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Well, after fifteen chapters I think I can give a review to my work. Then to begin with this story introduces one of my favorite characters Otakemaru from the Onmyoji game universe. It really bothered me that both Tamano and stuten Douji have very strong versions, like Ameratsu and Ibuki Douji respectively, and instead Otakemaru from the Fate version is only weak and completely negligible. So I decided to make this story, Mc is the embodiment of "traditional Yokai values" But for his family and persistent in completing the things he set out to do, never giving up, careful In every move, with a strong sense of duty. Super strong and super cute! Hope you enjoy the story <3
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3.6
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very good, pls dont't stop author, i just read 5 chapter but is good for me, for now........
the story is very similar to "naruto, savior of holy grail", only the mc is not naruto. there are some difference, but overall the same.
may I know how the update will be? . . . shuten and ibaraki douji are also in the harem? it would be nice if they went and met him because of his history or something
I did not think that the one who recommended Annihilation Maker DXD to me , would be the author of one of my favorite DC stories, I will support this story when I have stones, Thank You
I'm waiting for more my guy, that broly book got me hooked, and i surely hope this one will too
OH MY GOD!!!! This story is awesome the the mc the story so far is soo awesome!!!!!
Well, after fifteen chapters I think I can give a review to my work. Then to begin with this story introduces one of my favorite characters Otakemaru from the Onmyoji game universe. It really bothered me that both Tamano and stuten Douji have very strong versions, like Ameratsu and Ibuki Douji respectively, and instead Otakemaru from the Fate version is only weak and completely negligible. So I decided to make this story, Mc is the embodiment of "traditional Yokai values" But for his family and persistent in completing the things he set out to do, never giving up, careful In every move, with a strong sense of duty. Super strong and super cute! Hope you enjoy the story <3
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3.6
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very good, pls dont't stop author, i just read 5 chapter but is good for me, for now........
the story is very similar to "naruto, savior of holy grail", only the mc is not naruto. there are some difference, but overall the same.
may I know how the update will be? . . . shuten and ibaraki douji are also in the harem? it would be nice if they went and met him because of his history or something
I did not think that the one who recommended Annihilation Maker DXD to me , would be the author of one of my favorite DC stories, I will support this story when I have stones, Thank You
I'm waiting for more my guy, that broly book got me hooked, and i surely hope this one will too
OH MY GOD!!!! This story is awesome the the mc the story so far is soo awesome!!!!!