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first few chapter are lovely and long and wonderfully well typed up at least i think so the story so far up tp chapter 10 is well detailed
I am absolutely loving the story. all of the characters feel real and fully-fledged people. not just cardboard stand ins. I normally don't like multiple pov. but it is really well done in this story.
I'm enjoying the story so far. The vibes I get from the character interactions feel like they are similar to an author from Kindle, William D. Arand and his Otherlife stories. I look forward to how this story progresses!
The story itself is a bit of a power trip for the mc, but otherwise it's good. I'm confused though about what happened to the sword he found bank in helgen, the one he commentsed that probably was from mara...
first few chapter are lovely and long and wonderfully well typed up at least i think so the story so far up tp chapter 10 is well detailed
I am absolutely loving the story. all of the characters feel real and fully-fledged people. not just cardboard stand ins. I normally don't like multiple pov. but it is really well done in this story.
I'm enjoying the story so far. The vibes I get from the character interactions feel like they are similar to an author from Kindle, William D. Arand and his Otherlife stories. I look forward to how this story progresses!
The story itself is a bit of a power trip for the mc, but otherwise it's good. I'm confused though about what happened to the sword he found bank in helgen, the one he commentsed that probably was from mara...