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i see this story is inspired by rebirth of strongest dungeon master with a few twist like the new aditions to story and hope u wont drop it.Love story for now
Though I am not that interested in game elements, first few chapters still managed to engage me. The world development, character design, and the story development are pretty nice. Just the author needs to work on the grammar; major problem being the use of past and present tense. This aside, the novel has a lot of potential. Good luck, author.
Dungeon novels are always a treat to me, the quality of the writing can be a bit weird as I sometime feel like what I read didn't actually make much sense but it isn't rubbish, the updates seem consistent enough, the story progresses at a good enough pace, overall, I would recommend to give it a read.
Reading something different for once in a gaming novel was refreshing. You managed to execute the first chapter really well. I do feel like there was a bit of info dumping while explaining the game to us and the dungeons he was trying to conquer but either way, it didn't affect the overall flow and pacing of the story. Keep it up, Author
Amazing writing! After reading five chapters, i was hooked. This book has everything you could ask for. For me, game elements was the center of attraction. Give it a try. You won't regret it.
Wait why is he joining a guild this doesn’t make sense they already know who he is so get ready to be a slave again
i dont have much to say other than it has a smooth story development. I like the mc backstory and a overall plot even though it only has 11 chapter still. 4 3 2 1 auther i hope you continue your grate works.
Writing Quality: 3.8/5 Little to no, misspelled words, grammar is good enough to not lose your mind. My last English class was over 10 years ago in freshman year of college but it’s perfectly understandable. You may notice some mistakes but nothing that makes you upset like you’re reading MTL. Author could use more contractions in character dialogue which would make the conversations seem more natural. The thing that stands out the most is the unnecessary capitalization but again, grammar is going to be better than 90% of the novels out there. Author should also look into utilizing semi-colons (;) and look into Pro-writing aid or at least run it through Grammarly. Some sentences are…odd. Stability of Updates: 4/5 I just read it today and took a peek at the table of contents to see how the release schedule is. It looks very stable to me at nearly daily releases. Can’t comment on the rest of it as I didn’t read too far. The novel feels a bit too formal and stiff, for lack of a better term. I'm still gonna give it 5 stars because I'm soft and dislike giving reviews that lower the ratings. I leave that for other people, I also don't want to be the reason that someone might miss this novel and it turns out to be what they were looking for.
i see this story is inspired by rebirth of strongest dungeon master with a few twist like the new aditions to story and hope u wont drop it.Love story for now
Though I am not that interested in game elements, first few chapters still managed to engage me. The world development, character design, and the story development are pretty nice. Just the author needs to work on the grammar; major problem being the use of past and present tense. This aside, the novel has a lot of potential. Good luck, author.
Dungeon novels are always a treat to me, the quality of the writing can be a bit weird as I sometime feel like what I read didn't actually make much sense but it isn't rubbish, the updates seem consistent enough, the story progresses at a good enough pace, overall, I would recommend to give it a read.
Reading something different for once in a gaming novel was refreshing. You managed to execute the first chapter really well. I do feel like there was a bit of info dumping while explaining the game to us and the dungeons he was trying to conquer but either way, it didn't affect the overall flow and pacing of the story. Keep it up, Author
Amazing writing! After reading five chapters, i was hooked. This book has everything you could ask for. For me, game elements was the center of attraction. Give it a try. You won't regret it.
Wait why is he joining a guild this doesn’t make sense they already know who he is so get ready to be a slave again
i dont have much to say other than it has a smooth story development. I like the mc backstory and a overall plot even though it only has 11 chapter still. 4 3 2 1 auther i hope you continue your grate works.
Writing Quality: 3.8/5 Little to no, misspelled words, grammar is good enough to not lose your mind. My last English class was over 10 years ago in freshman year of college but it’s perfectly understandable. You may notice some mistakes but nothing that makes you upset like you’re reading MTL. Author could use more contractions in character dialogue which would make the conversations seem more natural. The thing that stands out the most is the unnecessary capitalization but again, grammar is going to be better than 90% of the novels out there. Author should also look into utilizing semi-colons (;) and look into Pro-writing aid or at least run it through Grammarly. Some sentences are…odd. Stability of Updates: 4/5 I just read it today and took a peek at the table of contents to see how the release schedule is. It looks very stable to me at nearly daily releases. Can’t comment on the rest of it as I didn’t read too far. The novel feels a bit too formal and stiff, for lack of a better term. I'm still gonna give it 5 stars because I'm soft and dislike giving reviews that lower the ratings. I leave that for other people, I also don't want to be the reason that someone might miss this novel and it turns out to be what they were looking for.