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The story it's good , but the mc it's pathetic and stupid beyond limits, at chapter 120 he already has tens of millions of points and he doesn't buy anything,and the "fear" of his sister at first funny at the end it's stupid and pathetic (the important thing must be tell twice),and I think is lacking in world construction, like ai and the twins are there only to figure they are almost like an npc waiting for the mc to arrive, when they could be more interesting, like them goin to the shop whit the mc or to another worlds,also it happen the same whit the rest of the characters like bocchi or D,
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Why I Dropped This Novel at Chapter 70 Rating: 1.2/5 stars This review aims to explain my decision to abandon this story and highlight its significant shortcomings. Writing Quality (1/5): The prose is riddled with basic errors in punctuation, capitalization, and grammar. The author's frequent misuse of pronouns leads to confusion, and their apparent lack of proofreading is frustrating. Updating Schedule (2/5): With the last chapter uploaded three weeks ago, the update frequency is inconsistent at best. Story Development (1/5): The plot squanders its potential. Despite the protagonist possessing a powerful "shop" ability, the author keeps him artificially weak, seemingly just to allow the antagonist (D) to continue bullying him. This choice feels contrived and unsatisfying. Character Design (1/5): The protagonist's actions often defy logic. For instance, he entrusts his children to his sister due to "childhood trauma," despite acknowledging her inadequacy as a teacher and possessing far greater power. The vast resources at his disposal (millions of shop points) could easily secure a competent tutor, yet he inexplicably chooses not to. This lack of character growth is particularly grating. World-Building (1.5/5): The author's efforts to create a rich, believable setting fall short, leaving the world feeling underdeveloped and shallow. Conclusion: I cannot recommend this novel to readers seeking a protagonist who makes intelligent choices while still having believable flaws. The story's issues extend beyond mere plot progression, creating an overall unsatisfying reading experience.
You came back, I hope that this time you don't abandon this novel, I had already lost all hope that you would return.I already want the Kumo Desu Ga arc, I'll wait a few more years but don't give up on it
a pretty good story but there are problems like missing words in sentences and the updating of chapters is also a big problem.(also if possible add more people to interact with the store)
Bastante buena está historia que sin ninguna trama centrada en algo en específico logra engancharte con su historia y aún que hay cosas que se podría mejorar es muy disfrutable y lo único malo es la falta de mas capitulos
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Really like this one recommended for those who like mash ups of different animes 7ds would be a fun one to see
I don't know anything about the updating stability. I read it in one sitting and really liked it
as someone who reads this book since the first 50 chapters. Author I'd like you to stop continuing these short chapters. while iIlove the frequent update, the quality and word count falls short compared to the previous chapters. And now there are at least 1 chapter per week, but compared to the past, it is 1/3 of a chapter and not complete compared to the first 50 chapters
I don't recommend it (not even to my worst enemy)😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😁😒😒😒😒😒😒
this novel is quite good. especially if you follow many anime or games that appear in this series. hope the author will continue this fanfic until the end
Author, please upload more chapters. I don't want to wait another half year. "crying"
Dear author , i hope u can update more in the future, and wish u all the best
this garbage why did i read this thing. ahhhh I'm regretting that i have read till 40 chapters. don't waste your time reading this ####. even dropped fics. are better than this garbage.
História cativante, protagonista equilibrado, (não gosto de protagonista ingênuo ou maligno), o prota está na medida certa. Como o protagonista é muito poderoso, ficaria chato se ele saísse por aí sendo o R7 (o milhor), e como isso não acontece existe elementos suficientes para deixar a história interessante. ;)
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I quite like the story so far. The canon divergences of the other worlds are cool. Also the fact that you added Rom com animes as a cameo or other isekai anime characters is very nice. Usually most fics like this just add those verses as another verse not as an in-verse.
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Eh there are some good points and bad points. Lorelei x Shirou I'm mostly neutral, his harem is meh though like Bocchi, that isekai girl. D and Hoshino Ai is decent I guess, his decision to get 1st true magic is decent as well. The shop characters that come to the shop is meh as well. Because most of them I dont recognize, maybe include tragic/interesting and known characters like Guts, Shinji, Naruto, Eren, Arima, Elric brothers, idk if it's cliche at the very least I'm familiar with the story.
I can't actually remember the last time I wrote a review, maybe it was a year ago or something, but it isn't really too important. Anyway, since it's my fanfiction I'll put 5 star naturally, since it's literally the manifestation of my ideal fanfiction, but I can't say the same for others though. This might ironic coming from me, but I'll do my best to finish this. Either, there is much I want to say since everything I want people to know is literally in the summary already.
The story it's good , but the mc it's pathetic and stupid beyond limits, at chapter 120 he already has tens of millions of points and he doesn't buy anything,and the "fear" of his sister at first funny at the end it's stupid and pathetic (the important thing must be tell twice),and I think is lacking in world construction, like ai and the twins are there only to figure they are almost like an npc waiting for the mc to arrive, when they could be more interesting, like them goin to the shop whit the mc or to another worlds,also it happen the same whit the rest of the characters like bocchi or D,
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Why I Dropped This Novel at Chapter 70 Rating: 1.2/5 stars This review aims to explain my decision to abandon this story and highlight its significant shortcomings. Writing Quality (1/5): The prose is riddled with basic errors in punctuation, capitalization, and grammar. The author's frequent misuse of pronouns leads to confusion, and their apparent lack of proofreading is frustrating. Updating Schedule (2/5): With the last chapter uploaded three weeks ago, the update frequency is inconsistent at best. Story Development (1/5): The plot squanders its potential. Despite the protagonist possessing a powerful "shop" ability, the author keeps him artificially weak, seemingly just to allow the antagonist (D) to continue bullying him. This choice feels contrived and unsatisfying. Character Design (1/5): The protagonist's actions often defy logic. For instance, he entrusts his children to his sister due to "childhood trauma," despite acknowledging her inadequacy as a teacher and possessing far greater power. The vast resources at his disposal (millions of shop points) could easily secure a competent tutor, yet he inexplicably chooses not to. This lack of character growth is particularly grating. World-Building (1.5/5): The author's efforts to create a rich, believable setting fall short, leaving the world feeling underdeveloped and shallow. Conclusion: I cannot recommend this novel to readers seeking a protagonist who makes intelligent choices while still having believable flaws. The story's issues extend beyond mere plot progression, creating an overall unsatisfying reading experience.
You came back, I hope that this time you don't abandon this novel, I had already lost all hope that you would return.I already want the Kumo Desu Ga arc, I'll wait a few more years but don't give up on it
a pretty good story but there are problems like missing words in sentences and the updating of chapters is also a big problem.(also if possible add more people to interact with the store)
Bastante buena está historia que sin ninguna trama centrada en algo en específico logra engancharte con su historia y aún que hay cosas que se podría mejorar es muy disfrutable y lo único malo es la falta de mas capitulos
Reveal Spoiler Really like this one recommended for those who like mash ups of different animes 7ds would be a fun one to see
I don't know anything about the updating stability. I read it in one sitting and really liked it
as someone who reads this book since the first 50 chapters. Author I'd like you to stop continuing these short chapters. while iIlove the frequent update, the quality and word count falls short compared to the previous chapters. And now there are at least 1 chapter per week, but compared to the past, it is 1/3 of a chapter and not complete compared to the first 50 chapters
I don't recommend it (not even to my worst enemy)😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😁😒😒😒😒😒😒
this novel is quite good. especially if you follow many anime or games that appear in this series. hope the author will continue this fanfic until the end
Author, please upload more chapters. I don't want to wait another half year. "crying"
Dear author , i hope u can update more in the future, and wish u all the best
this garbage why did i read this thing. ahhhh I'm regretting that i have read till 40 chapters. don't waste your time reading this ####. even dropped fics. are better than this garbage.
História cativante, protagonista equilibrado, (não gosto de protagonista ingênuo ou maligno), o prota está na medida certa. Como o protagonista é muito poderoso, ficaria chato se ele saísse por aí sendo o R7 (o milhor), e como isso não acontece existe elementos suficientes para deixar a história interessante. ;)
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I quite like the story so far. The canon divergences of the other worlds are cool. Also the fact that you added Rom com animes as a cameo or other isekai anime characters is very nice. Usually most fics like this just add those verses as another verse not as an in-verse.
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Eh there are some good points and bad points. Lorelei x Shirou I'm mostly neutral, his harem is meh though like Bocchi, that isekai girl. D and Hoshino Ai is decent I guess, his decision to get 1st true magic is decent as well. The shop characters that come to the shop is meh as well. Because most of them I dont recognize, maybe include tragic/interesting and known characters like Guts, Shinji, Naruto, Eren, Arima, Elric brothers, idk if it's cliche at the very least I'm familiar with the story.
I can't actually remember the last time I wrote a review, maybe it was a year ago or something, but it isn't really too important. Anyway, since it's my fanfiction I'll put 5 star naturally, since it's literally the manifestation of my ideal fanfiction, but I can't say the same for others though. This might ironic coming from me, but I'll do my best to finish this. Either, there is much I want to say since everything I want people to know is literally in the summary already.