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Reawakening

I've been working on this for a while now, and finally felt it worthy to enter the fantasy carnival! This will be a kingdom-building adventure with some action-packed scenes. Slimes evolving to destroy entire human armies alone and the like. I can't wait to see you all in my comments section! [img=recommend]

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Hunter1105

A fantasy novel worth reading. It was fun to read, fresh for my taste, and enjoyable. The Main Character is good. The World Building is a perfect fit for the story. The pacing is fine, neither rushed nor delayed, just smooth enough to make me read more chapters. I recommend this to all readers out there.

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Reawakening

I've decided to not rewrite the story. Put simply, I want to focus on better things and produce higher-quality work in the future. If I rewrote it, I'd have no comparison, I'd never see my improvement. This isn't my best work, but... since people have fun reading it, why give up on it? I will use the basis that I created while I was sick to turn this story into something truly wonderful. Thank you for reading, I know you won't regret it.

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Scorpinon

great story, but it reels like a part time gig where they are only posting whenever they remember to and leave you waiting for WEEKS to find out whats next

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Avid_reader1

how many chapters will this novel have for us readeris it approved?

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gowther17

I really enjoyed your writing, and I hope you continue doing such an amazing job. I understand that taking care of your health is very important, and I hope you're able to be healthy and happy for a long time. It's definitely one of my favorite books so far to come from here. Thank you, Author

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King_Me1

i liked it a lot im still reading ch 7 but its so fun i might get coins to continue thank you author. gggggggggregtguiurgnu9hrwughwrugwhiugrwbgu

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Battler83

I went into this novel with low hopes as this is a fairly common genre. I was presently surprised by the quality of the story and the attention to details. Have I seen better YES, but it was worth continuing for a while. The fight scenes are ok and the town development aspect of it as well as the handling of mundane issues are well done. The protagonist's internal monologue is believable and realistic as it is some disordered. Here is where things go south, spoilers ahead: The slimes themselves are overpowered, given the context of the world it is really unclear why. The power system is interesting as well as the formation stuff, but too much too quickly the author does not really give us a chance to get used to a new aspect of the world or new plot thread before jumping to the next. The protagonist's personality goes through the common shift from "I will be the best through hard work" to "I must act above others and look for trouble for the sake of plot". A severe lack of other perspectives for a novel with so many characters and a really out of place time skip are problems as well. To the author, this is good, but it could be much better. I still applaud your effort and dedication to this and hope you can write a story that you will enjoy

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CryptoCat

Congrats on being one of the only top ranking novels in the contest that didn’t have the harem tag!

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Meharu
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dang it's good. in my opinion ofc

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Apocalypse_2ndLife

1st few chapters i wanted to read it more cuz felt good concept But very soon it just became almost brain pain for me comes back everyone dead, buying seeds, enemy weak asf still making it as if big deal Too rushed and out of place chat lines like that did i just call them dolts one -_-. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

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Mr_Babbles

I've only read 3 chapters, but that's all I needed to read for me to see that this is not for me cons: 1. author tells characters personalities but doesn't show them, saying what a character is like through narration is the worst introduction to characters ever, author literally skips over a friendship building carriage ride and calls them friends through narration.... 2. mc is a reincarnated individual and the only reason author chose that is because intelligence means you'll have a stronger power or something along those lines, it just feels like useless knowledge 3. mc is bland as all get out so far, I haven't seen any personality 4. dialogue is kinda not good, right when getting his powers people are like "wow lordship powers are strong even with the weakest monster" and immediately retcons that and start trashing slimes, even further if slimes were found to be trash, why was mc so confident in making slimes super strong, why does he believe slimes could amount to anything at all, kinda stupid 5. haven't felt any sort of world building besides "this is forger village", that's it PRO'S: 1.good grammar, haven't found any errors in his writing itself which is phenomenal

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Good_Name_

Stories excellent, has great character building with it not just focusing on the mc. The mc is great with him actually treating the people under him like people and him not being too OP with him actually stragising. My only problem is that I want the wider world to be fleshed out more.

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T_Tan
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Good novel, have potential. but it all wasted because 0 update for a long time.

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Alpha_Gate

good and interesting story. 👍

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SHADOWBLADE

Great premise but the execution, the writing style the attention to details leave a lot to be desired. It's not that story is badly written but I it could be a 9 right now it is only a 6. Maybe I am being harsh on the author coz I think he is new to writing. Writing Quality is decent sometimes confusing but mostly good. Story Development, I personally am not a fan of how it panned out but it's kinda OK. Character Design, we really don't have much to base this of. Most exposition we have is with MC and his main sidekick. World Background, we don't really have much in that too, but it's ok-ish

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WheresWaldo

I normally dont write reviews, but this deserved it I think. after checking out a lot of the fantasy carnival novels I found this to be one of the best, if not for my bias towards kingdom building, id be certain it's the best. the main character develops properly, becoming darker with time as he is forced to experience the responsibilities of a leader, and I even feel like I'm growing with him. no crazy grammar issues and when there is the author fixes it upon notification, the world building is consistently great too. this novel shines in its character design and story development, simply because it is so immersive... i sometimes don't realize I'm reading anymore... give it a read, I'm sure you'll grow attached to the characters too.

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SeuVovo

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sivensi

Good start, keep going!

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HighLordWarden

Wonderful read so far, curious to see how it may develop in the future.

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NandoXD
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This novel is superb. Everything is 👍 . Keep up with the job author!!!

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CertifiedWeebism

I have read until chapter 31. The Slime Sovereign follows Alaric, who has the ability of being an authoritative figure in the hearts of slimes It seems weak at first, but quickly we realize that slimes have more potential than expected. So far, I've had fun following Alaric. His character development has been an amazing sight to see, his dead family and friends compelling him to live on, for revenge. In fact, he finds it so important to live that he resorts to cowardice. In chapter 31, we see a change. One of the slimes under his command highly disapproves of cowardice, and convinces the very same Alaric who thought, "Pride? Shame? Is it nutritious?" to rethink his behavior. In this chapter, I was immediately hooked. Alaric realizes his potential as a king, and his cowardly behavior, which had obviously bothered Alaric himself beforehand, is addressed. I recommend this novel completely, I really feel like I am one with Alaric's kingdom, watching the king become better by the day. Small con, is pacing. Sometimes it gets a bit slow, but for good reason. Sometimes too fast, as if the author is experimenting. It IS their first novel, and I can't wait to see it reach its potential. Please keep updating, I love this novel!

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Myst_Assist

The story is well thought out with an easy to relate to main character and a somewhat relaxed pacing. Although I haven't read all of the available chapters, I like how clear and descriptive everything is. There is a lot of potential in this novel. I look forward to all kinds of shenanigans Alaric will get into.

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Grandmasters

The story is lit! I am hooked in just one chapter! I have seen many works but this seemed to have great potential. I am stoked and surprised. Never expected it haha. Also keep writing as readers need more chaps. I can already see its success in the near future. [img=recommend]

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Piercing_Sky

I had to give a 4.8 because the only characters we really interact with are the slip slime and Alaric. I hope that you'll introduce more characters soon. This book is really high quality please keep updating!

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Aneeza

I love the story so far. very poggers🥺 I cant wait to read more of it. Goodluck uwu

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OOPS
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(Ch. 5) This novel has so much potwential please keep updating. I hope the kingdom has humans too =======================================

2yr
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Reawakening

I've been working on this for a while now, and finally felt it worthy to enter the fantasy carnival! This will be a kingdom-building adventure with some action-packed scenes. Slimes evolving to destroy entire human armies alone and the like. I can't wait to see you all in my comments section! [img=recommend]

2yr
View 37 Replies
Hunter1105

A fantasy novel worth reading. It was fun to read, fresh for my taste, and enjoyable. The Main Character is good. The World Building is a perfect fit for the story. The pacing is fine, neither rushed nor delayed, just smooth enough to make me read more chapters. I recommend this to all readers out there.

1yr
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Reawakening

I've decided to not rewrite the story. Put simply, I want to focus on better things and produce higher-quality work in the future. If I rewrote it, I'd have no comparison, I'd never see my improvement. This isn't my best work, but... since people have fun reading it, why give up on it? I will use the basis that I created while I was sick to turn this story into something truly wonderful. Thank you for reading, I know you won't regret it.

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1yr
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Scorpinon

great story, but it reels like a part time gig where they are only posting whenever they remember to and leave you waiting for WEEKS to find out whats next

1yr
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Avid_reader1

how many chapters will this novel have for us readeris it approved?

1yr
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gowther17

I really enjoyed your writing, and I hope you continue doing such an amazing job. I understand that taking care of your health is very important, and I hope you're able to be healthy and happy for a long time. It's definitely one of my favorite books so far to come from here. Thank you, Author

1yr
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King_Me1

i liked it a lot im still reading ch 7 but its so fun i might get coins to continue thank you author. gggggggggregtguiurgnu9hrwughwrugwhiugrwbgu

1yr
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Battler83

I went into this novel with low hopes as this is a fairly common genre. I was presently surprised by the quality of the story and the attention to details. Have I seen better YES, but it was worth continuing for a while. The fight scenes are ok and the town development aspect of it as well as the handling of mundane issues are well done. The protagonist's internal monologue is believable and realistic as it is some disordered. Here is where things go south, spoilers ahead: The slimes themselves are overpowered, given the context of the world it is really unclear why. The power system is interesting as well as the formation stuff, but too much too quickly the author does not really give us a chance to get used to a new aspect of the world or new plot thread before jumping to the next. The protagonist's personality goes through the common shift from "I will be the best through hard work" to "I must act above others and look for trouble for the sake of plot". A severe lack of other perspectives for a novel with so many characters and a really out of place time skip are problems as well. To the author, this is good, but it could be much better. I still applaud your effort and dedication to this and hope you can write a story that you will enjoy

1yr
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CryptoCat

Congrats on being one of the only top ranking novels in the contest that didn’t have the harem tag!

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1yr
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Meharu
LV 13 Badge

dang it's good. in my opinion ofc

1yr
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Apocalypse_2ndLife

1st few chapters i wanted to read it more cuz felt good concept But very soon it just became almost brain pain for me comes back everyone dead, buying seeds, enemy weak asf still making it as if big deal Too rushed and out of place chat lines like that did i just call them dolts one -_-. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

1yr
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Mr_Babbles

I've only read 3 chapters, but that's all I needed to read for me to see that this is not for me cons: 1. author tells characters personalities but doesn't show them, saying what a character is like through narration is the worst introduction to characters ever, author literally skips over a friendship building carriage ride and calls them friends through narration.... 2. mc is a reincarnated individual and the only reason author chose that is because intelligence means you'll have a stronger power or something along those lines, it just feels like useless knowledge 3. mc is bland as all get out so far, I haven't seen any personality 4. dialogue is kinda not good, right when getting his powers people are like "wow lordship powers are strong even with the weakest monster" and immediately retcons that and start trashing slimes, even further if slimes were found to be trash, why was mc so confident in making slimes super strong, why does he believe slimes could amount to anything at all, kinda stupid 5. haven't felt any sort of world building besides "this is forger village", that's it PRO'S: 1.good grammar, haven't found any errors in his writing itself which is phenomenal

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1yr
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Good_Name_

Stories excellent, has great character building with it not just focusing on the mc. The mc is great with him actually treating the people under him like people and him not being too OP with him actually stragising. My only problem is that I want the wider world to be fleshed out more.

1yr
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T_Tan
LV 4 Badge

Good novel, have potential. but it all wasted because 0 update for a long time.

1yr
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Alpha_Gate

good and interesting story. 👍

1yr
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SHADOWBLADE

Great premise but the execution, the writing style the attention to details leave a lot to be desired. It's not that story is badly written but I it could be a 9 right now it is only a 6. Maybe I am being harsh on the author coz I think he is new to writing. Writing Quality is decent sometimes confusing but mostly good. Story Development, I personally am not a fan of how it panned out but it's kinda OK. Character Design, we really don't have much to base this of. Most exposition we have is with MC and his main sidekick. World Background, we don't really have much in that too, but it's ok-ish

1yr
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WheresWaldo

I normally dont write reviews, but this deserved it I think. after checking out a lot of the fantasy carnival novels I found this to be one of the best, if not for my bias towards kingdom building, id be certain it's the best. the main character develops properly, becoming darker with time as he is forced to experience the responsibilities of a leader, and I even feel like I'm growing with him. no crazy grammar issues and when there is the author fixes it upon notification, the world building is consistently great too. this novel shines in its character design and story development, simply because it is so immersive... i sometimes don't realize I'm reading anymore... give it a read, I'm sure you'll grow attached to the characters too.

2yr
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SeuVovo

asdasdaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

2yr
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sivensi

Good start, keep going!

2yr
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HighLordWarden

Wonderful read so far, curious to see how it may develop in the future.

2yr
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NandoXD
LV 14 Badge

This novel is superb. Everything is 👍 . Keep up with the job author!!!

2yr
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CertifiedWeebism

I have read until chapter 31. The Slime Sovereign follows Alaric, who has the ability of being an authoritative figure in the hearts of slimes It seems weak at first, but quickly we realize that slimes have more potential than expected. So far, I've had fun following Alaric. His character development has been an amazing sight to see, his dead family and friends compelling him to live on, for revenge. In fact, he finds it so important to live that he resorts to cowardice. In chapter 31, we see a change. One of the slimes under his command highly disapproves of cowardice, and convinces the very same Alaric who thought, "Pride? Shame? Is it nutritious?" to rethink his behavior. In this chapter, I was immediately hooked. Alaric realizes his potential as a king, and his cowardly behavior, which had obviously bothered Alaric himself beforehand, is addressed. I recommend this novel completely, I really feel like I am one with Alaric's kingdom, watching the king become better by the day. Small con, is pacing. Sometimes it gets a bit slow, but for good reason. Sometimes too fast, as if the author is experimenting. It IS their first novel, and I can't wait to see it reach its potential. Please keep updating, I love this novel!

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Myst_Assist

The story is well thought out with an easy to relate to main character and a somewhat relaxed pacing. Although I haven't read all of the available chapters, I like how clear and descriptive everything is. There is a lot of potential in this novel. I look forward to all kinds of shenanigans Alaric will get into.

2yr
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Grandmasters

The story is lit! I am hooked in just one chapter! I have seen many works but this seemed to have great potential. I am stoked and surprised. Never expected it haha. Also keep writing as readers need more chaps. I can already see its success in the near future. [img=recommend]

2yr
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Piercing_Sky

I had to give a 4.8 because the only characters we really interact with are the slip slime and Alaric. I hope that you'll introduce more characters soon. This book is really high quality please keep updating!

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Aneeza

I love the story so far. very poggers🥺 I cant wait to read more of it. Goodluck uwu

2yr
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OOPS
LV 2 Badge

(Ch. 5) This novel has so much potwential please keep updating. I hope the kingdom has humans too =======================================

2yr
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