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Iirc author makes the mc have a ntr flashback of ymir getting banged in front of him and I dropped after so couldn’t tell you more
Was good overall. Some parts were a bit rushed at the end but was enjoyable.
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The book was good at first with minor gramor and spelling errors that are expected of a fanfic, but around chapter 20, it got super confusing. I couldn't tell the timeline, and I felt the girl he took in personality was all over the place. Sometimes, she was a traumatized girl who feared being apart for 2 seconds and could not bathe without constantly checking if hes there outside the door. Sometimes, she doesn't even greet him when he returns and goes straight to her room, acting like a normal kid. Her personality is not consistent. I also don't like how you do the recap at the beginning of every chapter I don't know how it is for other people but I'd I want to looked at the last chapter I just scroll up so it's annoying,but that's just my personal preference. Lastly, I don't know how I feel about him passing out and getting memories of another past life. I mean, all thats done for me is make the plot less enjoyable and more confusing.
I am extremely disappointed. 1/4 of the chapter are repites. He dosen't have personality, memory of a goldfish is a understatement, character development is nonexistent.
He dosen't have personality, memory of a goldfish is a understatement, character development is nonexistent. .
To be honest im lost I dont even know what the frick is happening, so ima just rate it base on how I feel. Try to read it but dont get your hopes up. Good luck on the novel!🎊
He dosen't have personality, memory of a goldfish is a understatement, character development is nonexistent.
I am extremely disappointed. I do not understand authors who endow their character with such power, where there is no smell of such power. I have read 4 chapters. Well, why does the character need such power in Attack on Titan?! why not choose something like: infinite stamina, luck, ackerman physique, brain boost, or at least hacks. because the "avatar" elements don't fit into the world of Attack on Titan. it makes the character stand out too much. they will want to kill him or they will work tirelessly. in the future he will have people who are dear to him and there is no turning back. stand out with such force in such a world of suicide. so this story is meaningless.
im gonna read this now.....i dont have a powerstone now but ill give u one tmmrow if i like it...........................................................
Saya rasa penulisan nya buruk. Dialog karakter nya juga aneh. Coba tingkatkan. Bikin bad mood reading. Sifat MC nya juga diperjelas. Masa gantung.
1. Writing- Good and still improving. 2. i. Please no harem, ii. Leave Mikasa for Eren, make a good ending, not like the original. 3. It's good but i hope MC become *MASTER OF ALL* Archetype:Master of All ALL INCARNATIONS OF THE AVATAR (AVATAR: THE LAST AIRBENDER) CAN BEND ALL FOUR ELEMENTS, AND LEARN MORE ESOTERIC SKILLS LIKE HEALING AND METALBENDING. THE ARCHETYPE OF: The ace/master of all. The power to embody the "master of all" archetype. Advanced/Ultimate version of All-Rounder and Jack-of-All-Stats. Also Called: • The Ace Properties: The user is the "master of all", excelling at virtually everything to the extent that specialists are virtually redundant. They can pick up new skills with ease and intuitively understand whatever they need to. Unlike its lower versions, this archetype is not simply good in all areas or balanced between them, but rather one of the best, if not, the best in all areas. Powers- • Ability Transcendence • Accelerated Development • Instant Learning • All-Rounder • Polymath • Genius • Genius Bruiser • Combat Pragmatist • Combat Specialism • Power Specialism • Lightning Bruiser - Absolute Level • Powerhouse • Speedster • Meta-Learning • Omni Mode • Omni-Element Manipulation • Omnicompetence • Infinite Experience • Omni-Intuition • Omni-Mastery • Omni Profession • Optimal Finesse • Path to Victory • Path Maker • Path Killer • Power Balance • Reactive Adaptation; in some cases, the user adapts to gain the skills or power needs for any one situation. • Setup Fighter • Talent Embodiment • Tactical Genius • Training Regimen Relationships • All-Rounder • Child Prodigy • Polymath • Power-Skill Combo 4. 3 Chapters per week is good. 5. World- Make the strory cover everything in the world countries - Hizuru (Asia), Acimera, Marley, Mid-East, Eldia (Paradis), Aidini, Ainaeco.
it's really bad the author has ntr fetish and the mc has a memory of a goldfish.
Iirc author makes the mc have a ntr flashback of ymir getting banged in front of him and I dropped after so couldn’t tell you more
Was good overall. Some parts were a bit rushed at the end but was enjoyable.
Tu force trop sur les souvenirs [img=faceslap][img=exp][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
The book was good at first with minor gramor and spelling errors that are expected of a fanfic, but around chapter 20, it got super confusing. I couldn't tell the timeline, and I felt the girl he took in personality was all over the place. Sometimes, she was a traumatized girl who feared being apart for 2 seconds and could not bathe without constantly checking if hes there outside the door. Sometimes, she doesn't even greet him when he returns and goes straight to her room, acting like a normal kid. Her personality is not consistent. I also don't like how you do the recap at the beginning of every chapter I don't know how it is for other people but I'd I want to looked at the last chapter I just scroll up so it's annoying,but that's just my personal preference. Lastly, I don't know how I feel about him passing out and getting memories of another past life. I mean, all thats done for me is make the plot less enjoyable and more confusing.
I am extremely disappointed. 1/4 of the chapter are repites. He dosen't have personality, memory of a goldfish is a understatement, character development is nonexistent.
He dosen't have personality, memory of a goldfish is a understatement, character development is nonexistent. .
To be honest im lost I dont even know what the frick is happening, so ima just rate it base on how I feel. Try to read it but dont get your hopes up. Good luck on the novel!🎊
He dosen't have personality, memory of a goldfish is a understatement, character development is nonexistent.
I am extremely disappointed. I do not understand authors who endow their character with such power, where there is no smell of such power. I have read 4 chapters. Well, why does the character need such power in Attack on Titan?! why not choose something like: infinite stamina, luck, ackerman physique, brain boost, or at least hacks. because the "avatar" elements don't fit into the world of Attack on Titan. it makes the character stand out too much. they will want to kill him or they will work tirelessly. in the future he will have people who are dear to him and there is no turning back. stand out with such force in such a world of suicide. so this story is meaningless.
im gonna read this now.....i dont have a powerstone now but ill give u one tmmrow if i like it...........................................................
Saya rasa penulisan nya buruk. Dialog karakter nya juga aneh. Coba tingkatkan. Bikin bad mood reading. Sifat MC nya juga diperjelas. Masa gantung.
1. Writing- Good and still improving. 2. i. Please no harem, ii. Leave Mikasa for Eren, make a good ending, not like the original. 3. It's good but i hope MC become *MASTER OF ALL* Archetype:Master of All ALL INCARNATIONS OF THE AVATAR (AVATAR: THE LAST AIRBENDER) CAN BEND ALL FOUR ELEMENTS, AND LEARN MORE ESOTERIC SKILLS LIKE HEALING AND METALBENDING. THE ARCHETYPE OF: The ace/master of all. The power to embody the "master of all" archetype. Advanced/Ultimate version of All-Rounder and Jack-of-All-Stats. Also Called: • The Ace Properties: The user is the "master of all", excelling at virtually everything to the extent that specialists are virtually redundant. They can pick up new skills with ease and intuitively understand whatever they need to. Unlike its lower versions, this archetype is not simply good in all areas or balanced between them, but rather one of the best, if not, the best in all areas. Powers- • Ability Transcendence • Accelerated Development • Instant Learning • All-Rounder • Polymath • Genius • Genius Bruiser • Combat Pragmatist • Combat Specialism • Power Specialism • Lightning Bruiser - Absolute Level • Powerhouse • Speedster • Meta-Learning • Omni Mode • Omni-Element Manipulation • Omnicompetence • Infinite Experience • Omni-Intuition • Omni-Mastery • Omni Profession • Optimal Finesse • Path to Victory • Path Maker • Path Killer • Power Balance • Reactive Adaptation; in some cases, the user adapts to gain the skills or power needs for any one situation. • Setup Fighter • Talent Embodiment • Tactical Genius • Training Regimen Relationships • All-Rounder • Child Prodigy • Polymath • Power-Skill Combo 4. 3 Chapters per week is good. 5. World- Make the strory cover everything in the world countries - Hizuru (Asia), Acimera, Marley, Mid-East, Eldia (Paradis), Aidini, Ainaeco.
it's really bad the author has ntr fetish and the mc has a memory of a goldfish.