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i like this fanfic I hope there's another like this one. And total Warhammer series for .e is the best.
I thought it was dc and Marvel fic but almost all chapters are warhammer which I do not know....you should put on the tag for that...... ..........
Warhammer funfiction with bit of Marvel and DC :D:D:D With time MC gets smarter and writing quality better. I rly like this fic so far.
Just started reading and I’m already hooked. Like the premise and hope it’s not dropped like so many other Warhammer stories. Keep up the good work!
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well folks this is the story we the warhammer gamers needed the lore is hard here and the world building is gold the marvel and dc for what i can see is jost a subplot to help the mc and belive me he will need it because he got the atention of all chaos gods and the hate of two of them i would be happy if the author go until the end of this story and really wanted to play some warhammer 3 with him someday
finally a good warhammer fantasy fanfic hope author doesnt drop and we get to see end times.
Hard recommend on this one, but some issues need to be addressed before you try it: 1) title is a little clickbait-ey - fic is first and foremost about Warhammer verse, with tiny bits and bobs of Marvel and DC sprinkled here and there. It takes about eighty chapters for the first arc to end and reach the DC part (Marvel is still off the table as of right now) 2) you may think that MC is a complete rеtаrd (you would be right) and drop the fic like a hot potato after a handful of chapters. Don't worry, this problem actually gets fixed before we get to double digit chapters 3) harem tag is a lie - it is drier than a desert in here 4) you can physically see author manually steering the story away from fic-breaking disasters by yanking the wheel, retconning things on the fly and (trying to) giving hasty in-universe explanations to that (which, to be fair, is better than either dropping the story or proceeding with the bad course and running a good thing into the ground). This happens frequently 5) there's some usual cosmic BS that always ruins fics going on in the background, but thankfully author just dropped that plotline in a very abrupt way (and thank god for that)
A really great book to read. Though chapter 79 ruined it for me. I will most likely stop reading this after chapter 79 because MC just told his entire life story to the heroes after first confront when MC did nothing wrong. MC was ok an intelligent intill chapter 79 why make MC dumb?
The author reading yours, I really liked it, especially the plot and how everything unfolds, but I started to like this work after 11 chapters when the beastmen attacked there and your work has a huge potential, and also your work is the best crossover warhammer fantasy battle, Marvel and DC
You disappointed me, I thought at least by the 50-60th chapter it would be about the universes of Marvel and DC, but it only started 75-80 and then a couple of chapters and that’s it, I wish the author a speedy recovery and I say goodbye to this
I like the story ....................................................................................................................................
Ok, so first of all, the story is mostly about war hammer universe. The title is completely off. The shop, Marvel/DC universe quickly falls away from the story after a first few chapters. Then the story gets a bit boring as most of the readers have almost no idea and knowledge regarding the Warhammer universe. Making it boring for the most part. It’s like blindly following the narrative. This made me a bit mad. Like can the author change the books name? It’s not about total war. The Marvel abd DC parts are off the story and takes place in only a few chapters. Furthermore, if he’s a shopkeeper, why is he not doing his job properly? Overall: 3.2 stars.
really good and is currently my favorite story. The characters are well written and consistent. The world is really well developed, and even for someone like me who has little to no knowledge of WH fantasy it's easy to get a grasp on the world and understand where, when, and how things are happening. The update stability is good but not great. The story progression is well paced, well thought out, logical, and it goes in a way I personally like. The writing quality is good, and although there are acational spelling mistakes and slight grammar mistakes, It doesn't really affect the story muc please keep writing this. I find it very entertaining and enjoyable to read.
60 chapters in, mc still stuck at Warhammer. some of the 'writing' got worse at about ch 50+, sometimes the pov suddenly change from "he" to "i", and vice versa. other than that, it's an interesting novel to read even for people who don't know about warhammer lore (it's still a bit confusing for me). tho I feels like author didn't make the fanfic with non-warhammer fans in mind.
I enjoy the novel a lot BUT the title is completely miss leading ... The system the MC gets has NOTHING to do with Total war. It has nothing to do with the game Total War Warhammer or the act of declaring war to get stronger. Also it says stuck between DC and Marvel but he is in Warhammer (AU). The story so far has had very little to do with DC and Marvel. The system of his doesn't give him DC and Marvel or Warhammer stuff it gives him anything the Author can think of at that moment. He had 3 BIG worlds to choose from to give the MC rewards but says screw it and gives him things for Dragon Ball Z, random Cultivation Novels, Ben 10 and MORE!! Pick a lane please!! The novel should be called the random missions and rewards with a shop! The consistency of this novel is 0. But other than the lies of the title the novel itself is fine.
While it is an overall good story the Marvel/DC aspects fall to the side pretty quickly as does the shopkeeper bits as well that majority of the storytelling is in the Warhammer universe. so is you're interested in the Marvel or DC in the title give this one a pass
Good job. A very intriguing fanfiction of course I didn't know total war was warhammer they are usually rare fics and to find it here along with some of marvel and dc is just really great read
I read the all the chapter available and so far the story is going great. It is quite fascinating that there is a fanfic of the Warhammer franchise here and this one is quite interesting. Keep up the good work author.
I must say it's a hidden gem . I would have given the author five star . but I am very disappointed in his chapter uploading speed . so it's 4 star 🐸. author I really liked your this fan fic . so don't drop it .
Just read all the chapters so far and it drew me in this is a great book so far hope you keep writing. Also if you have a update schedule just Curious what it is
i like this fanfic I hope there's another like this one. And total Warhammer series for .e is the best.
I thought it was dc and Marvel fic but almost all chapters are warhammer which I do not know....you should put on the tag for that...... ..........
Warhammer funfiction with bit of Marvel and DC :D:D:D With time MC gets smarter and writing quality better. I rly like this fic so far.
Just started reading and I’m already hooked. Like the premise and hope it’s not dropped like so many other Warhammer stories. Keep up the good work!
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well folks this is the story we the warhammer gamers needed the lore is hard here and the world building is gold the marvel and dc for what i can see is jost a subplot to help the mc and belive me he will need it because he got the atention of all chaos gods and the hate of two of them i would be happy if the author go until the end of this story and really wanted to play some warhammer 3 with him someday
finally a good warhammer fantasy fanfic hope author doesnt drop and we get to see end times.
Hard recommend on this one, but some issues need to be addressed before you try it: 1) title is a little clickbait-ey - fic is first and foremost about Warhammer verse, with tiny bits and bobs of Marvel and DC sprinkled here and there. It takes about eighty chapters for the first arc to end and reach the DC part (Marvel is still off the table as of right now) 2) you may think that MC is a complete rеtаrd (you would be right) and drop the fic like a hot potato after a handful of chapters. Don't worry, this problem actually gets fixed before we get to double digit chapters 3) harem tag is a lie - it is drier than a desert in here 4) you can physically see author manually steering the story away from fic-breaking disasters by yanking the wheel, retconning things on the fly and (trying to) giving hasty in-universe explanations to that (which, to be fair, is better than either dropping the story or proceeding with the bad course and running a good thing into the ground). This happens frequently 5) there's some usual cosmic BS that always ruins fics going on in the background, but thankfully author just dropped that plotline in a very abrupt way (and thank god for that)
A really great book to read. Though chapter 79 ruined it for me. I will most likely stop reading this after chapter 79 because MC just told his entire life story to the heroes after first confront when MC did nothing wrong. MC was ok an intelligent intill chapter 79 why make MC dumb?
The author reading yours, I really liked it, especially the plot and how everything unfolds, but I started to like this work after 11 chapters when the beastmen attacked there and your work has a huge potential, and also your work is the best crossover warhammer fantasy battle, Marvel and DC
You disappointed me, I thought at least by the 50-60th chapter it would be about the universes of Marvel and DC, but it only started 75-80 and then a couple of chapters and that’s it, I wish the author a speedy recovery and I say goodbye to this
I like the story ....................................................................................................................................
Ok, so first of all, the story is mostly about war hammer universe. The title is completely off. The shop, Marvel/DC universe quickly falls away from the story after a first few chapters. Then the story gets a bit boring as most of the readers have almost no idea and knowledge regarding the Warhammer universe. Making it boring for the most part. It’s like blindly following the narrative. This made me a bit mad. Like can the author change the books name? It’s not about total war. The Marvel abd DC parts are off the story and takes place in only a few chapters. Furthermore, if he’s a shopkeeper, why is he not doing his job properly? Overall: 3.2 stars.
really good and is currently my favorite story. The characters are well written and consistent. The world is really well developed, and even for someone like me who has little to no knowledge of WH fantasy it's easy to get a grasp on the world and understand where, when, and how things are happening. The update stability is good but not great. The story progression is well paced, well thought out, logical, and it goes in a way I personally like. The writing quality is good, and although there are acational spelling mistakes and slight grammar mistakes, It doesn't really affect the story muc please keep writing this. I find it very entertaining and enjoyable to read.
60 chapters in, mc still stuck at Warhammer. some of the 'writing' got worse at about ch 50+, sometimes the pov suddenly change from "he" to "i", and vice versa. other than that, it's an interesting novel to read even for people who don't know about warhammer lore (it's still a bit confusing for me). tho I feels like author didn't make the fanfic with non-warhammer fans in mind.
I enjoy the novel a lot BUT the title is completely miss leading ... The system the MC gets has NOTHING to do with Total war. It has nothing to do with the game Total War Warhammer or the act of declaring war to get stronger. Also it says stuck between DC and Marvel but he is in Warhammer (AU). The story so far has had very little to do with DC and Marvel. The system of his doesn't give him DC and Marvel or Warhammer stuff it gives him anything the Author can think of at that moment. He had 3 BIG worlds to choose from to give the MC rewards but says screw it and gives him things for Dragon Ball Z, random Cultivation Novels, Ben 10 and MORE!! Pick a lane please!! The novel should be called the random missions and rewards with a shop! The consistency of this novel is 0. But other than the lies of the title the novel itself is fine.
While it is an overall good story the Marvel/DC aspects fall to the side pretty quickly as does the shopkeeper bits as well that majority of the storytelling is in the Warhammer universe. so is you're interested in the Marvel or DC in the title give this one a pass
Good job. A very intriguing fanfiction of course I didn't know total war was warhammer they are usually rare fics and to find it here along with some of marvel and dc is just really great read
I read the all the chapter available and so far the story is going great. It is quite fascinating that there is a fanfic of the Warhammer franchise here and this one is quite interesting. Keep up the good work author.
I must say it's a hidden gem . I would have given the author five star . but I am very disappointed in his chapter uploading speed . so it's 4 star 🐸. author I really liked your this fan fic . so don't drop it .
Just read all the chapters so far and it drew me in this is a great book so far hope you keep writing. Also if you have a update schedule just Curious what it is
great but muster talent and till b nii ggoooooooooooooood