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Overall it’s a pretty good story, cool concepts and I like the interest the MC shows in magical creatures. However, I’d recommend not reading it until the author updates again. They’re on a break from this book focusing on a different one. I got hooked and now I’m just bummed I don’t get to read more :/
haaay muchas buenas historias y otras al igual que esta me arrepiento de no leer las etiquetas ya que resulta que no es de mi gusto por lo que esta calificacion esta algo segada
Hey there, can someone tell me who our MC is romancing? I always tend to ask this before read. I know it's a major spoiler but whatever[img=recommend]
This is superb. I’ve read some of your other novels, and they are all wonderful. I really love the character. Can’t wait for you to get back to it.
I'm honestly really hyped about this Fic. I have not seen a decent villain story on the Harry Potter side for a while. can't wait till the next chapter! ✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧
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uh so I am basically literally only doing this for the free equipment slot okay thanks uhhhhhh sounds like a good book tho but i haven't read it so uh yeah
Ok, i'll keep this review a little short, it's an interesting idea and i look forward to the story, but Author, please update more often but all in all it's a good book to pass time and i like it
So far i haven't read much into it, will read more in the future though when i can! and don't ping everyone in your server pls i beg -ThatOneInflatableBean#5974
Harry poter is rad but as a result the amount of works based on it is oversaturated. That said this work is very unique in its premise and storyline and in the end, well executed too. Verycool
I really like the conversations and dialogue in this story. It's honestly enough to send chills down my spine. Good chills. Honestly, nice work!
Loved this first chapter and the ones following didn't disappoint! Tbh I haven't read much of the harry potter franchise, but this was still enjoyable. Very rad 🙌 Probably even better for those who do love hp.
this was very chilling i love the story, and the character developement so far. It is very interesting as I am a man who is fascinated. This is definitely one of the books on this platform.
I was really excited for this story, but when I read atleast 10+ chapters I was disappointed. It's not about the style of writing or uploading time but the pace of the story. After 10+ chapters of the Mc just monologuing and no progress whats over it gets boring. So I hope the Author speeds up pacing.
Great book with great potential. Keep it going :) Though I really, really, hate those infomercial chapters. They're super annoying.
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Well the idea was somewhat good I guess but the storytelling and the pace is so slow and boring plus the darkness god supposed to reincarnated and help her but instead put her to a prison and make the ministry know she is daughter of voldy is amazing how the author could believe she could go to scholl and people not kill her for what voldy has done !!
Amazing and really great book. Readers check out if u like harry potter fanfics. 💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩
It's been years since I saw Harry potter movie. The fanfic reminds me the old good days. Let's see how Happy potter was for the author. All the best zero
when I read 'As the Dark One' I went straight to Once Upon a Time. ..........................................................................
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The story itself is interesting from the beginning, characters, events, everything is perfectly portrayed. keep it up, you have done a great job ❤️❤️
It was my first experience with a fan fiction book. It was good though. I enjoyed it a lot. The plots are all interesting as well. The way you described your characters and their situations are fascinating.
As a one who loves to rrad fan fictions, I think this is gonna be one of my favourites. As I started reading I knew this is gonna be a master piece. Support the author to keep going..❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ And expect this author to give a commemt about my work too.. Waiting for the light.[img=recommend]
The novel is good, all the introductions and character design were explained in a good way, I hope that the author will drag the Mc into the plot instead being a side observer.
I loved the premise of the book..its only been four chapter but im already hooked and waitijg for more chapters...i like our Mc the most and cant wait to see more of her[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
*At chapter 4* so far so good keep up the good work please don't drop [img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
Hey there, author here, just thought i would try writing a fanfiction for the first time for fun. Haven't seen a lot of 'villain' Harry Potter novels, especially ones with Female Leads, and Yuri, so I thought I would give it a shot. Check it out and tell me what you think.
Overall it’s a pretty good story, cool concepts and I like the interest the MC shows in magical creatures. However, I’d recommend not reading it until the author updates again. They’re on a break from this book focusing on a different one. I got hooked and now I’m just bummed I don’t get to read more :/
haaay muchas buenas historias y otras al igual que esta me arrepiento de no leer las etiquetas ya que resulta que no es de mi gusto por lo que esta calificacion esta algo segada
Hey there, can someone tell me who our MC is romancing? I always tend to ask this before read. I know it's a major spoiler but whatever[img=recommend]
This is superb. I’ve read some of your other novels, and they are all wonderful. I really love the character. Can’t wait for you to get back to it.
I'm honestly really hyped about this Fic. I have not seen a decent villain story on the Harry Potter side for a while. can't wait till the next chapter! ✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧
I love it Jhfdgjfsrhjdkhtfkjtdtjrshjfdjhrdjtfkjgmfkhtdryegytewytigoglygkjtfhtkfjkhgjhgyrrjitglkyhpumjhvlhpiuhiutrturwygedjhrkgktlglyjlygjkyfkjtfuhrrkylckjgfkjggnhgkjg
uh so I am basically literally only doing this for the free equipment slot okay thanks uhhhhhh sounds like a good book tho but i haven't read it so uh yeah
Ok, i'll keep this review a little short, it's an interesting idea and i look forward to the story, but Author, please update more often but all in all it's a good book to pass time and i like it
So far i haven't read much into it, will read more in the future though when i can! and don't ping everyone in your server pls i beg -ThatOneInflatableBean#5974
Harry poter is rad but as a result the amount of works based on it is oversaturated. That said this work is very unique in its premise and storyline and in the end, well executed too. Verycool
I really like the conversations and dialogue in this story. It's honestly enough to send chills down my spine. Good chills. Honestly, nice work!
Loved this first chapter and the ones following didn't disappoint! Tbh I haven't read much of the harry potter franchise, but this was still enjoyable. Very rad 🙌 Probably even better for those who do love hp.
this was very chilling i love the story, and the character developement so far. It is very interesting as I am a man who is fascinated. This is definitely one of the books on this platform.
I was really excited for this story, but when I read atleast 10+ chapters I was disappointed. It's not about the style of writing or uploading time but the pace of the story. After 10+ chapters of the Mc just monologuing and no progress whats over it gets boring. So I hope the Author speeds up pacing.
Great book with great potential. Keep it going :) Though I really, really, hate those infomercial chapters. They're super annoying.
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Well the idea was somewhat good I guess but the storytelling and the pace is so slow and boring plus the darkness god supposed to reincarnated and help her but instead put her to a prison and make the ministry know she is daughter of voldy is amazing how the author could believe she could go to scholl and people not kill her for what voldy has done !!
Amazing and really great book. Readers check out if u like harry potter fanfics. 💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩
It's been years since I saw Harry potter movie. The fanfic reminds me the old good days. Let's see how Happy potter was for the author. All the best zero
when I read 'As the Dark One' I went straight to Once Upon a Time. ..........................................................................
Reveal Spoiler The story itself is interesting from the beginning, characters, events, everything is perfectly portrayed. keep it up, you have done a great job ❤️❤️
It was my first experience with a fan fiction book. It was good though. I enjoyed it a lot. The plots are all interesting as well. The way you described your characters and their situations are fascinating.
As a one who loves to rrad fan fictions, I think this is gonna be one of my favourites. As I started reading I knew this is gonna be a master piece. Support the author to keep going..❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ And expect this author to give a commemt about my work too.. Waiting for the light.[img=recommend]
The novel is good, all the introductions and character design were explained in a good way, I hope that the author will drag the Mc into the plot instead being a side observer.
I loved the premise of the book..its only been four chapter but im already hooked and waitijg for more chapters...i like our Mc the most and cant wait to see more of her[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
*At chapter 4* so far so good keep up the good work please don't drop [img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
Hey there, author here, just thought i would try writing a fanfiction for the first time for fun. Haven't seen a lot of 'villain' Harry Potter novels, especially ones with Female Leads, and Yuri, so I thought I would give it a shot. Check it out and tell me what you think.