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Sub chapter 200 this novel seems like a copy of Demons and Gods. It had a good start tbh, but it got worse and worse as it went on. I gave up reading at chap 165 since the MC had the same power level he obtained before chapter 20. Story could be good but the author is making it progress way to slowly and not optimally for a MC that has memories of future events and prior life. MC does not use his brain to the fullest most of the time. Simplistic and side conversations drawn out when they could likely have just been axed entirely without hampering the story. All the powerful people have some kinda overprotective mentality that gets very old very fast… Lastly! The author uses the word “Dude” wayyyy to often
I think it would be more interesting if there's no romance at all. Then the mc goes to his adventures alone. The chapters are too dragged out and all major female characters are only burdens to the mc. Not to mention when the MC is just 8 years old and so his peers therefore I don't quite understand some actions of the adults towards an 8 year old kid. It's also frustrating to read when you know that the mc survived multiple times in the first hundreds of chapters because of plot armor.
Good day, everyone. Check out the book SCOURGE OF THE UNIVERSE. I promise you will love it.
Only read the frist 20 chapters but so far it’s kinda the same as tale of demons and gods it’s so similar that I thought it was the original so im going to keep reading in hopes that it will differ later on if not ill drop it
i think i expect too much for this novel because the premise is one of my favorite. The nerf irritate me, and what make me annoyed most is the other character. but despite it flaws, it still enjoyable
Reveal Spoiler
it is totally a copy of tales of demons and gods but that is not a bad thing character are different and it is fixing slight mistake that does my only critic is in future it should do somethings different like Apov
I initially thought it would be a female protagonist because of the cover. I was disappointed to find out I was wrong... and it's also harem. I gave it a try... it's ok. But considering the direction, I stopped.
Sorry for using the reviews like this, I mean no disrespect, but can I know if the Novel is going to be a harem? and how many? I thank you in advance
Still early on in the story, and there already seem to be little in the way of true adversity for the main character as things seem to work out almost immediately whenever crisis arises.
The book started really good at first. The ideas were interesting and engaging at first. However, as the story progresses, I feel the author is becoming too long winded in explaining simple things that won't really matter in the long run. Author also likes to overexplain learning of skills that won't really be useful or meaningful in the future as well. Sadly I have to drop this story after 72 chapters.
Hi, and welcome to my novel :) I didn't intend to write a review before hitting chapter 1000, however I noticed many comments regarding a certain point. So, I got to edit the novel and write this review to notify you all about what changed :D The age of the mc and other characters changed from being 8 into 11. I took into consideration all your comments and found them quite logical. I just ran a fast edit and check on all the +200 chapters of the novel, edited everything I could, and I plan to start a thorough edit later on this weekend. If you found anything that didn't add up, just write a comment and I'll edit that part ASAP. Thx for reading my novel, and thx for all the support and love you gave to it. I truly appreciate it. Have a nice reading and day everyone... See you later at 1k chapter review. P.S.: If you got any comment or opinion about my novel, just write it down. I take every single comment of yours seriously and may even change the setting of the entire novel based on your words :))
Es una buena lectura, lo que daña todo es toda es gente estúpida que sale de la nada a buscarle pelea al prota, nunca me gustó eso en las novelas y aquí lo usas a cada rato (bájale 2 a los harem)
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This is a promising novel 👏🏻👏🏻 so far so good, add some strong romance and don’t random girls to the harem which a lot novels dose which end up killing it. Thanks for chapters can’t wait for more
The Nerfing just made me drop the novel at chapter 32. I really dont get authors doing stunt like this in their novels. If you dont want OP mcs (or on the brink of getting OP or feels like OP) then dont give them plot armors then tune it down in the next chapter. My opinion only take it or not, its fine.
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MC is great but I hate all the nosy characters, his life would be quite different if he just ignored those two girls
Goes privileged at chapter 32.........................................................................................................................................................................
the story started off very good but at some point the author started to deviate in many points before concluding them. it's interesting to add a plot so that it's not all easy and follow a straight line of development, however adding too many detours can get a little tiring. I also think that at times it is not necessary to have such a long description of some things at that moment, you can approach them little by little in a natural way and fluid so that it doesn't become a dictionary. even so, I thank you for the book, I write this review so that in future moments you can have an inspiration or something as you follow the course of the book. I don't want to discourage you, offend you or anything like that, I just wanted to give you constructive criticism and my personal opinion on some points. hope you keep taking this novel forward. good job, author. 😁
Sub chapter 200 this novel seems like a copy of Demons and Gods. It had a good start tbh, but it got worse and worse as it went on. I gave up reading at chap 165 since the MC had the same power level he obtained before chapter 20. Story could be good but the author is making it progress way to slowly and not optimally for a MC that has memories of future events and prior life. MC does not use his brain to the fullest most of the time. Simplistic and side conversations drawn out when they could likely have just been axed entirely without hampering the story. All the powerful people have some kinda overprotective mentality that gets very old very fast… Lastly! The author uses the word “Dude” wayyyy to often
I think it would be more interesting if there's no romance at all. Then the mc goes to his adventures alone. The chapters are too dragged out and all major female characters are only burdens to the mc. Not to mention when the MC is just 8 years old and so his peers therefore I don't quite understand some actions of the adults towards an 8 year old kid. It's also frustrating to read when you know that the mc survived multiple times in the first hundreds of chapters because of plot armor.
Good day, everyone. Check out the book SCOURGE OF THE UNIVERSE. I promise you will love it.
Only read the frist 20 chapters but so far it’s kinda the same as tale of demons and gods it’s so similar that I thought it was the original so im going to keep reading in hopes that it will differ later on if not ill drop it
i think i expect too much for this novel because the premise is one of my favorite. The nerf irritate me, and what make me annoyed most is the other character. but despite it flaws, it still enjoyable
Reveal Spoiler it is totally a copy of tales of demons and gods but that is not a bad thing character are different and it is fixing slight mistake that does my only critic is in future it should do somethings different like Apov
I initially thought it would be a female protagonist because of the cover. I was disappointed to find out I was wrong... and it's also harem. I gave it a try... it's ok. But considering the direction, I stopped.
Sorry for using the reviews like this, I mean no disrespect, but can I know if the Novel is going to be a harem? and how many? I thank you in advance
Still early on in the story, and there already seem to be little in the way of true adversity for the main character as things seem to work out almost immediately whenever crisis arises.
The book started really good at first. The ideas were interesting and engaging at first. However, as the story progresses, I feel the author is becoming too long winded in explaining simple things that won't really matter in the long run. Author also likes to overexplain learning of skills that won't really be useful or meaningful in the future as well. Sadly I have to drop this story after 72 chapters.
Hi, and welcome to my novel :) I didn't intend to write a review before hitting chapter 1000, however I noticed many comments regarding a certain point. So, I got to edit the novel and write this review to notify you all about what changed :D The age of the mc and other characters changed from being 8 into 11. I took into consideration all your comments and found them quite logical. I just ran a fast edit and check on all the +200 chapters of the novel, edited everything I could, and I plan to start a thorough edit later on this weekend. If you found anything that didn't add up, just write a comment and I'll edit that part ASAP. Thx for reading my novel, and thx for all the support and love you gave to it. I truly appreciate it. Have a nice reading and day everyone... See you later at 1k chapter review. P.S.: If you got any comment or opinion about my novel, just write it down. I take every single comment of yours seriously and may even change the setting of the entire novel based on your words :))
Es una buena lectura, lo que daña todo es toda es gente estúpida que sale de la nada a buscarle pelea al prota, nunca me gustó eso en las novelas y aquí lo usas a cada rato (bájale 2 a los harem)
Meh , vine porque salía astolfo en la portada , pero no tiene nada que ver xd [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
This is a promising novel 👏🏻👏🏻 so far so good, add some strong romance and don’t random girls to the harem which a lot novels dose which end up killing it. Thanks for chapters can’t wait for more
The Nerfing just made me drop the novel at chapter 32. I really dont get authors doing stunt like this in their novels. If you dont want OP mcs (or on the brink of getting OP or feels like OP) then dont give them plot armors then tune it down in the next chapter. My opinion only take it or not, its fine.
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MC is great but I hate all the nosy characters, his life would be quite different if he just ignored those two girls
Goes privileged at chapter 32.........................................................................................................................................................................
the story started off very good but at some point the author started to deviate in many points before concluding them. it's interesting to add a plot so that it's not all easy and follow a straight line of development, however adding too many detours can get a little tiring. I also think that at times it is not necessary to have such a long description of some things at that moment, you can approach them little by little in a natural way and fluid so that it doesn't become a dictionary. even so, I thank you for the book, I write this review so that in future moments you can have an inspiration or something as you follow the course of the book. I don't want to discourage you, offend you or anything like that, I just wanted to give you constructive criticism and my personal opinion on some points. hope you keep taking this novel forward. good job, author. 😁