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The story is great can you make one chapter every week I know it hard to make a chapter because I'm a writer too and can you add alaya daddy scene in your chapter more
Only just picked this book on a whim to pass the time... Found myself loving everything chapter, the captivity and amazing story telling. Found myself looking forward to every chapter, personally I don't know what's wrong with other reader with some of the reviews on this amazing piece of work. Like it's "Fanfiction" I mean honestly the author can right whatever he wants, even if it has a undertone and a world the author the builds off that with his own imagination. So I say keep at it, this is a fun read with enough twist and turn to keep people going looking forward to more chapters in the future might try some of your other works to see there just as enjoyable 👍👍
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bro i just read the synosis so eting it sound amazing i since im nice like 0.00000001 of the thim i mean inm 100 %" yeah "
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Nice fic! Pls don't drop this. 🙏 ❤ ............... .....................................,....................... ....................
Espero que neo vaya a fate aphocryfa y pueda hacer un battle royal de todos vs el para subir su nivel que tanto esta buscando. Quizas tambien unir a Jeanne D'arc a su harem.
The book is interesting, funny, but not for everyone. People who like long, boring character development might not like it, but for me, she's great!!! Excuse my english, english is not my native language
This Novel is very enjoyable. there might be some mistakes here and there, but they are barely noticeable that only someone who wants to find the fault will notice it. The author is also fixing and improving the story so KUDOS with that. Also to those trash who rate a Novel with low stars without actual and definite Reason and proof, should just get out here and study some proper Discipline and Improve your behavior. It's funny reading the review of losers who only know how to express their nonsense and BS.
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starts with a cold ruthless protagonist who only care about his maid to a MC going out of his way to save strangers who he doesn't even know and deserve to die instead and he also wants to kill them but he doesn't and after that playing forced matchmaking in others family drama.......................I wish webnovel had an option to rate negative stars as well.
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Goooooooooooooooooooooooooooodddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! More updates please.
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good story please don't drop 💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖
There has quite a lot of hate due to the protagonist having a similar background to another fanfic. The hate is honestly stupid since its the story follows a different direction then the other fanfic which people supposedly believe this to be a copy which is false. it starts off cliche it starts branching off and follows a different path. The protagonist Neo is quite enjoyable to follow as he uses everything in his disposal to his advantage such as him not being afraid to change the course of the story to benefit him and his use of Denial of nothingnes is quite creative. If you are a fan of fate might as well give this a try it’s quite entertaining.
Writing quality is a bit bad but better than most other fate fanfics ironically. Author is basically cheating the plot with intermediate protagonist skill which kinda makes the whole plot cliche yet somewhat believable.
It's not bad, but it needs some improvement's. Like the diversity of the story and making some interesting Lore's. The update is slow, and character's should have interesting interaction's. And it'll be entertaining if you write more of someone else's POV. Also the fighting scenario's should be more exciting. You should also add a bit of comedy.
cap i want cap Send me this story, it has tremendous potential, all that's missing is the stability of the update and the grammar, I don't really care about the romance, the op tag already has my attention, the only thing that makes me r The really sad thing is the update instability of taking a long time to update and romance and I don't really care what you do with someone who is already good
The story is great can you make one chapter every week I know it hard to make a chapter because I'm a writer too and can you add alaya daddy scene in your chapter more
Only just picked this book on a whim to pass the time... Found myself loving everything chapter, the captivity and amazing story telling. Found myself looking forward to every chapter, personally I don't know what's wrong with other reader with some of the reviews on this amazing piece of work. Like it's "Fanfiction" I mean honestly the author can right whatever he wants, even if it has a undertone and a world the author the builds off that with his own imagination. So I say keep at it, this is a fun read with enough twist and turn to keep people going looking forward to more chapters in the future might try some of your other works to see there just as enjoyable 👍👍
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bro i just read the synosis so eting it sound amazing i since im nice like 0.00000001 of the thim i mean inm 100 %" yeah "
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Nice fic! Pls don't drop this. 🙏 ❤ ............... .....................................,....................... ....................
Espero que neo vaya a fate aphocryfa y pueda hacer un battle royal de todos vs el para subir su nivel que tanto esta buscando. Quizas tambien unir a Jeanne D'arc a su harem.
The book is interesting, funny, but not for everyone. People who like long, boring character development might not like it, but for me, she's great!!! Excuse my english, english is not my native language
This Novel is very enjoyable. there might be some mistakes here and there, but they are barely noticeable that only someone who wants to find the fault will notice it. The author is also fixing and improving the story so KUDOS with that. Also to those trash who rate a Novel with low stars without actual and definite Reason and proof, should just get out here and study some proper Discipline and Improve your behavior. It's funny reading the review of losers who only know how to express their nonsense and BS.
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starts with a cold ruthless protagonist who only care about his maid to a MC going out of his way to save strangers who he doesn't even know and deserve to die instead and he also wants to kill them but he doesn't and after that playing forced matchmaking in others family drama.......................I wish webnovel had an option to rate negative stars as well.
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Goooooooooooooooooooooooooooodddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! More updates please.
Cuando sacarás el próximo capítulo ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Espero que continúes con la historia
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good story please don't drop 💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖
There has quite a lot of hate due to the protagonist having a similar background to another fanfic. The hate is honestly stupid since its the story follows a different direction then the other fanfic which people supposedly believe this to be a copy which is false. it starts off cliche it starts branching off and follows a different path. The protagonist Neo is quite enjoyable to follow as he uses everything in his disposal to his advantage such as him not being afraid to change the course of the story to benefit him and his use of Denial of nothingnes is quite creative. If you are a fan of fate might as well give this a try it’s quite entertaining.
Writing quality is a bit bad but better than most other fate fanfics ironically. Author is basically cheating the plot with intermediate protagonist skill which kinda makes the whole plot cliche yet somewhat believable.
It's not bad, but it needs some improvement's. Like the diversity of the story and making some interesting Lore's. The update is slow, and character's should have interesting interaction's. And it'll be entertaining if you write more of someone else's POV. Also the fighting scenario's should be more exciting. You should also add a bit of comedy.
cap i want cap Send me this story, it has tremendous potential, all that's missing is the stability of the update and the grammar, I don't really care about the romance, the op tag already has my attention, the only thing that makes me r The really sad thing is the update instability of taking a long time to update and romance and I don't really care what you do with someone who is already good