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This is a nice story I liked so far its detailed and it's easy to understand so keep up the good work and I will remember to check when a new chapter comes out. Good luck with the novel. -BattelC
A good start, keep going author!!! I wonder how are you gonna how are you gonna handle the relationship between he mc and other bat family/ Justice league members.
Chapter 2 rn, and so far the story is good. I like how paced the action is, in most recent stuff authors like to describe the scene rather than show it. I’m hoping that mc gains a bit more personality and that other characters are describe realistically. So far so good, liking the story and waiting for it to get some viewers; good job author. [img=recommend]
I think you missed an opportunity to make a businessman character like lex luttor, instead of some criminal in Gotham, with all the technology in the system you could create a company and try to turn Gotham into Night City (I thought this now but Gotham is perfect for that). After all, let's agree that with this system the mc has a very weak power limit compared to DC characters.
This is a nice story I liked so far its detailed and it's easy to understand so keep up the good work and I will remember to check when a new chapter comes out. Good luck with the novel. -BattelC
A good start, keep going author!!! I wonder how are you gonna how are you gonna handle the relationship between he mc and other bat family/ Justice league members.
Chapter 2 rn, and so far the story is good. I like how paced the action is, in most recent stuff authors like to describe the scene rather than show it. I’m hoping that mc gains a bit more personality and that other characters are describe realistically. So far so good, liking the story and waiting for it to get some viewers; good job author. [img=recommend]
I think you missed an opportunity to make a businessman character like lex luttor, instead of some criminal in Gotham, with all the technology in the system you could create a company and try to turn Gotham into Night City (I thought this now but Gotham is perfect for that). After all, let's agree that with this system the mc has a very weak power limit compared to DC characters.