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This rating is for the 100 fan fic . Author have you dropped the 100 advanced preparation
Author I want a sequel And the faster and the more the better I write with gratitude to your reader and fan👍👍👍👍👍👍😁😁__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Garbage story with a soft-minded MC, not to mention the fact that there’s yuri in his harem. Absolutely disgusting.
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About a vampire who isn't a vampire being a jade white dothraki. White-washed it real nicely. Obviously reading that could make you weary, the author has the privilege of changing what he wishes but still keeping the messed up things like having slaves. if you ignore all that or just like it then the story is good. This is only my opinion. Unique origin, powers and a decent story progression. im only a few chapters in and so I may change my review for the better after reading more chapters. Hopefully there won't be too many more of the authors weird design notes and changes going forward. but who knows.
Curses that mc gets after his evolution makes zero sense. Besides that, the rest of the story is okay, if you can ignore mc's unnecessary dark personality. ///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
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Ohhhh yeeeeesss another perfect ( for me) GOT fanfic You got me rilled up reading your story author hoping for more chapters The back round is great The story has more potential I really 5⭐
a good story, although there is no system, the mc's power surpasses him and there is nothing he can't do, otherwise it seems like a simple plot, the mc is a bit amoral and does what he wants.
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do you know that you can write at least 1 episode a week, so that the story progresses quickly and does not reach the point of satisfaction, you can enlarge the story with other remote continents, including Assai and shadow islands, which are usually mentioned but not shown in the series, or you can invade the lands connected to the andals for a greater development
Reveal Spoiler mükemmel kurgu iştah açıcı karakterler ve olay örgüsü tek sorun en azından haftada 1 bölüm atılmalı gene de böyle bir fikir ile sıradanlığı aştığınız için tebrikler lütfen karakteri fazla aptal yapmayın
Chap 17 // It’s quite good for what it is. Romance: It is definitely not traditional monogamy. He has bedmates besides FMC that he will treat with respect ( eventually). But I prefer harem anyway so this sort of thing appeals to me. The taste of the MC may be slightly weird but as an enjoyer of GOT and whatnot, I doubt many of you will care about it. I want to say there is tragedy but in this it did not really hit that hard so do not worry about it. It was disappointing in some sense that we could not get the ****** route (for those that know ;) ) but whatever. But yes, on the whole it is quite good and I’ll be following this daily. Keep up the work author :)
I really like the story and I hope that the Author doesn't drop it. The story has it little amount of cringe moments, but it's little and it doesn't really affect the story. The character is a Dothraki so expect a morally gray character and not outright evil.
Interesting concept first time I saw a got story with a heavy emphasis on magic. That is readable.
Great story. I like the story and the way the time skips are made. The mc morale is questionable so be aware. That could be good or bad depending on your perspective. I like it so far. Good writing. Hope the updates and quality keep up🤘
SHAMELESS AUTHOR HERE!!!!!! It's kind of a Webnovel tradition at this point, nothing to say really, it's all in the story sypnosys. But I will answer any questions here~ Enjoy~
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This rating is for the 100 fan fic . Author have you dropped the 100 advanced preparation
Author I want a sequel And the faster and the more the better I write with gratitude to your reader and fan👍👍👍👍👍👍😁😁__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Gggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg o que é melhor e para terra e fica lá para treinar e fazer conhecer mesmo com a lot together of o a novo que novo trabalho e o que ano realizado feito dia ano e de de ⏰ o novas do e no e lugar do uma sempre de que e que grande 1⃣ guerra eu neve novo a o faz vai viagem festa volta trem Europa São frente novembro loja casa o a foi é aconteceu eu último dia último ontem
Garbage story with a soft-minded MC, not to mention the fact that there’s yuri in his harem. Absolutely disgusting.
🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
About a vampire who isn't a vampire being a jade white dothraki. White-washed it real nicely. Obviously reading that could make you weary, the author has the privilege of changing what he wishes but still keeping the messed up things like having slaves. if you ignore all that or just like it then the story is good. This is only my opinion. Unique origin, powers and a decent story progression. im only a few chapters in and so I may change my review for the better after reading more chapters. Hopefully there won't be too many more of the authors weird design notes and changes going forward. but who knows.
Curses that mc gets after his evolution makes zero sense. Besides that, the rest of the story is okay, if you can ignore mc's unnecessary dark personality. ///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
Reveal Spoiler Ohhhh yeeeeesss another perfect ( for me) GOT fanfic You got me rilled up reading your story author hoping for more chapters The back round is great The story has more potential I really 5⭐
a good story, although there is no system, the mc's power surpasses him and there is nothing he can't do, otherwise it seems like a simple plot, the mc is a bit amoral and does what he wants.
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do you know that you can write at least 1 episode a week, so that the story progresses quickly and does not reach the point of satisfaction, you can enlarge the story with other remote continents, including Assai and shadow islands, which are usually mentioned but not shown in the series, or you can invade the lands connected to the andals for a greater development
Reveal Spoiler mükemmel kurgu iştah açıcı karakterler ve olay örgüsü tek sorun en azından haftada 1 bölüm atılmalı gene de böyle bir fikir ile sıradanlığı aştığınız için tebrikler lütfen karakteri fazla aptal yapmayın
Chap 17 // It’s quite good for what it is. Romance: It is definitely not traditional monogamy. He has bedmates besides FMC that he will treat with respect ( eventually). But I prefer harem anyway so this sort of thing appeals to me. The taste of the MC may be slightly weird but as an enjoyer of GOT and whatnot, I doubt many of you will care about it. I want to say there is tragedy but in this it did not really hit that hard so do not worry about it. It was disappointing in some sense that we could not get the ****** route (for those that know ;) ) but whatever. But yes, on the whole it is quite good and I’ll be following this daily. Keep up the work author :)
I really like the story and I hope that the Author doesn't drop it. The story has it little amount of cringe moments, but it's little and it doesn't really affect the story. The character is a Dothraki so expect a morally gray character and not outright evil.
Interesting concept first time I saw a got story with a heavy emphasis on magic. That is readable.
Great story. I like the story and the way the time skips are made. The mc morale is questionable so be aware. That could be good or bad depending on your perspective. I like it so far. Good writing. Hope the updates and quality keep up🤘
SHAMELESS AUTHOR HERE!!!!!! It's kind of a Webnovel tradition at this point, nothing to say really, it's all in the story sypnosys. But I will answer any questions here~ Enjoy~
I can’t wait to read the next chapter hope it comes out soon