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This is really an amazing story so far..............I hope you don't drop this. Thanks šāļøšāļøšāļøāļøšāļøšāļøšāļøšāļøšāļøāļøāļøāļøāļøāļøāļøāļøāļøāļøāļøāļøāļøššššššššššššššÆšÆšÆšÆšÆšÆšÆ
I liked it a lot, after so many Naruto stories that the MC is dark or just hunting women this is a breath of fresh air, I recommend it to anyone who wants a quick and steady read.
keep going ......... a good idea of mixing hxh and naruto world i hope not be dropped cuz that would be disturbing š„š„š„š„šāāļøšāāļøšāāļøšāāļø
keep up the great work............................................................................................................................
this book is a hidden gem and is enjoyable to Read. no big grammar issues from what I can tell it is a little fast pace(skips entire childhood) not that it's a bad thing but you should slow down around canon/important events because otherwise the book will be really short and/or shallow with little to no character development summary: good potential
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This is really an amazing story so far..............I hope you don't drop this. Thanks šāļøšāļøšāļøāļøšāļøšāļøšāļøšāļøšāļøāļøāļøāļøāļøāļøāļøāļøāļøāļøāļøāļøāļøššššššššššššššÆšÆšÆšÆšÆšÆšÆ
I liked it a lot, after so many Naruto stories that the MC is dark or just hunting women this is a breath of fresh air, I recommend it to anyone who wants a quick and steady read.
keep going ......... a good idea of mixing hxh and naruto world i hope not be dropped cuz that would be disturbing š„š„š„š„šāāļøšāāļøšāāļøšāāļø
keep up the great work............................................................................................................................
this book is a hidden gem and is enjoyable to Read. no big grammar issues from what I can tell it is a little fast pace(skips entire childhood) not that it's a bad thing but you should slow down around canon/important events because otherwise the book will be really short and/or shallow with little to no character development summary: good potential
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