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Still missing this one, good writing, alot of potential, great pacing... just a good fanfic overall, looked forward to the updates everyday :/
Long chapters a regular schedule and a beautifully thought out story, as someone who attempted to write a multiverse story a couple years ago and failed miseably, I know how hard it is to integrate a lot of verses into one especially the power scaling, I am a huge fan of this work, keep it up author!
It’s nice. I home you don’t drop it. …….."?…………………………………. Ddmdkdosjns Isidore djdidk didineidinehdudjndjdidijdjdjdjdjdjdjdjjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjjdjdjdjdjdjjdjdjdjjdjdjdjdjjdjdjdjdjdjjdjdjdjdjdjosidncueimsufos udornsioekdnudoemdnucodndycisonrudorn*filler*
This is a masterpiece, I love every part of your story. The MC is not stupid which is good and the romance is okay, I don't actually like harem but this is one of the exceptions. I just can't get enough of this wonderful story, update more.
fking good.. it has your famous cultivation novel mixed....the mc is talented and cruel.. just don't drop this author
Why did I have to find this hidden gem so early, now I have to suffer waiting for the new chapters 😫. Honestly, I wasn’t expecting much when I first started, but now this gotta be my best cultivation novel. Hopefully, mc goes the world such as reverend insanity and cultivation chat group. Also don’t drop this novel like other people.👍👍👍👍
Mc is a simp and specially attach to his girls, maybe later on he's gonna sacrifice his life for a girl. Don't be deceived what author saying in synopsis
im lookin forward for more chaps ...........................................................................................yah more chaps............................................................
Liking it so far, leaving a review so it gets closer to 10 reviews for a rating.
Best Cultivation fanfic with system ever. Let's talk about the good things if this fanfic, the first thing is that Mc isn't evil from start and is gradually becoming evil, unlike most fanfics where Mc is just evil for the sake of it, here he has reason for being evil. the character of Mc is amazing, he isn't a skirt chaser and has clear goals which he do anything to accomplish. author has made Mc sound like genuinely smart person( props to you man, you did amazing job in that), he knows how to turn a situation in his favor, even if he was forced into a situation and didn't know beforehand, he is able to get out of it and benefit from it, and author makes it look so genuine, whoch is very rare, almost unheard of on this app. the author takes the criticism of readers and takes inspiration from that, and he knows what he is doing. the world building is also amazing and the updates are very consistent. keep it up with the amazing work man, i am looking forward to the future of your fic.
This is one of the better cultivation fanfics out there. I hope you do not rush his cultivation too much, because he can go to pretty much any world with enough shards. For example he could go to God of High school or any other martial arts themed universes to learn martial arts. I am glad that Wu Chen does not have two completely different cultivation systems. it would be messy to have a cultivation of dou Ancestor and then a completely different cultivation at the sky profound realm.
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Great story keep up good work I hope it continues, ❤🧡💛💚💙💜❤🧡💛💚💙💜❤🧡💛💚💙💜❤🧡💛💚💙💜❤🧡💛💚💙💜❤🧡💛💚💙💜❤🧡💛💚💙💜❤🧡💛💚💙💜❤🧡💛💚💙💜❤🧡💛💚💙💜❤🧡💛💚💙💜❤🧡💛💚💙💜❤🧡💛💚💙💜❤🧡💛💚💙💜❤🧡💛💚💙💜❤
it is good Ff ............ ................... ................... ................... ................... ............ .......................... .......
This is the best xianxia fanfiction, many people might complain why he feels guilty the 1st time he killed the kid, but no matter how evil we expect him to be he was a kid and he just killed a innocent kid for mere profit of course he will guilty. Though I don't like how he keeps trying to get the female leads in his harem (would have loved if it was no harem). But even so his expert manipulation of sympathy is in line of evil, i guess. I also enjoy that mc tries his best to enjoy life along with searching power. But you need to empower 'child of heaven' more, they shouldn't be killed so easily also heaven should & would give them new opportunity
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Good writing quality and interesting story so far though it's only been 5 chapters. Rational MC with his character turning evil, so it might put off some people. Personally I don't mind evil MCs as long as they aren't vile just for the sake of it. I am waiting for more character interactions and hope it doesn't devolve into mindless grind.
perfect till 6 chaps.. earlier i though it would be same as other trash xianxia ff's since it had system, but i was wrong.. it has 5star plot and balanced power system.. mc tendency of feeling guilty while committing crime was reduced a lot in chap 4, all in all author has good 5 star read potential fic.. may he continue to update it with same rhythm.
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Hi All, I am the author; here to confirm a few things. - This WILL be Harem. - MC will be Evil. - By Evil, I mean he will do anything to gain power. It doesn't necessarily means that he will only do bad things, it just means that if he thinks that killing someone, even if innocent will grant him power, then he will kill them for the said power. Any other questions? Kindly ask me here.
Still missing this one, good writing, alot of potential, great pacing... just a good fanfic overall, looked forward to the updates everyday :/
Long chapters a regular schedule and a beautifully thought out story, as someone who attempted to write a multiverse story a couple years ago and failed miseably, I know how hard it is to integrate a lot of verses into one especially the power scaling, I am a huge fan of this work, keep it up author!
It’s nice. I home you don’t drop it. …….."?…………………………………. Ddmdkdosjns Isidore djdidk didineidinehdudjndjdidijdjdjdjdjdjdjdjjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjjdjdjdjdjdjjdjdjdjjdjdjdjdjjdjdjdjdjdjjdjdjdjdjdjosidncueimsufos udornsioekdnudoemdnucodndycisonrudorn*filler*
This is a masterpiece, I love every part of your story. The MC is not stupid which is good and the romance is okay, I don't actually like harem but this is one of the exceptions. I just can't get enough of this wonderful story, update more.
fking good.. it has your famous cultivation novel mixed....the mc is talented and cruel.. just don't drop this author
Why did I have to find this hidden gem so early, now I have to suffer waiting for the new chapters 😫. Honestly, I wasn’t expecting much when I first started, but now this gotta be my best cultivation novel. Hopefully, mc goes the world such as reverend insanity and cultivation chat group. Also don’t drop this novel like other people.👍👍👍👍
Mc is a simp and specially attach to his girls, maybe later on he's gonna sacrifice his life for a girl. Don't be deceived what author saying in synopsis
im lookin forward for more chaps ...........................................................................................yah more chaps............................................................
Liking it so far, leaving a review so it gets closer to 10 reviews for a rating.
Best Cultivation fanfic with system ever. Let's talk about the good things if this fanfic, the first thing is that Mc isn't evil from start and is gradually becoming evil, unlike most fanfics where Mc is just evil for the sake of it, here he has reason for being evil. the character of Mc is amazing, he isn't a skirt chaser and has clear goals which he do anything to accomplish. author has made Mc sound like genuinely smart person( props to you man, you did amazing job in that), he knows how to turn a situation in his favor, even if he was forced into a situation and didn't know beforehand, he is able to get out of it and benefit from it, and author makes it look so genuine, whoch is very rare, almost unheard of on this app. the author takes the criticism of readers and takes inspiration from that, and he knows what he is doing. the world building is also amazing and the updates are very consistent. keep it up with the amazing work man, i am looking forward to the future of your fic.
This is one of the better cultivation fanfics out there. I hope you do not rush his cultivation too much, because he can go to pretty much any world with enough shards. For example he could go to God of High school or any other martial arts themed universes to learn martial arts. I am glad that Wu Chen does not have two completely different cultivation systems. it would be messy to have a cultivation of dou Ancestor and then a completely different cultivation at the sky profound realm.
Reveal Spoiler Great story keep up good work I hope it continues, ❤🧡💛💚💙💜❤🧡💛💚💙💜❤🧡💛💚💙💜❤🧡💛💚💙💜❤🧡💛💚💙💜❤🧡💛💚💙💜❤🧡💛💚💙💜❤🧡💛💚💙💜❤🧡💛💚💙💜❤🧡💛💚💙💜❤🧡💛💚💙💜❤🧡💛💚💙💜❤🧡💛💚💙💜❤🧡💛💚💙💜❤🧡💛💚💙💜❤
it is good Ff ............ ................... ................... ................... ................... ............ .......................... .......
This is the best xianxia fanfiction, many people might complain why he feels guilty the 1st time he killed the kid, but no matter how evil we expect him to be he was a kid and he just killed a innocent kid for mere profit of course he will guilty. Though I don't like how he keeps trying to get the female leads in his harem (would have loved if it was no harem). But even so his expert manipulation of sympathy is in line of evil, i guess. I also enjoy that mc tries his best to enjoy life along with searching power. But you need to empower 'child of heaven' more, they shouldn't be killed so easily also heaven should & would give them new opportunity
Reveal Spoiler Good writing quality and interesting story so far though it's only been 5 chapters. Rational MC with his character turning evil, so it might put off some people. Personally I don't mind evil MCs as long as they aren't vile just for the sake of it. I am waiting for more character interactions and hope it doesn't devolve into mindless grind.
perfect till 6 chaps.. earlier i though it would be same as other trash xianxia ff's since it had system, but i was wrong.. it has 5star plot and balanced power system.. mc tendency of feeling guilty while committing crime was reduced a lot in chap 4, all in all author has good 5 star read potential fic.. may he continue to update it with same rhythm.
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Hi All, I am the author; here to confirm a few things. - This WILL be Harem. - MC will be Evil. - By Evil, I mean he will do anything to gain power. It doesn't necessarily means that he will only do bad things, it just means that if he thinks that killing someone, even if innocent will grant him power, then he will kill them for the said power. Any other questions? Kindly ask me here.