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Nice novel. It's cliche, but I'm not complaining at all.😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉
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Not immersive, girls have the same personality when talking. To much bluntness when talking abou segs, expecially to someone mc just met. Not much of a challenge when getting girls as they all want a piece of mc even when they first saw him. Even a its a 999... yrs old Vgin will gladly open her cat for mc when they first met. lol Overall; not immersive, poor writing, cringe dialogue, a ‘somewhat’ stupid/ignorant mc, no thrill/wish fulfillment and a good story, just need a reread and editing.
Review at ch 69 The best part of this novel is the segs scenes, which are really hot and well written Very descriptive The writing is good but it's easy to see that the author doesn't have much experience with World building and character design It's more like a wish fullfilmemt The main women have a similar design with no unique character... It's more like they are a better fyc.k compared to other women Nothing special There is a sob story with each FMC and the MC gets 'over' emotional Basically it's not relatable All the villains and mobs are horni and wants to Fyc.k the FMC Overall. .. This can't be considered as a novel but a segs story Don't get me wrong, I'm not against it but I love it @Author you need to give the characters more depth and the females need to have more personality This would improve the quality of this work by a lot
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Honestly I have only read 7 chapters and I think I sorta understand what the author is tryna achieve and I love it but so far I barely know anything about this world, the mc’s background in this new world, the cultivation system, the system ( you sad little to nothing about the system especially after the system gave him the starter pack— exactly what did he get from the starter pack and how did he get over 150k DP when he barely unlocked the system) If the author can improve this section and and other part of the story the quality of this novel will increase dramatically🙂🙂
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Good the mc is not hypocrite right now as he just being true like his old life being shameless and not trying to trick to get in the robes
Great book , hope author continues with it , the novel is very interesting and has a good introduction for characters. As I am a new author , I can learn from others and their different writing styles which is very good by the way
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I wish the author had mentioned the background of the world, such as which planet it is in or any continent and the cities in it. And also the realms of cultivation, because the writer mentioned 4 or 5 realms until Chapter 80
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Nice novel. It's cliche, but I'm not complaining at all.😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉
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Not immersive, girls have the same personality when talking. To much bluntness when talking abou segs, expecially to someone mc just met. Not much of a challenge when getting girls as they all want a piece of mc even when they first saw him. Even a its a 999... yrs old Vgin will gladly open her cat for mc when they first met. lol Overall; not immersive, poor writing, cringe dialogue, a ‘somewhat’ stupid/ignorant mc, no thrill/wish fulfillment and a good story, just need a reread and editing.
Review at ch 69 The best part of this novel is the segs scenes, which are really hot and well written Very descriptive The writing is good but it's easy to see that the author doesn't have much experience with World building and character design It's more like a wish fullfilmemt The main women have a similar design with no unique character... It's more like they are a better fyc.k compared to other women Nothing special There is a sob story with each FMC and the MC gets 'over' emotional Basically it's not relatable All the villains and mobs are horni and wants to Fyc.k the FMC Overall. .. This can't be considered as a novel but a segs story Don't get me wrong, I'm not against it but I love it @Author you need to give the characters more depth and the females need to have more personality This would improve the quality of this work by a lot
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Honestly I have only read 7 chapters and I think I sorta understand what the author is tryna achieve and I love it but so far I barely know anything about this world, the mc’s background in this new world, the cultivation system, the system ( you sad little to nothing about the system especially after the system gave him the starter pack— exactly what did he get from the starter pack and how did he get over 150k DP when he barely unlocked the system) If the author can improve this section and and other part of the story the quality of this novel will increase dramatically🙂🙂
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Good the mc is not hypocrite right now as he just being true like his old life being shameless and not trying to trick to get in the robes
Great book , hope author continues with it , the novel is very interesting and has a good introduction for characters. As I am a new author , I can learn from others and their different writing styles which is very good by the way
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I wish the author had mentioned the background of the world, such as which planet it is in or any continent and the cities in it. And also the realms of cultivation, because the writer mentioned 4 or 5 realms until Chapter 80