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I really enjoyed this story set in the High Continent where everyone becomes a Lord and battles it out with unique Lord Talents. The different abilities, like the Combat Spirit Knight and King of Abyss, kept the plot exciting. Zhou Zhou's journey in acquiring a special Lord Talent added a great twist, making the story even more intriguing. The element of surprise and strategy in battles kept me hooked. This story deserves more recognition for its creative take on transmigration, the interesting world it builds, and the engaging Lord Talents. I'm eager to see where the adventure goes next. Definitely recommended for fantasy enthusiasts!
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Very good novel, enjoyed it very much. The World is very well written and I enjoy op mcs this one is very powerful but he didn't gain his powers so easily which I enjoyed.
it's not enough that the author used to flagrantly duplicate paragraphs(at least 1 & sometimes upto 3) per chapter. I mean doing that over and over and pretending it was an accident somewhere along the writing/publishing process can only be justified if it doesn't happen constantly(which it does). now instead of duplicating it word for word, the author chooses to phrase a duplicated paragraph slightly different. again the story is definitely well written & enjoyable but the outrageous methods the author uses to maximise word count is really shady. that the author doesn't care how the audience feels towards this just makes this issue worse. it's getting to the point that it makes me feel it actually detracts from the actual novel quality.anyway just my own whining & complaining
1 to 803. this novel has some potential. mc is too OP also not idiot compare to other mc. i hope he will develop more on technology for his technology and he rely too much on drops that he never tries to invent/improve some thing aside from related to mecha when he got the mecha talent.
My issues are THE REPEATING SENTENCES author repeat it for word count it seems at first I thought that was a error but not anymoreand the update become inconsistent nowfrom 3 chaps a day it became 2 a day and sometimes it doesn't update for a day or twoI love the story but the update stability irritates me
Tathagata had received such great help from him. “He”, who mainly cultivated the Law of Karma, would definitely repay him. Zhou Zhou flipped his right hand and a Book of The God Spirit appeared in “His” hand. excerpt from the novel, you see reading that fccknng "He" His" thing is fcckbgg annoying
author is quite flagrant about the word count. regularly duplicates paragraphs(sometimes up to 3 per chapter), finds ways to repeat info of before & after upgrade. so getting passed these things the story is very well written and enjoyable, which makes the word count thing even more so frustrating to be honest.
I'm currently in the 100's of the novel chapters and overall, it's good the only thing that I don't quite like is the fact that the Mc took the martial artist class because its only limit depends on the cultivation technique, but later its said that lords have no upper limit, meaning that he could've chose any class.
This novel has a lot going for it, but there are areas that need work. Just having a proofreader would help a lot. There are many instances of double paragraphs, there are many instances of old stat information being copy/pasted and not updating the new information, there are instances of inconsistencies with travel speed and distance traveled (specifically a space ship that can travel at 50billion kph traveling 500billion km in 30 minutes). There is flip flopping between saying someone’s name one way like bai he and then calling him white river. The pronouns are almost always different between chapters, such as introducing characters as female but then in every other paragraph using ”he”. But I really do like the way the story developed and how the world was described
Reveal Spoiler when those god was introduced they started using these "HE" "HIM" "THEY" the f is that shdit just usef a facting regular he him they , and also the regular earth will also get involved just like same with other same genre
want to ask a question. I've read up to page 80, and it began with some random martial arts talk. Will the protagonist continue to be a king who remains protected while the subordinates fight, or will he become a commander who trains in martial arts? Because if I wanted to see a martial arts story, I would read a novel where the protagonist becomes a cheerful adventurer, but I'm interested in a kingdom-building story
nice work. And can anyone tell the names of the novels like this novel, in which whole world people are transferred to another world
The translation stopped confusing genders from chapter 800, which is nice.(Never mind, it went back to "He", "Him" again. God, I beg you translator, just get the genders right please.
i like the fast paced story of this novel but its translation are so bad and full of error of gender mixing where a man get called a she/her. there is even a time where a character name get mixed up with another character who got nothing to do with the event. i stopped at chapter 859 because of the buddhism and hinduism ideologies that start popping up like crazy when the saha empire arc start where the author start using hindu word that i don't understand and ruined the reading enjoyment. out of the 5 human empire-level faction that are known as pillars of humanity, only one is western based empire=the knight empire but the other 4 are all chinese based empire, don't tell me only chinese is considered human and only caucasian can barely passed as human, at least make it balances like 1 white empire= knight empire, 1 black empire= pyramid empire, 1 brown empire=aztec empire and 2 chinese empire=great xia empire and cultivator empire. i dont even mention about "granpa mao" simping yet as its very cringy.
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Why is the translation so bad? Aren’t you making bucks through this ‘power stone’ thing? Can you actually try and do a good job at translating? Jesus christ
Muito bom li até o cap 901 só achei os capítulos muito curtos e o desenvolvimento de reino muito asselerado não si passou nem um mês e o prota já tem um exercito de 10 bilhões de soldados
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If only they polished it. The story is good but the report on each chapter is too long. It gets repetitive. Tried giving it a chance. I'm at 400 chapters but finally dropping it.
It's a popcorn read. Not good but not bad. Pretty good for passing time but don't take it seriously. It may get tiring though because most of the time you're just reading a bunch of info dump every chapter. It's pretty much about the loot the mc obtained or info about characters that the mc obtains. I'm at chapter 411 and I already feel burnt out. If the author were to exclude the info dumps then the novel would have less than 100 chapters.
first day already has almost 60 residentseveryone else has 10 or less MC already upgraded both buildings MC has a massive amount of supplies MC already planning an invasion of another territoyryshows how weak the writer is at writing if this pish is what he or she writes
it was good before but after this month there's been an issue on the updating stability
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Really different and amazing story. You’d think a story with such an OP skill would get boring but definitely not the case. World building has been great so far, can’t wait for more!
I just started reading this novel and the story, so far, started 'Okay'. However, the choices of words used by the translator to describe the quality of items, skills, and other tiered elements are poor and painful to read. Black Iron, White silver, Green Bronze??? Isn't it easier to go with the simpler Iron, Silver, Bronze?? It will be friendly to the brain to read 'Elementary Iron' than the 'Black Iron-Tier Elementary'. And the translator seem to have forgotten to delete some of the machine-translated parts.
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this novel.... sigh... I find it disappointing close to the chap 1kit's alright in the beginning but everything just went haywire cause I left it for a few weeks... same with global towers .... oh well the author tried .... but i feel like it's a repetition of sth I've read before
I really enjoyed this story set in the High Continent where everyone becomes a Lord and battles it out with unique Lord Talents. The different abilities, like the Combat Spirit Knight and King of Abyss, kept the plot exciting. Zhou Zhou's journey in acquiring a special Lord Talent added a great twist, making the story even more intriguing. The element of surprise and strategy in battles kept me hooked. This story deserves more recognition for its creative take on transmigration, the interesting world it builds, and the engaging Lord Talents. I'm eager to see where the adventure goes next. Definitely recommended for fantasy enthusiasts!
Reveal Spoiler Very good novel, enjoyed it very much. The World is very well written and I enjoy op mcs this one is very powerful but he didn't gain his powers so easily which I enjoyed.
it's not enough that the author used to flagrantly duplicate paragraphs(at least 1 & sometimes upto 3) per chapter. I mean doing that over and over and pretending it was an accident somewhere along the writing/publishing process can only be justified if it doesn't happen constantly(which it does). now instead of duplicating it word for word, the author chooses to phrase a duplicated paragraph slightly different. again the story is definitely well written & enjoyable but the outrageous methods the author uses to maximise word count is really shady. that the author doesn't care how the audience feels towards this just makes this issue worse. it's getting to the point that it makes me feel it actually detracts from the actual novel quality.anyway just my own whining & complaining
1 to 803. this novel has some potential. mc is too OP also not idiot compare to other mc. i hope he will develop more on technology for his technology and he rely too much on drops that he never tries to invent/improve some thing aside from related to mecha when he got the mecha talent.
My issues are THE REPEATING SENTENCES author repeat it for word count it seems at first I thought that was a error but not anymoreand the update become inconsistent nowfrom 3 chaps a day it became 2 a day and sometimes it doesn't update for a day or twoI love the story but the update stability irritates me
Tathagata had received such great help from him. “He”, who mainly cultivated the Law of Karma, would definitely repay him. Zhou Zhou flipped his right hand and a Book of The God Spirit appeared in “His” hand. excerpt from the novel, you see reading that fccknng "He" His" thing is fcckbgg annoying
author is quite flagrant about the word count. regularly duplicates paragraphs(sometimes up to 3 per chapter), finds ways to repeat info of before & after upgrade. so getting passed these things the story is very well written and enjoyable, which makes the word count thing even more so frustrating to be honest.
I'm currently in the 100's of the novel chapters and overall, it's good the only thing that I don't quite like is the fact that the Mc took the martial artist class because its only limit depends on the cultivation technique, but later its said that lords have no upper limit, meaning that he could've chose any class.
This novel has a lot going for it, but there are areas that need work. Just having a proofreader would help a lot. There are many instances of double paragraphs, there are many instances of old stat information being copy/pasted and not updating the new information, there are instances of inconsistencies with travel speed and distance traveled (specifically a space ship that can travel at 50billion kph traveling 500billion km in 30 minutes). There is flip flopping between saying someone’s name one way like bai he and then calling him white river. The pronouns are almost always different between chapters, such as introducing characters as female but then in every other paragraph using ”he”. But I really do like the way the story developed and how the world was described
Reveal Spoiler when those god was introduced they started using these "HE" "HIM" "THEY" the f is that shdit just usef a facting regular he him they , and also the regular earth will also get involved just like same with other same genre
want to ask a question. I've read up to page 80, and it began with some random martial arts talk. Will the protagonist continue to be a king who remains protected while the subordinates fight, or will he become a commander who trains in martial arts? Because if I wanted to see a martial arts story, I would read a novel where the protagonist becomes a cheerful adventurer, but I'm interested in a kingdom-building story
nice work. And can anyone tell the names of the novels like this novel, in which whole world people are transferred to another world
The translation stopped confusing genders from chapter 800, which is nice.(Never mind, it went back to "He", "Him" again. God, I beg you translator, just get the genders right please.
i like the fast paced story of this novel but its translation are so bad and full of error of gender mixing where a man get called a she/her. there is even a time where a character name get mixed up with another character who got nothing to do with the event. i stopped at chapter 859 because of the buddhism and hinduism ideologies that start popping up like crazy when the saha empire arc start where the author start using hindu word that i don't understand and ruined the reading enjoyment. out of the 5 human empire-level faction that are known as pillars of humanity, only one is western based empire=the knight empire but the other 4 are all chinese based empire, don't tell me only chinese is considered human and only caucasian can barely passed as human, at least make it balances like 1 white empire= knight empire, 1 black empire= pyramid empire, 1 brown empire=aztec empire and 2 chinese empire=great xia empire and cultivator empire. i dont even mention about "granpa mao" simping yet as its very cringy.
Reveal Spoiler Why is the translation so bad? Aren’t you making bucks through this ‘power stone’ thing? Can you actually try and do a good job at translating? Jesus christ
Muito bom li até o cap 901 só achei os capítulos muito curtos e o desenvolvimento de reino muito asselerado não si passou nem um mês e o prota já tem um exercito de 10 bilhões de soldados
Reveal Spoiler If only they polished it. The story is good but the report on each chapter is too long. It gets repetitive. Tried giving it a chance. I'm at 400 chapters but finally dropping it.
It's a popcorn read. Not good but not bad. Pretty good for passing time but don't take it seriously. It may get tiring though because most of the time you're just reading a bunch of info dump every chapter. It's pretty much about the loot the mc obtained or info about characters that the mc obtains. I'm at chapter 411 and I already feel burnt out. If the author were to exclude the info dumps then the novel would have less than 100 chapters.
first day already has almost 60 residentseveryone else has 10 or less MC already upgraded both buildings MC has a massive amount of supplies MC already planning an invasion of another territoyryshows how weak the writer is at writing if this pish is what he or she writes
it was good before but after this month there's been an issue on the updating stability
Reveal Spoiler Really different and amazing story. You’d think a story with such an OP skill would get boring but definitely not the case. World building has been great so far, can’t wait for more!
I just started reading this novel and the story, so far, started 'Okay'. However, the choices of words used by the translator to describe the quality of items, skills, and other tiered elements are poor and painful to read. Black Iron, White silver, Green Bronze??? Isn't it easier to go with the simpler Iron, Silver, Bronze?? It will be friendly to the brain to read 'Elementary Iron' than the 'Black Iron-Tier Elementary'. And the translator seem to have forgotten to delete some of the machine-translated parts.
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this novel.... sigh... I find it disappointing close to the chap 1kit's alright in the beginning but everything just went haywire cause I left it for a few weeks... same with global towers .... oh well the author tried .... but i feel like it's a repetition of sth I've read before