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I'm not a professional reviewer or anything, just someone who thought to give his two-cents about what he thinks about this novel. I've read up to ch. 78, so this review will be based on that. Writing Quality: 4/5 - There are a few mistakes when using he/her or his/hers, nothing too major but it's enough to make you have to pause and re-read what just happened to 'Get it'. Stability of Updates: 4/5 - I started reading when there were already 78 chapters available, so I have yet to experience any wait time, so it'd be unfair to give a perfect for this. I also noticed that the release dates for most the chapters take place roughly every two days (-ish), so that's okay. Story Development: 4/5 - The pacing is fine as it is, especially once you get to the later chapters. Though there are parts that feel a bit ... draggy? Character Design: 5/5 - I'm really liking the MC (Robin is his name). He knows what he wants to do, he has a conscience that he won't cross easily (good on him), he grows as a person and yet still manages to stay himself. Again, I'm no expert or anything when it comes to reviewing and stuff but I like this. Not to mention all the other side/support characters, they're all fun to read about. Though I will say this, I will drop this to a 2/5 if my boy Gengar (spoilers, MC gets a Gengar) don't show up and get some of that spotlight soon... Jk author, jk ... no I'm not! ... nah, jk, jk ... or am I? World Background: 5/5 - The in-novel world is based upon our current real world (takes place in 2023) so expect a lot of current real world stuff in the novel. I be sincere here, I'm not 100% up to date on everything going on world-wide, but again I'm no expert, so I'm willing to believe ya for the sake of the enjoyment of the novel, hahaha! Yeah I probably could've been okay rating this 4/5, but I actually learned quite a bit about Indian culture through this novel so I figured, "eh, why not a 5?" Overview: Fact is, should you spend your precious time reading this novel or not? I'd say... yeah, give it a shot. I'll admit, it's not the greatest novel out there, but it's still a fun and entertaining novel to read. I guess I'll update this review once it gets to 100+ chapters to show any change in thought.
In my opinion, everything was extremely well written, and even though it’s slow, it needs to be and the things that you explore about the games cannot be explored too much of death because the rules are set first and most of things that he does explored into our explored plus this book would’ve gotten even slower as people are complaining if we actually took time to explore more stuff and it was just getting good. The only problem I have about the story is the lack of updates speed and the fact that I’m pretty sure this guy abandoned it, I mean another Brazilian person or person in like another country that’s not well off abandoned his book and completely destroyed it even though I liked it which was the apocalypse tech snow or something like that which was about a train and it was the coolest shit ever but besides the point is execution extremely good and everything else is actually quite good because some things could’ve been explored more but again it would’ve gotten slower but generally in my opinion, the execution was good. It’s the update speeds that were bad
my 2nd favourite book after your( multiverse of marvel ) book thank you for your hard work 😊
Three stars for update. Is this story gonna be dropped? Been a month since last update.
Good story, its more like real than any fictional one..The settings, background, characters and the likes are so authentic. Hope to read more like this one..its quite boring to read some storyline that redundant in settings and the plot..anyways im enjoying and love the story. Good luck.
Tried to give it a chance but honestly just not worth it to me continue reading. Like others have menyion in the past great concept ruin by real dumb MC with retarted decisions. Great power sure but MC low IQ, dumb decisions, character more like a naive beta trying portray a wannabe chad. Really a potential like interest so gorgeus as female game characters he has made me laugh for how silly that is, besides his trying be hero like retart mentality for some reason. Sure I could get more specific but see no point thpugh some of those actions could be cause character development forced to be a idiot at times, though common sense would work wonders. Just my thoughts some might enjoy it but definitely not me. If you want idiotic mc, getting annoyed, dissapointment constantly this is the story for you.
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I must say that I loved your story I give it a 100 out of 100 but I wanted to ask you something, I don't know if you will read this but I could upload your story to my Youtube channel and of course I will give the credits to you because it is your story and I will say that I can follow you?[img=recommend]
Muy buen libro. .............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
When the MC has very strong power and with almost no limitations, the only way for the protagonist to not take over the world in a few weeks and make it stupid, and that's exactly what happened here. (Google translator)
Me gusta mucho sigue con el progreso, solo un consejo por favor describe lo más posible el ambiente galáctico y da más desarrollo a las especies que trae el prota para los que no conocemos a todas y también en cuanto a su relación con las demás especies que se van relacionando entre si[img=recommend]
excuse me but i know there is another novel like this one out there but hte mc takes out cultivation manuals from 'Idle Cultivation' and cultivates using that, is there any one who knows that novel... filler...
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The pace of story is not properly controlled sometime it is fast pace while suddenly story would stagnate.Otherwise story is nice and can be given a try by anyone who is reading this review.( continuing depends upon your taste)
A masterpiece, we clearly see the difference between this story and that of Marvel. This MC is pretty down to earth and knows his power and the fact that people will want to open him up if it comes out. I hope he won't tell anyone, not his parents or his cousin. It will only endanger them. My only problem is how he lets people know about magic. If he can get into people's heads, he can forget them too. He has no reason to retain Mr. X's spy, he should have fired him. Nor the other kid. Other than that the story is pretty well put together.
It's nice but the Author should have done technokinesis to make it a tech-based novel.
I had dropped this novel/fan-fiction at around chapter 20 something, but came back after a while cause I thought it became better. It didn’t. Sigh. There are a few problems in this story. The main character is dumb. Or maybe perhaps due to my sociopathic thinking, the way he acts and does things is not to my liking. Anyways, onto a real review: Writing Quality: 4/5. There are minor grammar mistakes here and there, which isn’t all that bad, except for the fact that it goes something like this: “What do I do?!” Robin held *her* head. I hope you fix things like that, although minor, it still gets under my skin at times. Updating Stability: 5/5. Considering the chapters are about 1,500 words, the updating stability is great, 5/week. Story Develpment: 5/5. Over all, the story development is great, I especially like the power of the Mc, along with how the history of the world is turning out more and more interesting. Character Design: 2/5. I know people will hate on this, but c’mon. The mc is stupid as of chapter 34. His decisions are stupid, his motivation is stupid, his actions are stupid and not at all thought out. I would have expected someone who has watched anime to at least know how to act with his newfound powers, plus the fact that Robin is an Adult further adds salt to the wound. I hope Robin grows in his intelligence department. ***Please author, give me some hope, tell me that he will somehow grow smarter, otherwise I will really lose my motivation to read this. Please tell me.*** World Background: 5/5. So far so good. Over all: 4.2 ⭐️
Jesus, I'm only here in the reviews to say that many readers in the early chapters are such savages, it reminds me back in Twitter and I hope they stuf
Caught up with the latest chapter. Got to say this type of novels, me likey😗 does anyone know any other works with a similar background where mc takes things from fictional worlds to real life??
You should have him get the Asgard core from stargate it has all the tech and knowledge of their race before they killed the self’s it’s on the Pegasus spaceship and it’s in like ever stargate game lol but they have some of the coolest tech too and he could learn ascension and stay in his human form he’d become a immortal energy being with full control of a higher realm in the 4th dimension
"Bring the Game Items to Real World" is a thrilling webnovel that explores the captivating premise of merging the virtual and real worlds by bringing game items into reality. With its action-packed storyline, this fanfiction offers an entertaining and fast-paced reading experience for fans of the genreIn terms of writing style, "Bring the Game Items to Real World" provides an accessible and easy-to-follow narrative. The dialogue flows smoothly, and the action sequences are vividly described, enhancing the sense of immersion. However, there are instances where the pacing feels uneven, with some sections rushing through important plot points while others linger on less significant details.In conclusion, "Bring the Game Items to Real World" is an enjoyable novel that is keeping readers engaged with its fast-paced plot and diverse challenges. While it could benefit from more robust character development and world-building, fans of the genre will find this fanfiction a satisfying read that sparks their imagination and leaves them eager for more virtual adventures
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The bad: the only bad thing is that now we have to pay for reeding some of the chapters, and that could be a little dangerous because it's kind of a fanfic. (but i'm not sure, so if i'm wrong everything is great) The good: everything else... Great quality, story and world background, it's really awesome.
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I really want this fanfic to reach the top so that author can focus more on it and upload more chapters of this fanfic. it's absolutely amazing.
Get the tool gun from gary’s mod. I crave seeing chaos, physgun would be great too
The description says the mc is realistic, if I see pokemon running around like nobody business I will be disappointed.
read till ch 40 . so I'm just gonna speak of my likes and dislikes for this novel, I like the theme and the skill of the mc, but at the same time it's kinda feels like wasting the potential... you know there are so many things you can take advantage off but you aren't . around ch 40, the mc wants to improve the world and I get it but he also focuses on galactic development , and u just wanna say world peace is not gonna happen in 10 chapters, if he slowly develops the world and gain power with connections, the process will gradually lead to a better world so I think instead of focusing on just changing the world focus on improving yourself and getting more connections . . the hesitation to kill and guilt of killing someone indirectly is not good... I get it if you wanna slowly improve the character but a commander/leader can't be a naive person. . it has a decent writing so you don't have to worry about reading problems
I usually don't make review.. But this fanfict actually made me pulling my hair so hard. So I'll try to make my review as fair as possible without spoiling the stories.. The Good * The writing actually really good. Languange wise and how Author bring the story to the table. * The premise actually have potential. Dig deep and make it realistic as possible. You can do it Author! * The interaction between character and how Author describe thing felt so natural. Believe me, I write a lot as it is my job. It's hard to write as good as how Author write. The Bad * The premise itself is double-eged sword. It have potential, but can go wrong easily if Author don't know what is the goal. And that actually happened to this story. * The character dan interaction between them itself was really fun to read. But not their decision. Try to read it by yourself. If you don't like, then you won't. If you like, then it gonna be a decent reading material to past time. The Ugly * The story development is.... how to put it nicely... dumb. MC shouldn't be this irrational and clueless on every choices he made with his background. Seriously? I won't nitpick. But, really Author? He is adult for Godsake! Not a 5th grader. If you said he is gonna be realistic, stick with it. (Sorry for my rambling) I know Author write some fanfict in this platform. So maybe if you as reader wanna try this fict, give it a try... If you feel this stories not your cup of tea, try other fict made by Author. Godspeed for Author! Wish you all the best. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Good as expected, Writing quality: Good as it is. Easy to understand, good paragraphing and sentencing. Little to no error! story development: Like I said in the qna, I'm in doubt about how you're going to proceed, I still feel like we're still in the prologue for the time being. I'm expecting a lot tho and the potential your premise has is immense so I hope you'll make use of it. Character design: I'm expecting a character growth. As good as the mc is, I feel he's not mature enough, but I understand he just got his power and if I was him, I would excited too and do a lot of unneeded stuff, but that's why I'm expecting a character growth. updating: Yup, good as always, I'm seeing update nearly everyday so props given world background: Similar to story development, still unsure of it, I'm expecting a profound background too and hope its not so " bland " to say. Overall: Much love, interesting premises, lots of potential. Sure the beginnings chapters might not be the best according to some but I understand him and his situation of finding he has power out of the blue. PR: I recommend to read it and support the author, he has a good reputation for his other book so I expect a good story from this. And don't you dare drop this, I've got my headlights on you 🚛
I'm not a professional reviewer or anything, just someone who thought to give his two-cents about what he thinks about this novel. I've read up to ch. 78, so this review will be based on that. Writing Quality: 4/5 - There are a few mistakes when using he/her or his/hers, nothing too major but it's enough to make you have to pause and re-read what just happened to 'Get it'. Stability of Updates: 4/5 - I started reading when there were already 78 chapters available, so I have yet to experience any wait time, so it'd be unfair to give a perfect for this. I also noticed that the release dates for most the chapters take place roughly every two days (-ish), so that's okay. Story Development: 4/5 - The pacing is fine as it is, especially once you get to the later chapters. Though there are parts that feel a bit ... draggy? Character Design: 5/5 - I'm really liking the MC (Robin is his name). He knows what he wants to do, he has a conscience that he won't cross easily (good on him), he grows as a person and yet still manages to stay himself. Again, I'm no expert or anything when it comes to reviewing and stuff but I like this. Not to mention all the other side/support characters, they're all fun to read about. Though I will say this, I will drop this to a 2/5 if my boy Gengar (spoilers, MC gets a Gengar) don't show up and get some of that spotlight soon... Jk author, jk ... no I'm not! ... nah, jk, jk ... or am I? World Background: 5/5 - The in-novel world is based upon our current real world (takes place in 2023) so expect a lot of current real world stuff in the novel. I be sincere here, I'm not 100% up to date on everything going on world-wide, but again I'm no expert, so I'm willing to believe ya for the sake of the enjoyment of the novel, hahaha! Yeah I probably could've been okay rating this 4/5, but I actually learned quite a bit about Indian culture through this novel so I figured, "eh, why not a 5?" Overview: Fact is, should you spend your precious time reading this novel or not? I'd say... yeah, give it a shot. I'll admit, it's not the greatest novel out there, but it's still a fun and entertaining novel to read. I guess I'll update this review once it gets to 100+ chapters to show any change in thought.
In my opinion, everything was extremely well written, and even though it’s slow, it needs to be and the things that you explore about the games cannot be explored too much of death because the rules are set first and most of things that he does explored into our explored plus this book would’ve gotten even slower as people are complaining if we actually took time to explore more stuff and it was just getting good. The only problem I have about the story is the lack of updates speed and the fact that I’m pretty sure this guy abandoned it, I mean another Brazilian person or person in like another country that’s not well off abandoned his book and completely destroyed it even though I liked it which was the apocalypse tech snow or something like that which was about a train and it was the coolest shit ever but besides the point is execution extremely good and everything else is actually quite good because some things could’ve been explored more but again it would’ve gotten slower but generally in my opinion, the execution was good. It’s the update speeds that were bad
my 2nd favourite book after your( multiverse of marvel ) book thank you for your hard work 😊
Three stars for update. Is this story gonna be dropped? Been a month since last update.
Good story, its more like real than any fictional one..The settings, background, characters and the likes are so authentic. Hope to read more like this one..its quite boring to read some storyline that redundant in settings and the plot..anyways im enjoying and love the story. Good luck.
Tried to give it a chance but honestly just not worth it to me continue reading. Like others have menyion in the past great concept ruin by real dumb MC with retarted decisions. Great power sure but MC low IQ, dumb decisions, character more like a naive beta trying portray a wannabe chad. Really a potential like interest so gorgeus as female game characters he has made me laugh for how silly that is, besides his trying be hero like retart mentality for some reason. Sure I could get more specific but see no point thpugh some of those actions could be cause character development forced to be a idiot at times, though common sense would work wonders. Just my thoughts some might enjoy it but definitely not me. If you want idiotic mc, getting annoyed, dissapointment constantly this is the story for you.
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I must say that I loved your story I give it a 100 out of 100 but I wanted to ask you something, I don't know if you will read this but I could upload your story to my Youtube channel and of course I will give the credits to you because it is your story and I will say that I can follow you?[img=recommend]
Muy buen libro. .............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
When the MC has very strong power and with almost no limitations, the only way for the protagonist to not take over the world in a few weeks and make it stupid, and that's exactly what happened here. (Google translator)
Me gusta mucho sigue con el progreso, solo un consejo por favor describe lo más posible el ambiente galáctico y da más desarrollo a las especies que trae el prota para los que no conocemos a todas y también en cuanto a su relación con las demás especies que se van relacionando entre si[img=recommend]
excuse me but i know there is another novel like this one out there but hte mc takes out cultivation manuals from 'Idle Cultivation' and cultivates using that, is there any one who knows that novel... filler...
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The pace of story is not properly controlled sometime it is fast pace while suddenly story would stagnate.Otherwise story is nice and can be given a try by anyone who is reading this review.( continuing depends upon your taste)
A masterpiece, we clearly see the difference between this story and that of Marvel. This MC is pretty down to earth and knows his power and the fact that people will want to open him up if it comes out. I hope he won't tell anyone, not his parents or his cousin. It will only endanger them. My only problem is how he lets people know about magic. If he can get into people's heads, he can forget them too. He has no reason to retain Mr. X's spy, he should have fired him. Nor the other kid. Other than that the story is pretty well put together.
It's nice but the Author should have done technokinesis to make it a tech-based novel.
I had dropped this novel/fan-fiction at around chapter 20 something, but came back after a while cause I thought it became better. It didn’t. Sigh. There are a few problems in this story. The main character is dumb. Or maybe perhaps due to my sociopathic thinking, the way he acts and does things is not to my liking. Anyways, onto a real review: Writing Quality: 4/5. There are minor grammar mistakes here and there, which isn’t all that bad, except for the fact that it goes something like this: “What do I do?!” Robin held *her* head. I hope you fix things like that, although minor, it still gets under my skin at times. Updating Stability: 5/5. Considering the chapters are about 1,500 words, the updating stability is great, 5/week. Story Develpment: 5/5. Over all, the story development is great, I especially like the power of the Mc, along with how the history of the world is turning out more and more interesting. Character Design: 2/5. I know people will hate on this, but c’mon. The mc is stupid as of chapter 34. His decisions are stupid, his motivation is stupid, his actions are stupid and not at all thought out. I would have expected someone who has watched anime to at least know how to act with his newfound powers, plus the fact that Robin is an Adult further adds salt to the wound. I hope Robin grows in his intelligence department. ***Please author, give me some hope, tell me that he will somehow grow smarter, otherwise I will really lose my motivation to read this. Please tell me.*** World Background: 5/5. So far so good. Over all: 4.2 ⭐️
Jesus, I'm only here in the reviews to say that many readers in the early chapters are such savages, it reminds me back in Twitter and I hope they stuf
Caught up with the latest chapter. Got to say this type of novels, me likey😗 does anyone know any other works with a similar background where mc takes things from fictional worlds to real life??
You should have him get the Asgard core from stargate it has all the tech and knowledge of their race before they killed the self’s it’s on the Pegasus spaceship and it’s in like ever stargate game lol but they have some of the coolest tech too and he could learn ascension and stay in his human form he’d become a immortal energy being with full control of a higher realm in the 4th dimension
"Bring the Game Items to Real World" is a thrilling webnovel that explores the captivating premise of merging the virtual and real worlds by bringing game items into reality. With its action-packed storyline, this fanfiction offers an entertaining and fast-paced reading experience for fans of the genreIn terms of writing style, "Bring the Game Items to Real World" provides an accessible and easy-to-follow narrative. The dialogue flows smoothly, and the action sequences are vividly described, enhancing the sense of immersion. However, there are instances where the pacing feels uneven, with some sections rushing through important plot points while others linger on less significant details.In conclusion, "Bring the Game Items to Real World" is an enjoyable novel that is keeping readers engaged with its fast-paced plot and diverse challenges. While it could benefit from more robust character development and world-building, fans of the genre will find this fanfiction a satisfying read that sparks their imagination and leaves them eager for more virtual adventures
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The bad: the only bad thing is that now we have to pay for reeding some of the chapters, and that could be a little dangerous because it's kind of a fanfic. (but i'm not sure, so if i'm wrong everything is great) The good: everything else... Great quality, story and world background, it's really awesome.
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I really want this fanfic to reach the top so that author can focus more on it and upload more chapters of this fanfic. it's absolutely amazing.
Get the tool gun from gary’s mod. I crave seeing chaos, physgun would be great too
The description says the mc is realistic, if I see pokemon running around like nobody business I will be disappointed.
read till ch 40 . so I'm just gonna speak of my likes and dislikes for this novel, I like the theme and the skill of the mc, but at the same time it's kinda feels like wasting the potential... you know there are so many things you can take advantage off but you aren't . around ch 40, the mc wants to improve the world and I get it but he also focuses on galactic development , and u just wanna say world peace is not gonna happen in 10 chapters, if he slowly develops the world and gain power with connections, the process will gradually lead to a better world so I think instead of focusing on just changing the world focus on improving yourself and getting more connections . . the hesitation to kill and guilt of killing someone indirectly is not good... I get it if you wanna slowly improve the character but a commander/leader can't be a naive person. . it has a decent writing so you don't have to worry about reading problems
I usually don't make review.. But this fanfict actually made me pulling my hair so hard. So I'll try to make my review as fair as possible without spoiling the stories.. The Good * The writing actually really good. Languange wise and how Author bring the story to the table. * The premise actually have potential. Dig deep and make it realistic as possible. You can do it Author! * The interaction between character and how Author describe thing felt so natural. Believe me, I write a lot as it is my job. It's hard to write as good as how Author write. The Bad * The premise itself is double-eged sword. It have potential, but can go wrong easily if Author don't know what is the goal. And that actually happened to this story. * The character dan interaction between them itself was really fun to read. But not their decision. Try to read it by yourself. If you don't like, then you won't. If you like, then it gonna be a decent reading material to past time. The Ugly * The story development is.... how to put it nicely... dumb. MC shouldn't be this irrational and clueless on every choices he made with his background. Seriously? I won't nitpick. But, really Author? He is adult for Godsake! Not a 5th grader. If you said he is gonna be realistic, stick with it. (Sorry for my rambling) I know Author write some fanfict in this platform. So maybe if you as reader wanna try this fict, give it a try... If you feel this stories not your cup of tea, try other fict made by Author. Godspeed for Author! Wish you all the best. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Good as expected, Writing quality: Good as it is. Easy to understand, good paragraphing and sentencing. Little to no error! story development: Like I said in the qna, I'm in doubt about how you're going to proceed, I still feel like we're still in the prologue for the time being. I'm expecting a lot tho and the potential your premise has is immense so I hope you'll make use of it. Character design: I'm expecting a character growth. As good as the mc is, I feel he's not mature enough, but I understand he just got his power and if I was him, I would excited too and do a lot of unneeded stuff, but that's why I'm expecting a character growth. updating: Yup, good as always, I'm seeing update nearly everyday so props given world background: Similar to story development, still unsure of it, I'm expecting a profound background too and hope its not so " bland " to say. Overall: Much love, interesting premises, lots of potential. Sure the beginnings chapters might not be the best according to some but I understand him and his situation of finding he has power out of the blue. PR: I recommend to read it and support the author, he has a good reputation for his other book so I expect a good story from this. And don't you dare drop this, I've got my headlights on you 🚛