Reviews of Fragment: Bullet in the Heart by Moonamore - Webnovel

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SolaceBreeze

I really enjoyed reading this novel. The story is excellent, truly captivating with its well-structured narrative that holds my attention from start to finish. I eagerly await the next chapter's release 🫶🏻, as the plot unfolds beautifully, keeping readers captivated throughout.

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Farheen_Mallick

love the novel.its too interesting. please update soon.

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Powy
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The story starts dark. The tension can be felt. Well described. all kinds of emotion come up when reading, anger, fear. This is a good start for a starting writer. The story builds up slowly. not too rushed. In addition to the feeling of the ML and FL, other characters are well involved, such as the mother of the FL. I'm curious how the story will develop.

2yr
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Moonamore

Hello everyone. This is my first attempt to write a book in full English, so if I made several grammatical mistakes feel free to correct me. I would be thrilled if someone would enjoy my book from the start until the end. This book is not perfect. My writing ability is lacking in many ways, but please give my book a chance 🙏 Thank you.

2yr
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Georg_Spaner

To begin with, this is really impressive for your debut work! The grammar, structure, and tension are all of a very high caliber. I typically don't read mysteries or crime novels, so I can't comment on how the plot develops. Just keep going, and you might convert me to a mystery fan ;)

2yr
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Clairees

I enjoyed reading this story. The character design is pretty good. I hope you will explain more about the setting place you used in this story. While reading this book, several questions popped into my head. I can not wait to discover the truth as everything comes undone in the future.

2yr
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Karensia

Wow I've already loved your novel! I love this kind of romance with thriller and mystery genre, the story development is great with strong character design and world background. It starts with abduction and let's see how Kathrina deals with PTSD after the tragedy. Good job, Author!

2yr
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SolaceBreeze

I really enjoyed reading this novel. The story is excellent, truly captivating with its well-structured narrative that holds my attention from start to finish. I eagerly await the next chapter's release 🫶🏻, as the plot unfolds beautifully, keeping readers captivated throughout.

10mth
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Farheen_Mallick

love the novel.its too interesting. please update soon.

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1yr
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Powy
LV 15 Badge

The story starts dark. The tension can be felt. Well described. all kinds of emotion come up when reading, anger, fear. This is a good start for a starting writer. The story builds up slowly. not too rushed. In addition to the feeling of the ML and FL, other characters are well involved, such as the mother of the FL. I'm curious how the story will develop.

2yr
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Moonamore

Hello everyone. This is my first attempt to write a book in full English, so if I made several grammatical mistakes feel free to correct me. I would be thrilled if someone would enjoy my book from the start until the end. This book is not perfect. My writing ability is lacking in many ways, but please give my book a chance 🙏 Thank you.

2yr
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Georg_Spaner

To begin with, this is really impressive for your debut work! The grammar, structure, and tension are all of a very high caliber. I typically don't read mysteries or crime novels, so I can't comment on how the plot develops. Just keep going, and you might convert me to a mystery fan ;)

2yr
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Clairees

I enjoyed reading this story. The character design is pretty good. I hope you will explain more about the setting place you used in this story. While reading this book, several questions popped into my head. I can not wait to discover the truth as everything comes undone in the future.

2yr
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Karensia

Wow I've already loved your novel! I love this kind of romance with thriller and mystery genre, the story development is great with strong character design and world background. It starts with abduction and let's see how Kathrina deals with PTSD after the tragedy. Good job, Author!

2yr
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