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The writing and everything was a masterpiece I cried multiple times during reading this
Really good written Tragic story couldn't quit reading it after I read through the first part that wasn't really my taste but after that my god it is good
Eine wirklich gute fanfiction von Marvel. Diese Geschichte geht es um Meggie Stark die Schwester von Tony Stark und wie sie von Hydra gefangen genommen wird, zu einer Waffe die die Bezeichnung Wyvern geschmiedet wird. Und wie sie aus den Fängen von Hydra entkommt und darauf einige der Ereignisse des MCU miterlebt. Ihre Anwesenheit hat keinerlei Auswirkungen auf die Ereignisse des Film MCUs aber verleiht der Handlung mehr emotionale Tiefe. Mein Fazit nach beenden der Geschichte ist das sie auf jeden Fall lesenswert ist und ich sie auch anderen empfehlen werde.
What a beautiful piece of work, such perfectly done. I don't think I've ever read a story as beautiful as this. Its so perfectly done that I cant even consider it a fanfic, but rather a cannon story, actually no, I have no other option but to think that this story was real, taken place in another universe. I've never emphasized and connected with characters like I have with this, this book showed me the depths of sorrow and joy, reading this would show you a perfect meaning of love. It was a wild roller coaster of emotions. Thank you HellOfTiamat for giving me this gift.
God! I wish this was Canon. Good Job. I enjoyed it truly and whole! That says someone who has Dyslexia and Soaked everything up! Can i use Wyvern as a Cameo if i ever Write Marvel/Avengers ? For all i care that could be my new canon!
Puta que pariu eu fiquei puto lendo essa porra, não consegui passar do capitulo 14. O cara simplesmente mata o pai, a mae, sequestra ela com uma criança morta, transforma numa assasina da hydra e quando tem a chance não mata ele. Porra isso me deixou puto
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Unexpectedly good story. One of the best I have seen on this platform. I loved how you integrated her plot with the MCU storyline. And this was a completed story.
This might be the best emotional fan fic novel i've read, the plot, the char, the story, and the mc of this novel. I love this novel thank you.
Increíble historia. Solo puedo lamentar que su participacion no haya generado ningun cambio, pero como historia en si es una de las mejores que he leido de los fanfics existentes. Maggie Stark <3
The OC blended in perfectly to the verse. The storyline had a wonderful take on the oc's growth. If I didn't know, I would think this was an original Marvel AU
it is a good read. went into it looking for a time killer and found a masterpiece of fanfiction. some parts might be confusing if you don't know the MCU, but you probably are if you're looking for fanfic of it.
I loved this book. it was an emotional roller coaster with great characters and any book that can make me burst out laughing and 10 chapters later be holding back tears is incredible.
I liked the premise, the beginning, and parts of the story overall. The problem is that we have Maggie Stark as the protagonist, who has been shown to be someone who could be Tony Stark(her brother)‘s equal or near equal. THEN she also has the super soldier serumn like Steve or Bucky, with all the training HYDRA could provide, such as the Red Room like Natasha. Why is that bad? It isn’t. Until her presence in the MCU does basically nothing to change how the story goes. Major events stay basically the same, except some have an extra person in it- such as when going into the past to get the infinity stones, she joins Steve, stands there while he gets the scepter, rushes off to help with the cube, gets slapped by past-Hulk, rushes back to see Steve basically defeat past-Steve, knocks out past-Steve, and then has to go with Steve and Tony to the past. WHERE she follows Tony to get the cube, and nothing changes… except she’s in the scene. Her role in this story amounts to basic emotional support to the Avengers and Bucky. Of course that’s downplaying it a bit to make summarization easier, but still… she’s by no means fulfilling the role cut out for her. She doesn’t even do the snap instead of Tony, so all I can think of her being there is to give Bucky a happy ending, and help Pepper raise Morgan. Of course, a lot of that is just expectations vs reality. It’s just disappointing there. Overall a good novel though.
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This was one of the most emotional stories I have ever read one Webnovel. Thank you author for this book.
One of my most favourite stories I have EVER read. The MC's emotional journey through life is heart warming and tear jerking with an ending that left me satisfied of a job well done. The world and characters were realistic and felt true to their cinematic counterparts. The chapter length is very long which shows the dedication of the author. LOVED this story and will probably read all over again one day.
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What a great story, really encapsulates the emotion and expression of all the characters, a lot of feelings went in this story top notch story.
This is easily the best MCU fanfic that I have read to date. the author has masterly written the MC into the MCU and for me, it feels like the character was meant to be there. highly recommend it to anyone who loves the MCU. my only dislike about it is it is compleat
Finished it and have to say was written very well. It's definitely not for everyone, it's very slow-paced but goes into such detail that everything meshes together and makes sense. The character slides into the story without feeling jarring or like someone forced them into the story. The writing quality never really drops in terms of personalities. The main issue is... the character doesn't matter and has 0 impacts on the story. The mc is a watcher looking on never changing anything so ultimately the author manages to write someone else's story very well so I can't really give them credit for story development because it's copied at many times word for word and describing the same fight scenes as the original. It's a shame because it's written so well but convoluted excuses, mistakes and random emotional drama happen all to force the events to play out exactly like the original source material. The place where it shines is the few points where it's original but then those are quickly ruined by being shoved under the rug in order to maintain the original plot. Overall though it's a fantastic story... it's just unfortunate that it lacks anything original.
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This is one of the best stories I have seen. Keep make more of them please. ..............................................................................
Going to start of by saying the book is great, but not for everyone. The start of the book was quite well done for world building and showing who/what/why the main character is the way she is. It's written very well and in-depth, at the same time it's a tease and time delay until the original story of MCU starts going. That's when I think the book starter spiralling downwards, the romance and the travel was a nice input, but the fact of them being on the side-line every time its convenient for the story gets to you eventually. Then the story starts taking of after the fall of Ultron, yet the main character gets put on the side-line with a few twists and turns to let the original plot play out again and again, crying and sobbing for 10 chapters while "Attempting" to stop things around her, while they play out just like the plot. What got to me the most was the fact once the mc was pointed out to the media, she has to go through a trial to prove her innocence to the people? and her friends and family sits on the side and can't do anything for 15 chapters? Stark gets blackmailed and cant do anything? Where are the other villains in the justice system? Aren't there literal serial killers not getting anywhere near this publicity and outrage? Odd universe. Anyhow, I enjoy the book and recommend others to read it, just don't try to reason with the logic of the main character, as it is a mix-mash of guilt/anger/sadness and there's no way others can really judge a character living with their own logic and answers.
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hehehe, how shameless of me ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
The writing and everything was a masterpiece I cried multiple times during reading this
Really good written Tragic story couldn't quit reading it after I read through the first part that wasn't really my taste but after that my god it is good
Eine wirklich gute fanfiction von Marvel. Diese Geschichte geht es um Meggie Stark die Schwester von Tony Stark und wie sie von Hydra gefangen genommen wird, zu einer Waffe die die Bezeichnung Wyvern geschmiedet wird. Und wie sie aus den Fängen von Hydra entkommt und darauf einige der Ereignisse des MCU miterlebt. Ihre Anwesenheit hat keinerlei Auswirkungen auf die Ereignisse des Film MCUs aber verleiht der Handlung mehr emotionale Tiefe. Mein Fazit nach beenden der Geschichte ist das sie auf jeden Fall lesenswert ist und ich sie auch anderen empfehlen werde.
What a beautiful piece of work, such perfectly done. I don't think I've ever read a story as beautiful as this. Its so perfectly done that I cant even consider it a fanfic, but rather a cannon story, actually no, I have no other option but to think that this story was real, taken place in another universe. I've never emphasized and connected with characters like I have with this, this book showed me the depths of sorrow and joy, reading this would show you a perfect meaning of love. It was a wild roller coaster of emotions. Thank you HellOfTiamat for giving me this gift.
God! I wish this was Canon. Good Job. I enjoyed it truly and whole! That says someone who has Dyslexia and Soaked everything up! Can i use Wyvern as a Cameo if i ever Write Marvel/Avengers ? For all i care that could be my new canon!
Puta que pariu eu fiquei puto lendo essa porra, não consegui passar do capitulo 14. O cara simplesmente mata o pai, a mae, sequestra ela com uma criança morta, transforma numa assasina da hydra e quando tem a chance não mata ele. Porra isso me deixou puto
Reveal Spoiler Unexpectedly good story. One of the best I have seen on this platform. I loved how you integrated her plot with the MCU storyline. And this was a completed story.
This might be the best emotional fan fic novel i've read, the plot, the char, the story, and the mc of this novel. I love this novel thank you.
Increíble historia. Solo puedo lamentar que su participacion no haya generado ningun cambio, pero como historia en si es una de las mejores que he leido de los fanfics existentes. Maggie Stark <3
The OC blended in perfectly to the verse. The storyline had a wonderful take on the oc's growth. If I didn't know, I would think this was an original Marvel AU
it is a good read. went into it looking for a time killer and found a masterpiece of fanfiction. some parts might be confusing if you don't know the MCU, but you probably are if you're looking for fanfic of it.
I loved this book. it was an emotional roller coaster with great characters and any book that can make me burst out laughing and 10 chapters later be holding back tears is incredible.
I liked the premise, the beginning, and parts of the story overall. The problem is that we have Maggie Stark as the protagonist, who has been shown to be someone who could be Tony Stark(her brother)‘s equal or near equal. THEN she also has the super soldier serumn like Steve or Bucky, with all the training HYDRA could provide, such as the Red Room like Natasha. Why is that bad? It isn’t. Until her presence in the MCU does basically nothing to change how the story goes. Major events stay basically the same, except some have an extra person in it- such as when going into the past to get the infinity stones, she joins Steve, stands there while he gets the scepter, rushes off to help with the cube, gets slapped by past-Hulk, rushes back to see Steve basically defeat past-Steve, knocks out past-Steve, and then has to go with Steve and Tony to the past. WHERE she follows Tony to get the cube, and nothing changes… except she’s in the scene. Her role in this story amounts to basic emotional support to the Avengers and Bucky. Of course that’s downplaying it a bit to make summarization easier, but still… she’s by no means fulfilling the role cut out for her. She doesn’t even do the snap instead of Tony, so all I can think of her being there is to give Bucky a happy ending, and help Pepper raise Morgan. Of course, a lot of that is just expectations vs reality. It’s just disappointing there. Overall a good novel though.
Reveal Spoiler This was one of the most emotional stories I have ever read one Webnovel. Thank you author for this book.
One of my most favourite stories I have EVER read. The MC's emotional journey through life is heart warming and tear jerking with an ending that left me satisfied of a job well done. The world and characters were realistic and felt true to their cinematic counterparts. The chapter length is very long which shows the dedication of the author. LOVED this story and will probably read all over again one day.
it's a repost of a really good fanfic .............................................., ...........................jsjsjsjsit's a repost of a really good fanfic .............................................., ...........................jsjsjsjsit's a repost of a really good fanfic .............................................., ...........................jsjsjsjs
What a great story, really encapsulates the emotion and expression of all the characters, a lot of feelings went in this story top notch story.
This is easily the best MCU fanfic that I have read to date. the author has masterly written the MC into the MCU and for me, it feels like the character was meant to be there. highly recommend it to anyone who loves the MCU. my only dislike about it is it is compleat
Finished it and have to say was written very well. It's definitely not for everyone, it's very slow-paced but goes into such detail that everything meshes together and makes sense. The character slides into the story without feeling jarring or like someone forced them into the story. The writing quality never really drops in terms of personalities. The main issue is... the character doesn't matter and has 0 impacts on the story. The mc is a watcher looking on never changing anything so ultimately the author manages to write someone else's story very well so I can't really give them credit for story development because it's copied at many times word for word and describing the same fight scenes as the original. It's a shame because it's written so well but convoluted excuses, mistakes and random emotional drama happen all to force the events to play out exactly like the original source material. The place where it shines is the few points where it's original but then those are quickly ruined by being shoved under the rug in order to maintain the original plot. Overall though it's a fantastic story... it's just unfortunate that it lacks anything original.
Reveal Spoiler This is one of the best stories I have seen. Keep make more of them please. ..............................................................................
Going to start of by saying the book is great, but not for everyone. The start of the book was quite well done for world building and showing who/what/why the main character is the way she is. It's written very well and in-depth, at the same time it's a tease and time delay until the original story of MCU starts going. That's when I think the book starter spiralling downwards, the romance and the travel was a nice input, but the fact of them being on the side-line every time its convenient for the story gets to you eventually. Then the story starts taking of after the fall of Ultron, yet the main character gets put on the side-line with a few twists and turns to let the original plot play out again and again, crying and sobbing for 10 chapters while "Attempting" to stop things around her, while they play out just like the plot. What got to me the most was the fact once the mc was pointed out to the media, she has to go through a trial to prove her innocence to the people? and her friends and family sits on the side and can't do anything for 15 chapters? Stark gets blackmailed and cant do anything? Where are the other villains in the justice system? Aren't there literal serial killers not getting anywhere near this publicity and outrage? Odd universe. Anyhow, I enjoy the book and recommend others to read it, just don't try to reason with the logic of the main character, as it is a mix-mash of guilt/anger/sadness and there's no way others can really judge a character living with their own logic and answers.
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hehehe, how shameless of me ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------