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It's a decent system book, and I like the ML. However, sometimes the writing style can be a little off, but for the most part it's good. I'm curious to see where this goes.
1.4star for writing ,little grammatical mistakes. 2.4star Nothing much to see for development in 10 chapters 3.1star Here comes the system, reading every line is so painful that I have equipped myself with large what ofH2O 4..4star fine 5.4stars Ever watch the show The Boys, it's 70℅same
Noice!!! So far ''PLOT" is really good I joined hope you maintain the quality as novel progress. .....,..,.......................................................
It's a decent system book, and I like the ML. However, sometimes the writing style can be a little off, but for the most part it's good. I'm curious to see where this goes.
1.4star for writing ,little grammatical mistakes. 2.4star Nothing much to see for development in 10 chapters 3.1star Here comes the system, reading every line is so painful that I have equipped myself with large what ofH2O 4..4star fine 5.4stars Ever watch the show The Boys, it's 70℅same
Noice!!! So far ''PLOT" is really good I joined hope you maintain the quality as novel progress. .....,..,.......................................................