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This is Naruto, but the main characters are better written and make more sense, they also seem more human. There's a couple grammatical errors but they don't affect the reading so they don't matter too much. I'm curious about how the rest of the story will end up like.
This is the best Naruto fan fic I have read so far . Naruto in this one is more mature like we all wanted him to be , just like Menma from the tsukiyomi and sauske more matured and a tad darker Overall it's a nice fanfic and I hope you never drop it.Give me good chapters I shall give you more stones.
continue your work author!!!!! (っ ͡❛ ‿‿ ͡❛)っ [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp] -and don't drop ( ❛ ͜ʖ ❛ )👌
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This is Naruto, but the main characters are better written and make more sense, they also seem more human. There's a couple grammatical errors but they don't affect the reading so they don't matter too much. I'm curious about how the rest of the story will end up like.
This is the best Naruto fan fic I have read so far . Naruto in this one is more mature like we all wanted him to be , just like Menma from the tsukiyomi and sauske more matured and a tad darker Overall it's a nice fanfic and I hope you never drop it.Give me good chapters I shall give you more stones.
continue your work author!!!!! (っ ͡❛ ‿‿ ͡❛)っ [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp] -and don't drop ( ❛ ͜ʖ ❛ )👌
I liked I love you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
DONT DROPP IT OR ELSE[img=recommend][img=update] v v v v v v v v v v v vv v v v v v v v v v vv v v v v v v v v v v v v v
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