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This is a great and fun story with lots of monster girls, situations, and character types. Currently the author has this book on hiatus. That's the main downside in my opinion. Off hand, there's a bit of a 'jump the shark' relationship in my opinion with Asteroth(sp?) that I don't care for, but that's minor compared to the rest of the work in my opinion.
Hello Author appreciate the time and work you put in! Read comment posted two months ago about finishing this after your other works…not trying to be impatient hope you come back to this one soon and the other projects go well!
I just started reading and I am quite happy with the story. I hope you didn't make the harem too crowded. When the number of Harem members reaches two-digit numbers, the story loses its flavor. (my english is not very good, i got help from google translate while writing a comment)
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une bonne lecture je conseille Les relations entre les personnages sont vraiment bien géré ça fait toujours plaisir Pour l'instant le scénario est cool et je pense que c'est prometteur
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Que gran obra estas escribiendo, puedo tan solo humildemente dar mis felicitaciones por tu trabajo y esfuerzo invertido en esta gran novela.😃
Only Read up to Chapter 11 but I love everything I see so far, but I must warn you that the stuff some characters say is truly out of pocket.
The novel is really good and has a interesting concept. It’s a mix from the typical system harem with the own ideas of the author. I like how the mc isn’t just a brainless simp or a dumb wannabe chad. The only thing I found that are a bit off putting are some illogical moments, like at the beginning how the mc family didn’t showed any reaction to his change in appearance. Overall you should give this novel a chance and I hope you will like it like I did. PS: Author keep out the good work!
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So far the concept is very well done, the story feels original and well thought out. I have nothing bad to say about it, if you're looking for a good read this is it.
this novel is awesome .. but author are you gonna see it to the end or you will drop it please give us an answer
I'm currently really liking this novel. Its only real problem is its writing. The author doesn't really structure the chapters that well and will sometimes skip writing some things presuming the reader will understand what's happening either way. The main character is enjoyable but seems to have a preference for dark-skinned women. There is nothing wrong with that but I want to have some variety between the girls. Not just describing their perfect dark skin. On the topic of his harem and its future members. There are too many women and too few chapters for them to be able to develop but all of them are fun. The world background seems promising with a whole universe with a few mysteries seemingly planned out.
Une histoire qui merite beaucoup d'éloge ! Pas trop ouf coté originalité mais c'est plutot bien fait donc continuer comme ca ! L'histoire est tres captivante
nice i like it , the concept for having spirit summons is very cute and new for me and also make some more interactions with the girl name odite i think the one who was in his squad in starting , i want to see her jealous and feel regret well maybe later you can add her into the harem , i will love it , as of all nice novel , i hope to see regular updates
This is a great and fun story with lots of monster girls, situations, and character types. Currently the author has this book on hiatus. That's the main downside in my opinion. Off hand, there's a bit of a 'jump the shark' relationship in my opinion with Asteroth(sp?) that I don't care for, but that's minor compared to the rest of the work in my opinion.
Hello Author appreciate the time and work you put in! Read comment posted two months ago about finishing this after your other works…not trying to be impatient hope you come back to this one soon and the other projects go well!
I just started reading and I am quite happy with the story. I hope you didn't make the harem too crowded. When the number of Harem members reaches two-digit numbers, the story loses its flavor. (my english is not very good, i got help from google translate while writing a comment)
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une bonne lecture je conseille Les relations entre les personnages sont vraiment bien géré ça fait toujours plaisir Pour l'instant le scénario est cool et je pense que c'est prometteur
Harrem[img=update][img=update][img=update]Harrem[img=update][img=update][img=update]Harrem[img=update][img=update][img=update] Harrem[img=update][img=update][img=update] Yeayyyy I Love Ittttt
Que gran obra estas escribiendo, puedo tan solo humildemente dar mis felicitaciones por tu trabajo y esfuerzo invertido en esta gran novela.😃
Only Read up to Chapter 11 but I love everything I see so far, but I must warn you that the stuff some characters say is truly out of pocket.
The novel is really good and has a interesting concept. It’s a mix from the typical system harem with the own ideas of the author. I like how the mc isn’t just a brainless simp or a dumb wannabe chad. The only thing I found that are a bit off putting are some illogical moments, like at the beginning how the mc family didn’t showed any reaction to his change in appearance. Overall you should give this novel a chance and I hope you will like it like I did. PS: Author keep out the good work!
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Awesome work from author, loved it 👌👌👌👌👌👌👌[img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update]
So far the concept is very well done, the story feels original and well thought out. I have nothing bad to say about it, if you're looking for a good read this is it.
this novel is awesome .. but author are you gonna see it to the end or you will drop it please give us an answer
I'm currently really liking this novel. Its only real problem is its writing. The author doesn't really structure the chapters that well and will sometimes skip writing some things presuming the reader will understand what's happening either way. The main character is enjoyable but seems to have a preference for dark-skinned women. There is nothing wrong with that but I want to have some variety between the girls. Not just describing their perfect dark skin. On the topic of his harem and its future members. There are too many women and too few chapters for them to be able to develop but all of them are fun. The world background seems promising with a whole universe with a few mysteries seemingly planned out.
Une histoire qui merite beaucoup d'éloge ! Pas trop ouf coté originalité mais c'est plutot bien fait donc continuer comme ca ! L'histoire est tres captivante
nice i like it , the concept for having spirit summons is very cute and new for me and also make some more interactions with the girl name odite i think the one who was in his squad in starting , i want to see her jealous and feel regret well maybe later you can add her into the harem , i will love it , as of all nice novel , i hope to see regular updates
Keep it going. If at all costs it is such a nice read.