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Chapter 430: Chapter 429 - Dressrosa Training Session.

[Chapter Size: 1900 Words.]

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"How are you?" Luffy took a few calm steps as he entered a room with a woman with green hair lying on the bed.

"I'm fine..." Monet responded cautiously while looking at him. "You showed up at the last moment after I lost consciousness..." She commented, and Luffy nodded.

"I didn't arrive earlier, but I got there in time to take down that guy..." Luffy replied calmly.

"Thank you..." she said.

"It was nothing, Lami took care of you." Luffy spoke as he touched her face, and she looked at him with a glimmer in her eyes.

They ended up talking for a bit, and soon Luffy left the place. He went to check on his companion and discuss Sugar's fate. Luffy was quite adamant about not leaving her unsupervised, but she could still live an ordinary life as long as she continued wearing chains to nullify her powers.

In any case, after leaving the place, Luffy headed to one of the islands where everyone was being gathered at that moment. After all, he was about to set his plans in motion. The Chinjao family had also arrived, so all forces were assembled.

From his former captains: Hancock, Foxy, Bellamy, Bartolomeo, Wyper, Page-One, Greg, Dorry, and Brogy. These were the captains with combat ships, while the other members who trained in Skypiea for one year were part of the espionage division of the current Baroque Works. Lola was a member as a scientist, not involved in fighting, but was responsible for creating the special metal to replenish the forces of all allied nations and Luffy's plans.

Now, with this new recruitment, Luffy had attack captains such as: Ideo, Cavendish, Kyros, Tesoro, Orlumbus, Hajrudin, Leo, Sai, and other minor captains.

There were 20 pirate captains in total. It may not be as many as Whitebeard's over 40, but it was still enough to take on that fleet if the old man were still alive.

Viola was his ally from Dressrosa, not an attack captain, the same could be said of her father, as they would remain taking care of Dressrosa. But Kyros would join the fight since his daughter was still an official member with great power, and he wanted to keep looking after her.

Elizabello II was also an ally who would look after the Kingdom of Prodence as Luffy's ally. Some ships had arrived, but some, like Hajrudin's companions, had not, as they had forgotten about his existence due to Sugar. During this time, Luffy had also convinced Leo, one of Dressrosa's fairies, to join the fight with him.

He was about to fight in Wano and could have Inuarashi and Nekomamushi in his crew once he won the war and liberated Wano.

He looked at everyone there, along with their crews watching him from atop a rock while his main crew observed their captain dealing with the maritime force of over 20,000 pirates that were part of his fleet.

"People, champions of the Straw Hat Grand Fleet," Luffy began, his voice easily reaching everyone.

"I'm here to say that if you're here, you trust my vision of the world and what I seek for the sea, because this is a path of no return for everyone present. From now on, our fight won't just be against pirates or the navy, but the government will see us as a real threat, perhaps greater than the Yonkous themselves. And do you know why?" Luffy spoke, breaking into a smile.

"Because they fear us," he said as everyone looked at him, dozens of thousands of eyes staring at him, trying to etch each of his words into their minds during this speech. Luffy was making history because today would be the first time the world would see his fleet in its entirety.

After the events a year ago, he was known as the Fifth Emperor, the Emperor without territory and without a fleet. However, what they couldn't imagine was that since the moment he gained consciousness in that barrel in East Blue, Luffy had been working swiftly to pave his way to the top of this world. He had two powerful Devil Fruits along with his Haki, yet he knew he couldn't do everything alone and had been seeking as many key allies as possible.

'In the end... Everything I've been working on in this world since I regained my memories almost two years ago, this is my result...' Luffy remarked as he looked at the fleet. This was the fruit of his labor, but it was only the beginning.

"And from this day forward, we will shake the New World and destroy its entire power pyramid. But that's not enough. We will find the One Piece, but even that's not enough. We will shake the whole world, and even if everyone turns against us, we will stand firm and fight tooth and nail to prove that we are unstoppable!!" Luffy exclaimed with a wide grin.

"OHHHH!!!" The crowd was captivated by his charisma, despite the simplicity of his speech. Thousands of minds imagined themselves being feared by the entire world.

"Anyway, let's start the training. I hope you're ready. Those who are already part of the crew will go to the island of dinosaurs to train with them. My companions will help you in the training. Those who are joining now can stay here—this is the island of animals, and we will begin your training immediately." He spoke as the two groups separated, with Zoro, Franky, Jimbei, and Yamato overseeing the training of the older members while Luffy stayed to train the newcomers in his own way.

He then began explaining how he would do it, and everyone's eyes shone with anticipation as various animals were summoned from the forest, approaching with more fear of Luffy than genuine intent to fight the newcomers.

Many who didn't know his methods were eager to undergo training under one of the most powerful pirate crews in the world. However, reality was different, as all of them now found themselves sprawled on the ground.

Thousands of bodies lay scattered on the ground in that training area, with groans and the cracking of bones audible as the animals retreated. Even the strongest members, capable of handling one of those beasts using Haki, were overwhelmed by multiple opponents, losing the fights and getting beaten, as was the case with Tesoro and Chinjao, who, despite their strength, were now lying buried in the ground.

Luffy stood there, arms crossed and one eyebrow raised, watching the entire scene. Various animals had charged at them from the forest, and the confidence they had before was lost as they saw the enormous creatures not wasting a moment to start thrashing thousands of people.

Luffy snorted. "It's the first day, and you're all on the ground?" He asked with a dissatisfied look, staring at all the men and women who dared to enter his training.

"You can go... What a disappointment..." Luffy spoke to the animals, who awaited his orders. They all nodded and returned to the forest.

"You can't be serious," the men in front of him muttered as they heard his words, exhausted and defeated.

"Of course I'm serious," Luffy replied firmly. "It's no accident that you're part of this crew, but it's disappointing to see that we haven't even started our real training yet. We were just warming up..." Luffy continued.

"Warming up... how can you be so ruthless...?" Baccarat, lying on the ground, murmured from the other side, not understanding how he could be so harsh, even with her, who was his lover.

Meanwhile, nearby, Vivi was holding Sinbad in her arms, observing the commotion. She merely sighed as her son shifted in her embrace, raising his hands as if reaching for his father, laughing at Luffy's words despite not comprehending them.

"He's not going to stop, is he?" Vivi commented, recalling how demanding Luffy had been, even with her. The first days on the ship were horrible. He expected her to grow stronger, but in his own way, and he was not the knight she had imagined. He was a harsh man who only sought satisfactory results in training.

"Well, it reminds me of the old days... we hardly got any rest either..." Nojiko said, approaching Vivi while looking at the boy in her arms.

"It's true... Luffy's brother, that Sabo, also went for training with the other members on the dinosaur island... at least he doesn't have Luffy as his trainer," Vivi observed as she watched Nojiko running her fingers through her son's hair.

"Are you thinking your son will be like mine?" Vivi asked with a playful tone.

"A little, but my hair is darker..." Nojiko commented with a smile.

"And aren't you planning to have one?" Vivi inquired.

"Not now... I'm scared..." Nojiko murmured, and Vivi nodded. She had been scared too when she got pregnant, worrying whether her boy would be safe, but the moment she saw him, she fell in love with her son and didn't regret giving birth. She just wanted to protect him from that moment on for the rest of her life, or at least until he could take care of himself like his father.

"Well..." Luffy began to speak again, ignoring the protesting looks and cries for mercy. He was always like this when starting training, but since it was their first day, he would give them a chance to breathe.

"You're dismissed for today, so rest up... Tomorrow, we'll resume training, and you'd better be ready," Luffy said as he walked back to his women.

"Call Reiju to bathe them in recovery flames. I'm going back to Dressrosa; this training ended up being a waste of time," Luffy instructed.

"You should go easier on them, Luffy..." Nojiko murmured.

"It's better for them to take a beating here than to die on the battlefield," Luffy replied, not yielding on his special method. His son wanted to be held, but Luffy just ruffled his hair. "Not now, Sinbad. Daddy needs to handle a lot of things on his own," he said and turned to his wives.

"Anyway, I'm going to see my prisoner now. Goodbye," Luffy stated before disappearing, leaving the girls to sigh before calling Reiju on the Den Den Mushi, surprised that she already had to help 10,000 beaten people.

Luffy landed in his current base area with a chair and made his way towards Fujitora. While walking in that corridor, he was surprised by a rebellious girl.

"You!! Get me out of here!! I don't want to be here anymore!!" Luffy looked at Sugar in one of the cells.

"Sugar..." Luffy commented calmly.

"You're Monkey D. Luffy! Please, get me out of here!" She exclaimed, and Luffy knew how deceitful she was and shook his head.

"I'll deal with you later. Even with a childlike appearance, you're over 20 years old, so don't try to fool me with some act. I'll see you later," Luffy completely ignored her and continued on to the next cells.

Lami had left her there after getting annoyed with the girl, which was why Luffy had been surprised to see her.

Fujitora was keeping his breathing controlled, seeming to be meditating when Luffy appeared in front of him. He merely lifted his head slightly, as if looking into Luffy's eyes, despite being blind.

"Hello, Fujitora... How about we step outside and have a chat? After all, Dressrosa was your home for a while," Luffy said as he unlocked the cell.

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Chapter 431: Chapter 430 - Talking with Fujitora.

[Chapter Size: 2400 Words.]

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"Monkey D. Luffy..." Fujitora murmured, feeling the powerful presence of Luffy before him as he unlocked his cell with a snap.

"Let's go outside; we have some things to discuss... Fujitora," Luffy said, and the man, unable to resist, stood up from his meditative position, beginning to leave the cell to follow Luffy, though his hands remained bound in Seastone.

And so, they stepped outside the prison in silence. As the sun hit his face, the admiral looked out over Dressrosa, appearing almost the same as when he was first detained. Outside the kingdom, he could sense islands as large as Dressrosa surrounding it, either on the sea or floating in the air.

"So, this is what the power of the levitating Fuwa Fuwa no Mi can do...?" he asked, somewhat impressed by the sight. Even though he couldn't see, he perceived shapes in the air and felt the presence of each island around him through his haki.

"Yes... it's the power of one of my crew members..." Luffy replied with a smile.

"..." Fujitora said nothing, though he was visibly intrigued. Obviously, the gravity fruit user was interested in the levitation power, having heard of Shiki in the past, though he had never had to face him.

"Let's go," Luffy commented, leaving the prison as they passed a few guards posted by King Riku to watch over the place. They greeted Luffy and allowed him to pass without resistance.

Fujitora merely followed in silence as they walked past the prison walls and into the city. Luffy offered no further comments, and they proceeded forward.

As they walked, they saw the townspeople busy with their activities, rebuilding their homes, clearing stones and debris from both the streets and private properties—a consequence of the battle that took place when the first Straw Hats arrived in the kingdom. They continued their reconstruction while Luffy and Fujitora heard the sounds of nails and hammers.

"Dad! I brought your lunch! Let's eat with Mom, and then I'll help you finish our house!" A boy ran up to a man hammering nails.

"Darling, I brought these little buns for you."

"Thank you, my love."

At another house, a man was sawing a wooden beam while his wife approached. They seemed newly married, perhaps due to the absence, as either the man or the woman had once been transformed into toys. Now, they could reclaim their lives with those who had forgotten them, finally able to be close to the people they loved again.

This scene had become commonplace as they continued to walk through the city. Children, parents, spouses—all appeared happy with their families, even with their homes in ruins, as they continued to rebuild, finding joy in being with the ones they loved.

Some noticed Luffy strolling calmly through the streets, surprised to see the Yonko so casually accompanied by a Marine admiral. In silence, some greeted him with nods, while others waved.

"Captain of the Straw Hat Pirates! Thank you for what your crew did for Dressrosa!"

"Lord Luffy, we are eternally grateful for the freedom you brought us!"

"Dressrosa was a prison until you appeared!"

"Thank you for ending Doflamingo and his family!!"

People continued to exclaim as they passed through those streets. Of course, not everyone shared this sentiment. Some looked at Luffy with fear, but they were in the minority. He knew the world was as it was, that one could never please everyone, and accepted that he would always be seen as both a villain and a hero.

Many would still fear him, but it didn't change the fact that most were grateful. Luffy calmly nodded in acknowledgment to those who greeted him.

Some glanced at Fujitora with anger and disgust. "How could the Marines let us suffer for years? How did you allow Dressrosa to reach this state? You were supposed to uphold justice!" They hurled these words at the blind man.

They sought an outlet for their frustrations, knowing it was only due to the government's interest in the Shichibukai system that Doflamingo's power had solidified, leaving this suffering people to endure in silence.

Doflamingo was killed over a year ago. But it doesn't change the fact that everything started because of him and the government, which left Dressrosa in his hands after his coup.

"Where were you when my wife turned into a toy?" a man exclaimed, pointing at Fujitora.

"My son became a cursed toy for years! I couldn't even remember him until the arrival of the Straw Hat Pirates!" The man cried while his teenage son tried to calm him, and the father, full of indignation, pointed a finger at the admiral.

Luffy felt empathy for Fujitora, now the target of that collective outburst. "Don't blame yourself," Luffy said. "Many of them think I'll be the same as Doflamingo. They fear me, too. That's just how people are. Always looking for someone to blame for their misfortune."

"It's alright. Perhaps I deserve it," Fujitora murmured.

"You had nothing to do with what happened here. You're someone who only recently joined the Marines. I don't think you should be responsible for something that happened years ago in this country..." Luffy replied, reasonably. To him, there was no reason to blame Fujitora for it as these people were doing.

"But the moment I wear this mantle and carry this symbol," Fujitora answered with a certain determination, "I represent the Marines. So, naturally, I will bear their complaints."

"You really are different from those other Marine idiots," Luffy said, smiling with respect.

"You're also different from what I expected," Fujitora admitted. "Most people here see you as a hero. Someone who brought them freedom. Even though they are now under the flag of a pirate, you're bringing stability to this country for the moment."

"I can't deny that," Luffy acknowledged. "But that was the work of my crew. I give credit to them, starting with Lami, who defeated Doflamingo in the war of the best."

"Even so, they are still under your command," Fujitora said thoughtfully. Though he saw Luffy as an enemy of justice, he recognized the difference in ideals.

"Your sense of justice is different from that of those who command you..." Luffy commented, ignoring the people around them as he continued walking with Fujitora.

"What do you mean by that?" Fujitora asked, raising his eyebrows, his eyes still closed.

"I foresee that soon the Marines will split into two factions," he said. "One side will strictly follow the World Government's orders, while the other will try to become independent."

"What makes you think that, Monkey D. Luffy?" Fujitora asked, intrigued.

"Simple: the World Government," Luffy replied as the atmosphere between them grew darker. "Things are becoming unsustainable, and the government's corruption is becoming visible and will only become more exposed in the future. The Shichibukai program will likely be canceled soon, but that doesn't change the fact that the government authorized countries like Dressrosa and Alabasta to be targets of pirates licensed to do as they please, allowing them to control their monarchies. We managed to stop Crocodile in Alabasta before anything truly happened... but here in Dressrosa, Doflamingo seized power and enslaved the country for years." He spoke in a somber tone at this part before continuing.

"Don't misunderstand me, Fujitora. I know you're against the Shichibukai program. You want—and even the Marines intend—to destroy it, which is a good thing. But that doesn't change the fact that the Marines are still the government's dog. And as soon as things become unsustainable, like now, the World Government will try to destabilize its image along with the program's. However, that won't stop them from committing other atrocities," he said.

"Do you think the World Government is a problem for the world?" Fujitora raised an eyebrow, almost in an ironic tone. Luffy now sounded like a revolutionary, much like his father, which was also dangerous, though he fell into an even worse category for the people of this sea. "Pirates like you and others spread terror across the New World."

"You might be right. The Yonko, for the most part, really are a problem for the world. At least Big Mom, Whitebeard, and Kaido are. But there are still those who seek only freedom on the seas, like Shanks. Although I still don't know all his intentions, he gave me this hat." Luffy held up his hat, showing it. "When I was just a child, he placed his hopes on me, that one day I would be in the position I am now. So, I believe I haven't disappointed him. Soon, this hat will be passed on to someone else." Luffy paused before continuing.

"However, besides Shanks, there are still other good people. Whitebeard, for example, didn't cause problems for the World Government or the Marines unless provoked. At least in his final days, all he wanted was to live and sail in peace until the end of his life. But even so, the World Government and the Marines wanted to make a statement to the world about the Great Pirate Era, trying to end it by killing the strongest man in the world. I even understand the Marines' strategy, but the World Government sold Whitebeard's image as a terrible pirate, someone destroying everything." He spoke before looking up at the sunny sky.

"The same can be said of Roger. Roger wasn't as evil as they claimed. He simply shook, at first, the gears of this world."

"What do you mean by that?" Fujitora murmured, intrigued by Luffy's words.

"The gears of this world are about to be destroyed, and perhaps, just like Dressrosa, the whole world will be freed from the silent slavery imposed by the World Government for over 800 years. It's time. A New Era is coming, Fujitora. Either the world will prevail, and all those hidden demons, like Dressrosa, will be liberated, or people will continue to be silent slaves while the World Government does whatever it pleases."

"You talk as if the World Government is a monster, but it has established order in the world!" Fujitora replied firmly. Despite not agreeing with everything, he still recognized that the World Government brought benefits as well.

"Not as much as you might think," Luffy responded almost mockingly. "It commits atrocities. Just because it seems to bring stability doesn't mean it's good. It just hides the truth. Every country has to pay tribute to the government, which it distributes to its divisions," Luffy began.

"But how much of that goes to the Marines? You know that most of that money goes to their precious Celestial Dragons... In my opinion, the government sees the world as a big pasture full of cows, and of course, they want control and order. After all, they need to milk the cows, and for what? So that those who live in Mary Geoise can enjoy luxuries and enslave people, wanting the whole world to worship them as gods, but to me, they're nothing but pigs." Luffy spoke, fully aware of the weight of his words; anyone who uttered such things would not only have their own head and their family's on the line but would see their home island destroyed as well.

"..." However, Fujitora said nothing.

"Tell me, Fujitora, are you familiar with the hunt conducted by the Celestial Dragons years ago that seemed to end after the God Valley incident? Do you know what happened in Dressrosa? What happened in Alabasta? What happened in Ohara? As soon as scholars began to study the Void Century, the World Government destroyed them."

"In truth, the World Government fears the truth, and once it's revealed to the world, war will be inevitable. Roger was waiting for someone to lead the world in that war, someone who would liberate the people. Ironically, I might not even be the one he expected, but I intend to spark the beginning of this world's freedom," Luffy declared with conviction.

"After all, without freedom, people can't dream and find their happiness..."

Fujitora remained silent, taking it all in without comment. Luffy knew he didn't fully agree with his words but perhaps would understand them in time.

Luffy was about to continue the conversation, but just then, his Den Den Mushi rang. Seeing it was Hancock, he picked it up, knowing she could speak to him in person, so a call must be urgent.

"Luffy, come quickly! Uta is about to give birth!! I've already called Lami! Hurry!" Hancock exclaimed, her tone filled with urgency.

He was surprised, but then a smile broke across his face. "Alright, I'll be there in a second," Luffy responded, hanging up the Den Den Mushi. He turned to Fujitora. "Well, it looks like my sixth child is on the way. I can't miss this birth for anything. We'll leave our conversation for later, but one way or another, there'll come a time when you'll see the World Government's atrocities. Don't forget about all the slaves trapped in Mariejois or any kingdom the World Government may try to destroy in the future."

Luffy paused, looking seriously at Fujitora, and added, "I believe a new force will emerge within the Marines in time. A force that will fight for justice, and I truly hope you choose the right side, Fujitora."

Fujitora nodded silently, reflecting on Luffy's words.

"In any case, you're permitted to walk around the city. You can find someone to help you arrange accommodations, but I can't release your Seastone cuffs, even though I know you wouldn't cause harm to Dressrosa. It's just for security; after all, you're still a hostage, meant to keep this place safe from the World Government for now. No offense," Luffy said.

Fujitora remained silent, simply watching as Luffy disappeared a moment later.

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