A good start for a novel, but I think it still needs lots of work to actually become something truly great, maybe give some storyline to the ladies and make some romance? idk but good luck <3
It´s starting strong, I see a very good story being built up, I hope to read more as I find it quite intresting, although I also belive that the characters need development
A good start for a novel, but I think it still needs lots of work to actually become something truly great, maybe give some storyline to the ladies and make some romance? idk but good luck <3
It´s starting strong, I see a very good story being built up, I hope to read more as I find it quite intresting, although I also belive that the characters need development
A good start for a novel, but I think it still needs lots of work to actually become something truly great, maybe give some storyline to the ladies and make some romance? idk but good luck <3