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Write a reviewMy current review would be 3.6 for Mcs behaviour, carelessness, spending like he has million and no real action or special exept his Psychopath mind and Hero comlex so far. And other reasons
Oh my god, I have been searching for a morally good devil beyonder lotm fanfic for literal years now. Now, I finally found it. Thanks you so much for writing this masterpiece.
It's a good fic. Hope author keep doing good and does not drop this. Keep up the good work author. Thank you for this fic.😊
while my rating is quite low, the story itself is good, while the grammar and vocabulary are sometimes wacky, its still readable. keeping my eyes on this since LOTM fanfic is rare. hopefully author sama can improve more and more so the story got more wonderful.
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I liked what I saw, but it's still too early to review aspects of the book. So far it's been enjoyable to read mostly through the use of the path to the abyss, the only ways the author lets readers down is by making the path to greatness too easy or dropping the novel.
Great. Abyss was one of the more... unexplored pathway and its always interesting to see people taking clearly evil power to do good. If I may give a suggestion, the guard dog should be of the Death Pathway. You named it Garm and with Death pathway you will virtually have an undead army at speed dial which is nice. Or... Monster pathway. When in doubt, always pick the Wheel of Fortune.
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My current review would be 3.6 for Mcs behaviour, carelessness, spending like he has million and no real action or special exept his Psychopath mind and Hero comlex so far. And other reasons
Oh my god, I have been searching for a morally good devil beyonder lotm fanfic for literal years now. Now, I finally found it. Thanks you so much for writing this masterpiece.
It's a good fic. Hope author keep doing good and does not drop this. Keep up the good work author. Thank you for this fic.😊
while my rating is quite low, the story itself is good, while the grammar and vocabulary are sometimes wacky, its still readable. keeping my eyes on this since LOTM fanfic is rare. hopefully author sama can improve more and more so the story got more wonderful.
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I liked what I saw, but it's still too early to review aspects of the book. So far it's been enjoyable to read mostly through the use of the path to the abyss, the only ways the author lets readers down is by making the path to greatness too easy or dropping the novel.
Great. Abyss was one of the more... unexplored pathway and its always interesting to see people taking clearly evil power to do good. If I may give a suggestion, the guard dog should be of the Death Pathway. You named it Garm and with Death pathway you will virtually have an undead army at speed dial which is nice. Or... Monster pathway. When in doubt, always pick the Wheel of Fortune.
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