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This is a nice story more updates would be greatly appreciated I also think she should get a version of Batman to help for training. L l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l. L l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l
A risky and bold attempt at writing a new story with the mc being a single mother in a marvel isekai. But the story is too fast-paced, development is full of plot holes and mc and supporting characters lacking necessary depth. Mc is given a choice by God and instead of taking the road of bold independent woman with an ambition to develop a proper foothold in the new world and a safe environment for her children in an otherwise chaotic world she wishes for a gacha and a soul mate. Now the gacha is good as in the long run unless lady luck is out for your head its only a matter of time before you become stronger with or without doing anything. But it's the latter I have a problem with, no self respecting person (man or woman) should ask for a soul mate as a wish from an ROB (not to mention when there are more than one such person as is the case of reverse harem tag). You can either be in a mono or polyamorous in relationships (no one has the right to judge either) but plz stop pretending to veil an otherwise polyamorous relationship as something with a devoted term like 'soulmate' which is in reality used to refer to singular partner or multiple only in case of gag Mangas or novels.
Good all around FanFic. Its refreshing to read stuff like this that's different from the norm of $mut and word ¶orn that WN is full of. Thank you and do continue Author-san.
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This is a nice story more updates would be greatly appreciated I also think she should get a version of Batman to help for training. L l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l. L l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l l
A risky and bold attempt at writing a new story with the mc being a single mother in a marvel isekai. But the story is too fast-paced, development is full of plot holes and mc and supporting characters lacking necessary depth. Mc is given a choice by God and instead of taking the road of bold independent woman with an ambition to develop a proper foothold in the new world and a safe environment for her children in an otherwise chaotic world she wishes for a gacha and a soul mate. Now the gacha is good as in the long run unless lady luck is out for your head its only a matter of time before you become stronger with or without doing anything. But it's the latter I have a problem with, no self respecting person (man or woman) should ask for a soul mate as a wish from an ROB (not to mention when there are more than one such person as is the case of reverse harem tag). You can either be in a mono or polyamorous in relationships (no one has the right to judge either) but plz stop pretending to veil an otherwise polyamorous relationship as something with a devoted term like 'soulmate' which is in reality used to refer to singular partner or multiple only in case of gag Mangas or novels.
Good all around FanFic. Its refreshing to read stuff like this that's different from the norm of $mut and word ¶orn that WN is full of. Thank you and do continue Author-san.
is this reverse Harem 🤔 I hope its not iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
pls no yuri pls no Yuri pls no yuri pls no yuri pls no yuri!'"!!*?*?*!"!"!"!"!!"!*?"!"?*?!'!"£()#+£)@(#
I like that /////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
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