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Me a encantado como a avanzado la historia asta ahora y siento que todo es medianamente creíble, además entiendo porque el prota se pone en situaciones tan comprometedoras. No comparto todas las decisiones del prota, además siento que tiene su buena dosis de conveniencias sin mencionar que tiene muchos capítulos de relleno. Aun así la recomiendo.
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Story progress is slow af, 318 chaps and we are not even close to the avenger plot. 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎
chatgpt vomit for most of a chapter. Talks a lot but saying nothing at all. it was fine at first, then became atrocious to read by the 20ish chapter.
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When you realize that you are in the Marvel cinematic universe mixed with scp, will you immediately start talking all your thoughts out loud?
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A masterstroke of literary finesse; each page unfolds with eloquence, wit, and profound insight. An utterly captivating, sublime read. I like it
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Es bastante bueno. Si bien parece el tropo típico al principio me dejó sorprendido por el giro en la trama en ese aspecto. Me sorprendió gratamente la verdad. Se nota que con el tiempo la narrativa evoluciona y eso es agradable de ver. La forma de navegar entre el MCU y los SCP está muy bien lograda dejándome gratamente sorprendido. La narrativa, desde mí perspectiva, está muy bien lograda. El cambio de pov me generó rechazo al principio pero diría ahora que es algo que le dió esa profundidad en la narrativa general. Por último me sorprendió la baja valoración de esta historia por parte de algunos lectores. Comprendo que no puede llegar ser de agrado para algunos pero sin ninguna duda no merece una estrella o dos. Esto es todo lo que tengo que decir, Magically.
A very good story but all the gender bending themes and homosexual tension left me without any kind of warning or label, I'm just going to sadly abandon it with my wasted time.
Me encanto es dificil de encontrar historias de SCP sin la propaganda CHINA. Asegurar, Contener y Proteger. Asegurar, Contener y Proteger. Asegurar, Contener y Proteger. Asegurar, Contener y Proteger.
This book was an incredibly frustrating read. First, let’s start with the awful grammar. It was riddled with run-on sentences, strange punctuation, and awkward phrasing that made it almost unreadable. It felt like I was reading something that skipped the editing process entirely. As for the main character, he was supposed to be mature and aloof, but instead, he came off as childish and whiny. Every time a serious situation arose, he would respond with petty complaints or irrational decisions, making it impossible to take him seriously. It was hard to believe this was the protagonist who was supposed to carry the story. His lack of emotional depth and constant immature reactions made him more irritating than engaging. On top of that, the book relied way too heavily on AI to drive the plot. Instead of letting the characters solve problems on their own, the author threw in AI as a solution to everything. It felt lazy and overdone, as if the writer had no idea how to naturally resolve conflicts. The excessive use of futuristic technology didn't add anything substantial to the story, and in fact, it made the world feel hollow. To make matters worse, the author went into agonizing detail in places where none was needed. There were entire chapters devoted to describing irrelevant things like the layout of a room or the specifications of a gadget. Yet, when it came to character development or crucial plot points, those were skimmed over. With terrible grammar, a main character who acts like a child when he's supposed to be mature, and an overreliance on AI, this book was a chore to get through. Definitely not worth the read.
Honestly, this is a pretty good fanfic of SCP Foundation as most that I see are just reactions of characters without any addition to the work, while those that I like have few chapters. It was a good start, but things get complicated as new chapters are added. Author should've at least briefly explained the SCPs being summoned as it's pretty annoying to search them manually.
A very interesting book, although the beginning was like an ordinary fan fiction of a schoolboy, when the author began to reveal the plot and explain the origin of the system and close the plot holes, he raised the bar of this book well. There are very few good and long-lasting stories about scp.The most important thing is [DATA EXPUNGED]
Una increible historia, por favor siga sacando capitulos y pues tenga aqui su querida reseña................................................................
Overall its a good story probably one of the best especially with how low SCP fics have. let's start with what i like here, the story is good, I'll be honest, it's developing from weak to strong which is great, it is good he's thinking of the future especially with recruiting pym, banner & others but here comes what i hate, gender bending? i dont care much. Mc is an idiot that contradicts his own words later on & a simp. He is also too arrogant, thinking he has the control. He dies or his secrets got uncovered, he blames anyone within his sight. In conclusion? i love the damn story but god i hate this pathetic MC and i almost dropped it with the chatgpt chapters, damn the words were way too deep.
el protagonista se adapta muy rápido a su nueva situación y aunque no es tan obvio como en otras historias es obvio que el protagonista se vuelve básicamente el ser más poderoso de todo el planeta gracias a qué es el lider de la fundación lo que le quita suspenso lo mejor de la historia es cuando el protagonista no esta y vamos a ver lo que hace otro personaje ya que el prota se dedica a invocar un scp quejarse o alegrarse pensar dar una orden respecto a lo que pensó y pensar sobre lo que hará con algún personaje de Marvel y si no está haciendo eso está demostrando su superioridad o manipulando a cualquiera que se le cruze nunca siento que haya una amenaza real en la historia todos los scp se manejan muy facil o no se profundiza sobre el peligro y gravedad del asunto. estoy ya es personal pero hacer que el comité de ética sea la perra del consejo O5 parece una forma de hacer que el protagonista se safe de tener que explicar que es un reencarnado y de tener que apegarse a la ética lo que le permite hacer al creador que su protagonista haga lo que quiera sin tener que pensar una justificacion ni tener represalias más su sistema le permite convertirse básicamente en el administrador a falta de la existencia de este en la historia lo mejor es definitivamente el mundo que rodea al prota no la historia en si ya que al final el prota lo tiene todo bajo control pero ver las interacciones de Marvel con el universo lo vale aunque todavía no hay nada que se sienta una amenaza
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An incredible blend of universes, the fanfic 'Marvel: The Foundation' perfectly captures the tension and mystery of the SCP universe with the action and heroism of Marvel. well-crafted narrative and well-developed characters. The interactions between Marvel heroes and SCP creatures are captivating. Highly recommended for fans of both universes!
Really wanted to like this one. My previous review got deleted. MC decided best way to fake his death, use SCP to become an woman identity. WHY?? Just pretend it's an body double but noo, gotta go through with this stupid thing. Also the AI translating most of the thing made it feel so tedious to read through. Was liking it up until then.
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One of the better fanfics out there. It gets pretty bad around the genderbend but if you push through that it’s rather neat. Could be better but passable.
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The writing quality is very good in the drama and as the characters are written you update them every day which is very well received. One of the problems I found is why say that the mc is reincarnated so that later the original personality returns and make excuses, technically speaking you killed the mc and now he is another person, but the background of the world is quite well written the only thing I found. the bad thing is that you killed the original mc
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Reminds me of my school project documentation, lots of chatgpt for long useless explanations. Half of some chapters could be condensed into 5 sentences.
This novel is bloody dull. I have never read a novel so idiotic. First of all, there is no element to show this is marvel. Two, this novel is nothing more than the endless rambling of the author with little to no marvel action. This is disappointing.
I read both versions of the book and both of them were pretty bad. this one in particular annoyingly follow side character for multiple chapters and it gets boring and repetitive. also the system is handles pretty poorly and the Mc is even more annoying. He doesn't feel like the main character and his personality shifts all the time. Also I find it funny how the entire foundation gets beaten and out smarted by fuc-ing cat woman's mother but the foundation somehow managed to take out wakanda who BTW were the only nation to survive the invasion of knull the void god and is backed by multiple gods who actively protect it when it faces destruction.
Me a encantado como a avanzado la historia asta ahora y siento que todo es medianamente creíble, además entiendo porque el prota se pone en situaciones tan comprometedoras. No comparto todas las decisiones del prota, además siento que tiene su buena dosis de conveniencias sin mencionar que tiene muchos capítulos de relleno. Aun así la recomiendo.
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Story progress is slow af, 318 chaps and we are not even close to the avenger plot. 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎
chatgpt vomit for most of a chapter. Talks a lot but saying nothing at all. it was fine at first, then became atrocious to read by the 20ish chapter.
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Reveal Spoiler When you realize that you are in the Marvel cinematic universe mixed with scp, will you immediately start talking all your thoughts out loud?
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A masterstroke of literary finesse; each page unfolds with eloquence, wit, and profound insight. An utterly captivating, sublime read. I like it
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Es bastante bueno. Si bien parece el tropo típico al principio me dejó sorprendido por el giro en la trama en ese aspecto. Me sorprendió gratamente la verdad. Se nota que con el tiempo la narrativa evoluciona y eso es agradable de ver. La forma de navegar entre el MCU y los SCP está muy bien lograda dejándome gratamente sorprendido. La narrativa, desde mí perspectiva, está muy bien lograda. El cambio de pov me generó rechazo al principio pero diría ahora que es algo que le dió esa profundidad en la narrativa general. Por último me sorprendió la baja valoración de esta historia por parte de algunos lectores. Comprendo que no puede llegar ser de agrado para algunos pero sin ninguna duda no merece una estrella o dos. Esto es todo lo que tengo que decir, Magically.
A very good story but all the gender bending themes and homosexual tension left me without any kind of warning or label, I'm just going to sadly abandon it with my wasted time.
Me encanto es dificil de encontrar historias de SCP sin la propaganda CHINA. Asegurar, Contener y Proteger. Asegurar, Contener y Proteger. Asegurar, Contener y Proteger. Asegurar, Contener y Proteger.
This book was an incredibly frustrating read. First, let’s start with the awful grammar. It was riddled with run-on sentences, strange punctuation, and awkward phrasing that made it almost unreadable. It felt like I was reading something that skipped the editing process entirely. As for the main character, he was supposed to be mature and aloof, but instead, he came off as childish and whiny. Every time a serious situation arose, he would respond with petty complaints or irrational decisions, making it impossible to take him seriously. It was hard to believe this was the protagonist who was supposed to carry the story. His lack of emotional depth and constant immature reactions made him more irritating than engaging. On top of that, the book relied way too heavily on AI to drive the plot. Instead of letting the characters solve problems on their own, the author threw in AI as a solution to everything. It felt lazy and overdone, as if the writer had no idea how to naturally resolve conflicts. The excessive use of futuristic technology didn't add anything substantial to the story, and in fact, it made the world feel hollow. To make matters worse, the author went into agonizing detail in places where none was needed. There were entire chapters devoted to describing irrelevant things like the layout of a room or the specifications of a gadget. Yet, when it came to character development or crucial plot points, those were skimmed over. With terrible grammar, a main character who acts like a child when he's supposed to be mature, and an overreliance on AI, this book was a chore to get through. Definitely not worth the read.
Honestly, this is a pretty good fanfic of SCP Foundation as most that I see are just reactions of characters without any addition to the work, while those that I like have few chapters. It was a good start, but things get complicated as new chapters are added. Author should've at least briefly explained the SCPs being summoned as it's pretty annoying to search them manually.
A very interesting book, although the beginning was like an ordinary fan fiction of a schoolboy, when the author began to reveal the plot and explain the origin of the system and close the plot holes, he raised the bar of this book well. There are very few good and long-lasting stories about scp.The most important thing is [DATA EXPUNGED]
Una increible historia, por favor siga sacando capitulos y pues tenga aqui su querida reseña................................................................
Overall its a good story probably one of the best especially with how low SCP fics have. let's start with what i like here, the story is good, I'll be honest, it's developing from weak to strong which is great, it is good he's thinking of the future especially with recruiting pym, banner & others but here comes what i hate, gender bending? i dont care much. Mc is an idiot that contradicts his own words later on & a simp. He is also too arrogant, thinking he has the control. He dies or his secrets got uncovered, he blames anyone within his sight. In conclusion? i love the damn story but god i hate this pathetic MC and i almost dropped it with the chatgpt chapters, damn the words were way too deep.
el protagonista se adapta muy rápido a su nueva situación y aunque no es tan obvio como en otras historias es obvio que el protagonista se vuelve básicamente el ser más poderoso de todo el planeta gracias a qué es el lider de la fundación lo que le quita suspenso lo mejor de la historia es cuando el protagonista no esta y vamos a ver lo que hace otro personaje ya que el prota se dedica a invocar un scp quejarse o alegrarse pensar dar una orden respecto a lo que pensó y pensar sobre lo que hará con algún personaje de Marvel y si no está haciendo eso está demostrando su superioridad o manipulando a cualquiera que se le cruze nunca siento que haya una amenaza real en la historia todos los scp se manejan muy facil o no se profundiza sobre el peligro y gravedad del asunto. estoy ya es personal pero hacer que el comité de ética sea la perra del consejo O5 parece una forma de hacer que el protagonista se safe de tener que explicar que es un reencarnado y de tener que apegarse a la ética lo que le permite hacer al creador que su protagonista haga lo que quiera sin tener que pensar una justificacion ni tener represalias más su sistema le permite convertirse básicamente en el administrador a falta de la existencia de este en la historia lo mejor es definitivamente el mundo que rodea al prota no la historia en si ya que al final el prota lo tiene todo bajo control pero ver las interacciones de Marvel con el universo lo vale aunque todavía no hay nada que se sienta una amenaza
Reveal Spoiler An incredible blend of universes, the fanfic 'Marvel: The Foundation' perfectly captures the tension and mystery of the SCP universe with the action and heroism of Marvel. well-crafted narrative and well-developed characters. The interactions between Marvel heroes and SCP creatures are captivating. Highly recommended for fans of both universes!
Really wanted to like this one. My previous review got deleted. MC decided best way to fake his death, use SCP to become an woman identity. WHY?? Just pretend it's an body double but noo, gotta go through with this stupid thing. Also the AI translating most of the thing made it feel so tedious to read through. Was liking it up until then.
Reveal Spoiler One of the better fanfics out there. It gets pretty bad around the genderbend but if you push through that it’s rather neat. Could be better but passable.
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Reveal Spoiler The writing quality is very good in the drama and as the characters are written you update them every day which is very well received. One of the problems I found is why say that the mc is reincarnated so that later the original personality returns and make excuses, technically speaking you killed the mc and now he is another person, but the background of the world is quite well written the only thing I found. the bad thing is that you killed the original mc
Reveal Spoiler Reminds me of my school project documentation, lots of chatgpt for long useless explanations. Half of some chapters could be condensed into 5 sentences.
This novel is bloody dull. I have never read a novel so idiotic. First of all, there is no element to show this is marvel. Two, this novel is nothing more than the endless rambling of the author with little to no marvel action. This is disappointing.
I read both versions of the book and both of them were pretty bad. this one in particular annoyingly follow side character for multiple chapters and it gets boring and repetitive. also the system is handles pretty poorly and the Mc is even more annoying. He doesn't feel like the main character and his personality shifts all the time. Also I find it funny how the entire foundation gets beaten and out smarted by fuc-ing cat woman's mother but the foundation somehow managed to take out wakanda who BTW were the only nation to survive the invasion of knull the void god and is backed by multiple gods who actively protect it when it faces destruction.