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Excellent story, has a good blend of comedy and serious moments with good plot development, 10/10 would read again. Great Read
Like one of the comments said, it's a diamond in the rough. The relationship between Mc and the girls was written very well. Even in the starting chapters, The fact that he told the girls that in his world they were just fiction also didn't cause any harm to the story rather it became better and formed a bond between them. The actual plot was also very well done. The English was unlike most WN wasn't poor at all. Thanks, author, for this wonderful work. I hope you create another masterpiece
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Story about being who too sturborn to lose and too pety to let winner go with their victory
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This is a unique one in a million fanfiction. I love everything about this so far. Thank you
I must respect that the author took his time to research a lot before writing. It makes me wonder if he read the whole wikipeadia, a myth related book whole and a lot of other things. The story on it self is excellent and the way he writes the characters is extremely impressive. I dont believe i have anything to fix about this other that the small amount of lemons. The surprises i got while reading this were a lot and at some point i was like... NO F WAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it was like this!?!? and then be in awe
Just for the uniqueness of having a multiversal Soulsborne FF is intriguing. The concept is has never been executed in a good way IMO until I read this story. It is the best multiversal story I have read that includes Souls games. Besides that the character development of the main character was great and surprisingly, the character development and understanding of the characters of the harem was top tier. The only criticism I have is that I do feel like the current world is getting drawn out and is on is running out of good Arcs so I hope the author keeps the story fresh by possibly going to other universes. I will be waiting for the updates.
It is a great fanfiction, the author has a good ability to mix the worlds of Marvel and DC, the plot is very interesting and remains that way for most of the chapters, totally recommended!!! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Waifu Catalogue with actual planned out plot. One of my favorite fanfics, and I’ve read hundreds.
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Story good but Mc is sorta unlikeable for first few chapters to me, the grammar is good, my issue with the story is its starts off slow for first couple of chapters and how the Mc act at times, there’s not much I can really say that’s bad about it, just pacing of story can be slow i guess. Other than that I don’t have any problems with the story it’s a good binge read
it drags on forever and too many Cliffhangers also a lot of the stuff doesn't make sense sometimes it's like you're jumping from one point to another
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I can say that this is one of the best fanfiction I have had the pleasure to read and enjoy. I love the quality of the writing, I love the progression of the story along with the growth of the characters. I love all the memorable moments. I love the MC's grounded and realistic shounen protagonist personality. I love how everyone gets along. And most of all, I love happy endings
sounds like it is trying to be mysterious but also kind of annoying about that aspect of it and he acts like
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Already read this on qq and was here to find out the name of a harem member. I am creating a similar build in interactive waifu catalogue and forgot the name of one of them, well I didn't get her name but after reading the comments I remembered how awesome this fanfic was.
truly great novel i just found out, the upload a little too long for my taste, but the chapter lenght make it worth the wait, i just wish the author update more often if you can, but still great
ok... this is top stuff... grammar is very very good. character development is very impressive and i like what i read. there is development for both the mc and the girls. the romance is well put together and slowly but surely progressing. But whst i like the most is that the author know how to write properly to make the characters feel alive.... now what to improve? i woulf like more details on the MC side of events, most of it were summaries of his victories... i was eager to read then fight against Gwen but it was skipped. Also show some more POV of the girls to indicate their mental development some more. I was impressed with Some of the girls imorovement after learnign modernc science, like tsunade and robin.
Didnt read the story but I just wanted to ask why do you use harem tag when its clearly not harem, what you described in the synopsys is a polyamorous relationship, so why dont u just delete the harem tag
This story is really good.The Waifus are all S-tier and there is the traveling between multiple worlds. There are not many fanfictions about Souls verse games, so this is really fresh.
Amazing story! thanks author![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] please keep writing ![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
this is hands down one of the best fics i have ever read i can not get enough of it!!!
It was great. You don't need to know about all the worlds (Darksouls123, Eldenring, Bloodborne, Dc, Marvel, Worm) but the more you know the more you'll appreciate. The writing quality is one you would very rarely see in fanfics. Everything was connected, had a reason and plot points were subtly hinted, and the characters felt like themselves. The girls and Mikael's relationship had a final look similar to other novels' harems but this one had very clear reasons and wasn't just the result of plot convenience, and their interactions felt natural and the characters felt real. The Yuri I don't typically enjoy, but I get now it was more about the improper portrayal I disliked. The girls weren't Mikael's. Nor each other's. Nor was this expected by anyone. They were just a family and got along some more than others. It certainly isn't perfect and you'll probably need some patience in some parts and prior reading experience before you can fully enjoy it, but I recommend a try.
Excellent story, has a good blend of comedy and serious moments with good plot development, 10/10 would read again. Great Read
Like one of the comments said, it's a diamond in the rough. The relationship between Mc and the girls was written very well. Even in the starting chapters, The fact that he told the girls that in his world they were just fiction also didn't cause any harm to the story rather it became better and formed a bond between them. The actual plot was also very well done. The English was unlike most WN wasn't poor at all. Thanks, author, for this wonderful work. I hope you create another masterpiece
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Story about being who too sturborn to lose and too pety to let winner go with their victory
Reveal Spoiler This is a unique one in a million fanfiction. I love everything about this so far. Thank you
I must respect that the author took his time to research a lot before writing. It makes me wonder if he read the whole wikipeadia, a myth related book whole and a lot of other things. The story on it self is excellent and the way he writes the characters is extremely impressive. I dont believe i have anything to fix about this other that the small amount of lemons. The surprises i got while reading this were a lot and at some point i was like... NO F WAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it was like this!?!? and then be in awe
Just for the uniqueness of having a multiversal Soulsborne FF is intriguing. The concept is has never been executed in a good way IMO until I read this story. It is the best multiversal story I have read that includes Souls games. Besides that the character development of the main character was great and surprisingly, the character development and understanding of the characters of the harem was top tier. The only criticism I have is that I do feel like the current world is getting drawn out and is on is running out of good Arcs so I hope the author keeps the story fresh by possibly going to other universes. I will be waiting for the updates.
It is a great fanfiction, the author has a good ability to mix the worlds of Marvel and DC, the plot is very interesting and remains that way for most of the chapters, totally recommended!!! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Waifu Catalogue with actual planned out plot. One of my favorite fanfics, and I’ve read hundreds.
I Like It.I Have Nothing Else To Say Other Than I Like It.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Story good but Mc is sorta unlikeable for first few chapters to me, the grammar is good, my issue with the story is its starts off slow for first couple of chapters and how the Mc act at times, there’s not much I can really say that’s bad about it, just pacing of story can be slow i guess. Other than that I don’t have any problems with the story it’s a good binge read
it drags on forever and too many Cliffhangers also a lot of the stuff doesn't make sense sometimes it's like you're jumping from one point to another
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I can say that this is one of the best fanfiction I have had the pleasure to read and enjoy. I love the quality of the writing, I love the progression of the story along with the growth of the characters. I love all the memorable moments. I love the MC's grounded and realistic shounen protagonist personality. I love how everyone gets along. And most of all, I love happy endings
sounds like it is trying to be mysterious but also kind of annoying about that aspect of it and he acts like
Reveal Spoiler Already read this on qq and was here to find out the name of a harem member. I am creating a similar build in interactive waifu catalogue and forgot the name of one of them, well I didn't get her name but after reading the comments I remembered how awesome this fanfic was.
truly great novel i just found out, the upload a little too long for my taste, but the chapter lenght make it worth the wait, i just wish the author update more often if you can, but still great
ok... this is top stuff... grammar is very very good. character development is very impressive and i like what i read. there is development for both the mc and the girls. the romance is well put together and slowly but surely progressing. But whst i like the most is that the author know how to write properly to make the characters feel alive.... now what to improve? i woulf like more details on the MC side of events, most of it were summaries of his victories... i was eager to read then fight against Gwen but it was skipped. Also show some more POV of the girls to indicate their mental development some more. I was impressed with Some of the girls imorovement after learnign modernc science, like tsunade and robin.
Didnt read the story but I just wanted to ask why do you use harem tag when its clearly not harem, what you described in the synopsys is a polyamorous relationship, so why dont u just delete the harem tag
This story is really good.The Waifus are all S-tier and there is the traveling between multiple worlds. There are not many fanfictions about Souls verse games, so this is really fresh.
Amazing story! thanks author![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] please keep writing ![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
this is hands down one of the best fics i have ever read i can not get enough of it!!!
It was great. You don't need to know about all the worlds (Darksouls123, Eldenring, Bloodborne, Dc, Marvel, Worm) but the more you know the more you'll appreciate. The writing quality is one you would very rarely see in fanfics. Everything was connected, had a reason and plot points were subtly hinted, and the characters felt like themselves. The girls and Mikael's relationship had a final look similar to other novels' harems but this one had very clear reasons and wasn't just the result of plot convenience, and their interactions felt natural and the characters felt real. The Yuri I don't typically enjoy, but I get now it was more about the improper portrayal I disliked. The girls weren't Mikael's. Nor each other's. Nor was this expected by anyone. They were just a family and got along some more than others. It certainly isn't perfect and you'll probably need some patience in some parts and prior reading experience before you can fully enjoy it, but I recommend a try.