more about the world cuz it seems like there's levels to the world and he's been put into a lower one now but I'm not sure on how that works yet hasn't been touched on very much I'm hoping now that he's at the school I know he's a Slave but I'm hoping he will learn more now that he has access to the library and so on I'm looking forward to the story continuing and while I wish it updated more it is very stable like it's pretty consistent with how much it updates so it's not a surprise when something comes out it's just it's a good story so I kind of wish more would come out sooner but I feel that way about pretty much every story I like so
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Was reading omnistore system and caught up then decided to read your other books then picked this up and really liked it and was wondering whether you still have plans of continuing or you'll be focusing on the others
It's sad to see these novels, seeing their reviews, both good and bad, everything seemed lively and now... there's nothing left. And not only in this novel, many become abandoned works.
War is a vicious cycle, but it will continue to exist as long as there are intelligent creatures, you just need to make as much use of it as possible
The stupidity of the mc literally made me do a silent scream I literally shed tears reading this mans stupidity he was happy to be sold as a slave out of nowhere so unrealistic
Empezó bien la novela, sin embargo de un momento a otro empeora todo, en primera todas son mujeres casadas o al menos la mayoría de las que sale en la historia, luego el MC tiene un fetiche asqueroso respecto a las axilas, está bien decir que te gusta algo así pero el autor lo exagera mostrando a cada rato una escena con axilas, simplente ésto es algo que empezó bien para después empeorar, pero aún así gracias por la lectura
IT was kinda good until chapter 60 and up the mc actually acts like 10 year old he has no goal or any type of intellect or experience of a 30 year old when he attends the dukes party its so much going on in the background i dont even know whats happening theirs like 5 different groups with different goals and agendas the mc is just getting pushed around with nothing on his mind but woman that's the only thing he does to get back at them not oh so you forced me into a dinner im gonna get your wife someday oh you punched me well im gonna take your wife we find out he has a lot of talent and magic but he hasn't trained since then he only did it for a mission once and that's it it's so much happening and his face and its like he's ignoring it i see where the plot can go and it has potential but the mc is just too stupid and immature
I just don't like it from him being commener from prine before that story was awesome
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I am surprised how good this is even when the MC can be a little creeper so time to time.
Its good novel But still grammatical errors occurred often. Mc personality is a downer.
10/10 very good a lot of lemon high quality writing hot characters and a varietys of personalities and the lemon scenes are very hot and sexy
This ongoing WebNovel is quickly becoming one of my favorites. The author's world-building is so intricate and the characters are so complex that I'm constantly fascinated by their stories. The plot twists and turns are so unexpected that I never know what's going to happen next. I highly recommend this WebNovel to anyone who loves a good ongoing read!
alright, your book is perfect. Keep going the way you're going, and in time, you can be among the top novels. don't stop you, hear, keep writing.
Hello guys if you like novels go read douluo: douluo with multiverse Villain Chat Group and douluo: douluo different God
A good novel bit fast but overall it's good to read, and has a lot of cultural scenes which is also the main point for reading it...............
I really enjoyed reading this novel. I highly recommend it to the people who enjoy reading this novel to people who like to read system, reincarnation harem novels
Good start and quick lemons but mc personality is sometime a little bad Worth trying it out 👍
I hope you all enjoying it as much as I enjoying writing it! Don't forget to comment and rate! I love feedback and my reader's reactions.
I'm really enjoying this story morning it does have adult content but it doesn't Focus only on that there is a story behind it and there are other things going on author jumped through time a little bit at one point and it made it a bit hard to follow but since then it's been in chronological order which might just be a personal issue I have trouble following ones that jump around a lot so maybe that's my issue more than anyone else I think his character design is good but I think it could be better it needs to be fleshed out a little bit more in some places main character seems to be okay for the most part and some of the other characters he didn't spend enough time with so maybe that's part of the issue as well I think he'll be going back to them eventually the main character will see them again and maybe we'll get more information then but there's a lot of questions left which isn't a bad thing if you're trying to make things a mystery but it's something that frustrates me that's all the world seems interesting I'm hoping he's going to start learning more about the world cuz it seems like there's levels to the world and he's been put into a lower one now but I'm not sure on how that works yet hasn't been touched on very much I'm hoping now that he's at the school I know he's a Slave but I'm hoping he will learn more now that he has access to the library and so on I'm looking forward to the story continuing and while I wish it updated more it is very stable like it's pretty consistent with how much it updates so it's not a surprise when something comes out it's just it's a good story so I kind of wish more would come out sooner but I feel that way about pretty much every story I like so
Reveal Spoiler Was reading omnistore system and caught up then decided to read your other books then picked this up and really liked it and was wondering whether you still have plans of continuing or you'll be focusing on the others
It's sad to see these novels, seeing their reviews, both good and bad, everything seemed lively and now... there's nothing left. And not only in this novel, many become abandoned works.
War is a vicious cycle, but it will continue to exist as long as there are intelligent creatures, you just need to make as much use of it as possible
The stupidity of the mc literally made me do a silent scream I literally shed tears reading this mans stupidity he was happy to be sold as a slave out of nowhere so unrealistic
Empezó bien la novela, sin embargo de un momento a otro empeora todo, en primera todas son mujeres casadas o al menos la mayoría de las que sale en la historia, luego el MC tiene un fetiche asqueroso respecto a las axilas, está bien decir que te gusta algo así pero el autor lo exagera mostrando a cada rato una escena con axilas, simplente ésto es algo que empezó bien para después empeorar, pero aún así gracias por la lectura
IT was kinda good until chapter 60 and up the mc actually acts like 10 year old he has no goal or any type of intellect or experience of a 30 year old when he attends the dukes party its so much going on in the background i dont even know whats happening theirs like 5 different groups with different goals and agendas the mc is just getting pushed around with nothing on his mind but woman that's the only thing he does to get back at them not oh so you forced me into a dinner im gonna get your wife someday oh you punched me well im gonna take your wife we find out he has a lot of talent and magic but he hasn't trained since then he only did it for a mission once and that's it it's so much happening and his face and its like he's ignoring it i see where the plot can go and it has potential but the mc is just too stupid and immature
I just don't like it from him being commener from prine before that story was awesome
Reveal Spoiler I am surprised how good this is even when the MC can be a little creeper so time to time.
Its good novel But still grammatical errors occurred often. Mc personality is a downer.
10/10 very good a lot of lemon high quality writing hot characters and a varietys of personalities and the lemon scenes are very hot and sexy
This ongoing WebNovel is quickly becoming one of my favorites. The author's world-building is so intricate and the characters are so complex that I'm constantly fascinated by their stories. The plot twists and turns are so unexpected that I never know what's going to happen next. I highly recommend this WebNovel to anyone who loves a good ongoing read!
alright, your book is perfect. Keep going the way you're going, and in time, you can be among the top novels. don't stop you, hear, keep writing.
Hello guys if you like novels go read douluo: douluo with multiverse Villain Chat Group and douluo: douluo different God
A good novel bit fast but overall it's good to read, and has a lot of cultural scenes which is also the main point for reading it...............
I really enjoyed reading this novel. I highly recommend it to the people who enjoy reading this novel to people who like to read system, reincarnation harem novels
Good start and quick lemons but mc personality is sometime a little bad Worth trying it out 👍
I hope you all enjoying it as much as I enjoying writing it! Don't forget to comment and rate! I love feedback and my reader's reactions.