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Love the story and hope to read more hopefully a pt 2 or a return to the DC universe. May you keep writing that which makes you happy and may you never run out of inspiration or love for writing.
New Staff of S. H. I. E. L. D. Nuevo personal de SHIELD Muy bien libro y hay mucho potencial para una secuela, usando el universo de DC por ejemplo, etc... [img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar]
this is a completely unique one i read so far ..has a nice touch with impressive story telling good work
and she was messed up more than once I wouldn't mind if they stopped off at the Harry Potter universe just because they use ones doesn't mean he couldn't learn something like household magic in that not to mention they had time magic in side Harry Potter too and I wouldn't mind if he went to a Stargate Universe also
Who tf is saul. Pepe is atleast close to pepper but how is the name saul anywhere close to thor.
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did author somehow hack webnovel algorithm to show this novel to every other reader.......
Good novel but definitely not the best, had some bad translations and ending felt very rushed. Overall it’s a good read.
I really hated the renaming of iconic characters, but I highligh the clever composition of the different universes. I’m mad for not even mentioning Batman.
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I saw someone who didn't even read the book rate it 2 stars simply because it didn't have a summary so I rated this 5 stars to make up for the rating they made
To be honest after reading the story I’ m very disappointed their was a lot of potential that went to waste
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Honestly, it felt like the author wrote a self insert story after only seeing part of the series of the movie worlds he wrote about. The story overall isn't trash as self inserts go, and I have absolutely read worse. Had I read this prior to seeing the movies (series) referenced, I may have had a better appreciation for it. However, I have seen all of them. Next, I gotta point out during one "arc," the Chinese, anti Japanese bias, was very strong, taking away from the story. Not to mention the constant Chinese way of doing things that's not congruent with an American character who'd never have had a chance to learn a lot of those things. The most difficult part of the story, for me, is the constant misunderstanding of the characters and the world's they exist in. Misspelled names, incorrect names, ridiculous prices for things, a general lack of understanding for distance in an area you're writing about, how money works..... issues that a quick Google (or Baidu) search could have corrected. Next, it is going to be the issue with translation, as I assume this story was originally written in Chinese than thrown into google Translate and then pasted on here. The reason I say that is that the only other way I can see a story having as many of these issues as it does is if it were written by an ai. Having said all of that, the premise is pretty good. If the author were to sit down, rewatch those movies, and get a proofreader/editor/transcription person that understands why characters act a specific way in a movie, the story could be much better. Preferably, someone who understands that changing specific things in a given world will change the overall actions of characters, better.
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I ended up understanding the bad reviews, from chapters 200 it becomes nonsense Wanda maximoff becomes "Walter" the hero becomes a Chinese rather than an American... in short, maddening and shameful traffic problems
There is clearly a campaign of sabotage by someone, there is NO writing problem here, it is even one of the best novels that I have ever given to read, the multiverse is not stupid at all Embedded worlds (and there are few) are for a good reason, and also it's also rare worlds far from the usual bleach, naruto one piece power that we have seen throughout the marvel novel. the hero is not ultra cheated and it's very good like that, although it is obvious that he will end up with a big powerup (I hope)
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Typical Chinese FF, filled with racism, propaganda, blatant misogyny, NTR filth and welp all the other things that make just about every Chinese writers stuff unreadable. Best just to move on.
a lot better than novels popular in webnovel.someone complained that there's less world backgroung but comeon man its based on harry potter series what more background can u get.love the novel.
will he ever go back to mcu world?i mean it will become boring if you keep expanding the story for no reason
I quit... how can it be that you have so many translation errors?... even for me, a Spanish-speaking person, it is impossible for me to read this book due to the many translation errors... it is noticeable that the translator did not put the minimum effort to do a good job with translation errors. By the way... I read this up to ch 319 and the quality of the translation only gets worse.
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Love the story and hope to read more hopefully a pt 2 or a return to the DC universe. May you keep writing that which makes you happy and may you never run out of inspiration or love for writing.
New Staff of S. H. I. E. L. D. Nuevo personal de SHIELD Muy bien libro y hay mucho potencial para una secuela, usando el universo de DC por ejemplo, etc... [img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar]
this is a completely unique one i read so far ..has a nice touch with impressive story telling good work
and she was messed up more than once I wouldn't mind if they stopped off at the Harry Potter universe just because they use ones doesn't mean he couldn't learn something like household magic in that not to mention they had time magic in side Harry Potter too and I wouldn't mind if he went to a Stargate Universe also
Who tf is saul. Pepe is atleast close to pepper but how is the name saul anywhere close to thor.
Reveal Spoiler did author somehow hack webnovel algorithm to show this novel to every other reader.......
Good novel but definitely not the best, had some bad translations and ending felt very rushed. Overall it’s a good read.
I really hated the renaming of iconic characters, but I highligh the clever composition of the different universes. I’m mad for not even mentioning Batman.
Frfffrrrrh7jj9i0o7g5fl0p0ure4df6gjikl-;=;9j7f4eq2sefhj9k hbyy8i9j vcd5r7h veg7u8r3s B Bb7yg7u9i8hb J9i8trd6g Bu*tfbhbuj0o 7y6rfh9o0jgc 9u6r5fuhijyfrd
I saw someone who didn't even read the book rate it 2 stars simply because it didn't have a summary so I rated this 5 stars to make up for the rating they made
To be honest after reading the story I’ m very disappointed their was a lot of potential that went to waste
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Honestly, it felt like the author wrote a self insert story after only seeing part of the series of the movie worlds he wrote about. The story overall isn't trash as self inserts go, and I have absolutely read worse. Had I read this prior to seeing the movies (series) referenced, I may have had a better appreciation for it. However, I have seen all of them. Next, I gotta point out during one "arc," the Chinese, anti Japanese bias, was very strong, taking away from the story. Not to mention the constant Chinese way of doing things that's not congruent with an American character who'd never have had a chance to learn a lot of those things. The most difficult part of the story, for me, is the constant misunderstanding of the characters and the world's they exist in. Misspelled names, incorrect names, ridiculous prices for things, a general lack of understanding for distance in an area you're writing about, how money works..... issues that a quick Google (or Baidu) search could have corrected. Next, it is going to be the issue with translation, as I assume this story was originally written in Chinese than thrown into google Translate and then pasted on here. The reason I say that is that the only other way I can see a story having as many of these issues as it does is if it were written by an ai. Having said all of that, the premise is pretty good. If the author were to sit down, rewatch those movies, and get a proofreader/editor/transcription person that understands why characters act a specific way in a movie, the story could be much better. Preferably, someone who understands that changing specific things in a given world will change the overall actions of characters, better.
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I ended up understanding the bad reviews, from chapters 200 it becomes nonsense Wanda maximoff becomes "Walter" the hero becomes a Chinese rather than an American... in short, maddening and shameful traffic problems
There is clearly a campaign of sabotage by someone, there is NO writing problem here, it is even one of the best novels that I have ever given to read, the multiverse is not stupid at all Embedded worlds (and there are few) are for a good reason, and also it's also rare worlds far from the usual bleach, naruto one piece power that we have seen throughout the marvel novel. the hero is not ultra cheated and it's very good like that, although it is obvious that he will end up with a big powerup (I hope)
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Reveal Spoiler Typical Chinese FF, filled with racism, propaganda, blatant misogyny, NTR filth and welp all the other things that make just about every Chinese writers stuff unreadable. Best just to move on.
a lot better than novels popular in webnovel.someone complained that there's less world backgroung but comeon man its based on harry potter series what more background can u get.love the novel.
will he ever go back to mcu world?i mean it will become boring if you keep expanding the story for no reason
I quit... how can it be that you have so many translation errors?... even for me, a Spanish-speaking person, it is impossible for me to read this book due to the many translation errors... it is noticeable that the translator did not put the minimum effort to do a good job with translation errors. By the way... I read this up to ch 319 and the quality of the translation only gets worse.
Chinese story and MC [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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