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The synopsis is good, I just hope this isn't one of those who make their readers expect more of the story only to drop it after saying they're dying, I mean yeah I respect them but you know it's like your almost climaxing but some'one' interrupted.. BAD EXAMPLE BUT YEAH YOU GET THE JIST OF IT. P.S. IT WOULD BE BORING IF THE MC ALWAYS KNOW EVERYTHING SO YEAH 👍 FOR YOU.
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is there a reason ehy he has to forget gis memories... cause now him getting his system won't make sense if he doesn't have an advantage that all reincarnation gets you.
I will make this a great piece of work. I Hope everyone comments because it helps me A LOT making this series. I hope you read every chapter because i worked hard for it!
Had to drop it after like 10-20 sentences. The grammar and language is so pathetic that I can only cringe. This feels like it was written by a 10 year old boy who just immigrated to an English speaking country. Extremely pathetic and stupid.
The synopsis is good, I just hope this isn't one of those who make their readers expect more of the story only to drop it after saying they're dying, I mean yeah I respect them but you know it's like your almost climaxing but some'one' interrupted.. BAD EXAMPLE BUT YEAH YOU GET THE JIST OF IT. P.S. IT WOULD BE BORING IF THE MC ALWAYS KNOW EVERYTHING SO YEAH 👍 FOR YOU.
Reveal Spoiler is there a reason ehy he has to forget gis memories... cause now him getting his system won't make sense if he doesn't have an advantage that all reincarnation gets you.
I will make this a great piece of work. I Hope everyone comments because it helps me A LOT making this series. I hope you read every chapter because i worked hard for it!
Had to drop it after like 10-20 sentences. The grammar and language is so pathetic that I can only cringe. This feels like it was written by a 10 year old boy who just immigrated to an English speaking country. Extremely pathetic and stupid.