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Very interesting concept and it was OKish to read up till chapter 20ish but the more i go the more the chapters become fillers. The MC can evolve so many things but doesn't. I dnt know what he is waiting for. He can continuously evolve living things and non living things but dnt know why he doesn't. The first part of the novel was going somewhat good with the prospect of kingdom building but around 60 ish chapters it become adventure type novel. Sometimes while reading this it feels like author have dementia and is continuously forgetting that the MC have Evolve skill. This skill should be used in all the chapters but its rarely shown. Also the romance is kind of forces in my opinion. The pacing of the story is way to fast and most of the chapters are filled with fillers. For example when MC evolves any living thing it will come with a chapter or 2 with it. Even if u skip those chapters u will not feel like you missed anything. Just try it and tell me.
I liked the story or the concept of it with the evolution and such. But there is a jaring issue with the tier and leveling system that throws of the suthor because it goes against all known concepts of levels go up on getting stronger and not down. The author uses a tier system from 9 to 1 from strong to weak. The minor strength level increases are called level and each tier has 9 levels from 9 to 1 from strong to weak. but the author is always mixing up the level from starting from 1 and rising and then in the middle of the story he changes back in going down in level to strengthen the chars. He is getting confused because normally levels go up not down. This mistake is so immersion breaking that sadly if this continues to happen i might drop out of this story. Please rewrite and fix that level tier issue. Maybe dont separate tier and level only with a /. Give both if them there own line of text and let tier go down and level go up so that you dont get confused in writing
good idea but because so quickly you have skipped so many things that could give a good base to your novel and the construction of the world and the characters are empty give him some answer. The blind girl who spent not a day in the past and is already in the protagonist's bed and there are many things that you skip if you explain, she is a demigod and her druids, there is no introduction and nothing works, I leave it, you have too many weak points but I liked the idea but the execution leaves much to be desired. (translator)
The MC is so dumb, he can evolve so many things with no limitation but he didnt do it, rather he wait for strong opponent. He has so many subordinate but he only evolve her harem, what a dimb MC
hard to read due lots of pov swith kinda confusing and hard to enjoy, the books has potential but the pov swith kiling it
So far it seems good I’m at chapter 28, the only problem I see right know is that it keeps changing perspectives and it’s happening to often
I'mma be real you, so far (chapter21) besides the quick pacing you're doing alright my biggest complaint would be the use of present tense, it just reads bad example in chapter 20 "I reach out my hand to Tama and she starts* sending her aether into my pathways." ok but "I reach out my hand to Tama and she started* sending her aether into my pathways." just reads better in my opinion another in chapter 21 "Instead of what I was expecting the spear instead bounces* off the board hide." it's ok but "Instead of what I was expecting the spear instead bounced* off the board hide."
I was first captivated by it but it became the typical Chinese novel where after some days of the game a mysterious girl will come and if he doesn't take her as his sister she became his wife or subordinate. I was so happy about his talent but now I already have an idea about what's going to happen so will be dropping .
Shameless author here to leave myself a five star review and tell you guys that I am going to be updating 2 chapter of about 1000 to 1500 words a day unless something unexpected happens.
as someone who listens to this more than reads it, it's annoying when he doesn't specify who's pov it is at any given time... also, the mc is annoying in the fact that he lets his subordinates walk all over him all the time!
Very interesting concept and it was OKish to read up till chapter 20ish but the more i go the more the chapters become fillers. The MC can evolve so many things but doesn't. I dnt know what he is waiting for. He can continuously evolve living things and non living things but dnt know why he doesn't. The first part of the novel was going somewhat good with the prospect of kingdom building but around 60 ish chapters it become adventure type novel. Sometimes while reading this it feels like author have dementia and is continuously forgetting that the MC have Evolve skill. This skill should be used in all the chapters but its rarely shown. Also the romance is kind of forces in my opinion. The pacing of the story is way to fast and most of the chapters are filled with fillers. For example when MC evolves any living thing it will come with a chapter or 2 with it. Even if u skip those chapters u will not feel like you missed anything. Just try it and tell me.
I liked the story or the concept of it with the evolution and such. But there is a jaring issue with the tier and leveling system that throws of the suthor because it goes against all known concepts of levels go up on getting stronger and not down. The author uses a tier system from 9 to 1 from strong to weak. The minor strength level increases are called level and each tier has 9 levels from 9 to 1 from strong to weak. but the author is always mixing up the level from starting from 1 and rising and then in the middle of the story he changes back in going down in level to strengthen the chars. He is getting confused because normally levels go up not down. This mistake is so immersion breaking that sadly if this continues to happen i might drop out of this story. Please rewrite and fix that level tier issue. Maybe dont separate tier and level only with a /. Give both if them there own line of text and let tier go down and level go up so that you dont get confused in writing
good idea but because so quickly you have skipped so many things that could give a good base to your novel and the construction of the world and the characters are empty give him some answer. The blind girl who spent not a day in the past and is already in the protagonist's bed and there are many things that you skip if you explain, she is a demigod and her druids, there is no introduction and nothing works, I leave it, you have too many weak points but I liked the idea but the execution leaves much to be desired. (translator)
The MC is so dumb, he can evolve so many things with no limitation but he didnt do it, rather he wait for strong opponent. He has so many subordinate but he only evolve her harem, what a dimb MC
hard to read due lots of pov swith kinda confusing and hard to enjoy, the books has potential but the pov swith kiling it
So far it seems good I’m at chapter 28, the only problem I see right know is that it keeps changing perspectives and it’s happening to often
I'mma be real you, so far (chapter21) besides the quick pacing you're doing alright my biggest complaint would be the use of present tense, it just reads bad example in chapter 20 "I reach out my hand to Tama and she starts* sending her aether into my pathways." ok but "I reach out my hand to Tama and she started* sending her aether into my pathways." just reads better in my opinion another in chapter 21 "Instead of what I was expecting the spear instead bounces* off the board hide." it's ok but "Instead of what I was expecting the spear instead bounced* off the board hide."
I was first captivated by it but it became the typical Chinese novel where after some days of the game a mysterious girl will come and if he doesn't take her as his sister she became his wife or subordinate. I was so happy about his talent but now I already have an idea about what's going to happen so will be dropping .
Shameless author here to leave myself a five star review and tell you guys that I am going to be updating 2 chapter of about 1000 to 1500 words a day unless something unexpected happens.
as someone who listens to this more than reads it, it's annoying when he doesn't specify who's pov it is at any given time... also, the mc is annoying in the fact that he lets his subordinates walk all over him all the time!