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So I’m kinda sad because this one was picked and it said taking a break but now it doesn’t say that anymore which usually means webnovel ignored the readers and chose something else
Very promising start. Not too dark of a setting and interesting combat system. Could use a bit less of the"arrogant young master" plot device, but I he's it comes with the genre.
this is literally just a ripoff of a Korean novel, author was confused on which parts to copy and make original so nothing makes sense in the story or synopsis
Another story about a system and its useless host. It's tiring to see the same stories over and over again. I quit after 4 chapters because it was terrible. The writing quality is aweful. The author is too anxious to play with the system that we know next to nothing about the world but we can see the MC doing nothing and getting stronger, got a rare treasure and draw the attention of the school belle. I repeat I stopped after 4 chapters. The MC transmigrated and the host previous life was terrible. Parents abandoned him and he got no friends. Very convenient when you are an author who doesn't want to develop characters.
This one, please release it now, the trial read is not enough we need more much more, both the pacing and the power scaling are currently going well so it would be good for this novel to get it's release.-
the main character is incredibly hateable, annoying and self entitled, and the synopsis is just wrong on many points
For those who normally complain about nationalism: In later chapters the story mentions the western race vaguely for a single chapter. However around chapter 357 it goes on to describe in greater detail how the yellow race is genetically superior and more evolved than other races. Now this isn’t actually nationalism and at this stage it only distinguishes a difference between east and west but I’m sure it will rub some readers the wrong way, so be aware that this story might not be for you if you can’t look past this.
If you like awesome reading material you can read this but be warned the author can’t keep the genders straight.
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Synopsis is wrong. He doesn’t have a F rank skill, but a B rank skill and it isn’t upgraded to SSR Rank. world background is similar to real life other than being awakened. Mc character design is garbage, at chapter 4 you might just cheer for the female lead. Ignore tag of high iq, more like entitled mc who already has a pretty decent talent but asks the system for a higher upgrade. The system is rather unnecessary in this novel as it should have been supplemented that everyone can see their own status in a game like screen. In fact, the mc asks system why he won’t get a higher upgrade, and while translation is terrible, the reason for that is because his body can’t handle it. The reason I say the mc doesn’t have a high IQ because upon exiting a mystic realm (dungeon training instance), he is asked by a man if the mc had gotten a skill drop. The mc replies he had and used it already. This is a huge red flag because now it just sets up the more enemies come because you had something rare trope, which will later invoke my boss’s boss or my brother’s master cliche to fill up the story Also the female lead tries to cheer up the mc saying that, “it is not the rank of the talent, but how you use and the effort you put in it”. MC ignores the female lead’s words thinking she’s insulting him. Translation definitely needs to be better as it takes away from the reading experience especially with an entitled mc who thinks that because he has a system and clones, he shouldn’t be working as hard.
It's a story with a good premise and lots of interesting developments. If you can get past the mistakes in the writing(translation) you too can enjoy the story and have a few laughs.
loved it...........[img=coins][img=exp][img=coins][img=exp][img=coins][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
Cool story but a lot of annoying small details that didnt translate. But overall worth the read for the free chapters, I will have to see what the future chapters bring once its translated.
~~ As of Chapter Forty ~~ The overall concept of this novel is pretty good. It is about an Mc with a cloning talent. Where he can make multiple copies of himself to fight, learn, and train with him improving the speed of growth he even learns how to make elemental clones. And with all the knowledge/experience they can, he can extract for himself, I say this is a rather OP ability. But the story itself at times can be very confusing one moment it says one thing another moment another thing. Basically contradicting itself, which is the only reason I did not give it a full 5/5. There is some grammar mistake but it is readable be prepared for a small amount of he/she mixup. Not the Mc that I have noticed but some side characters had that problem. So with all the mentioned and non-mentioned factors, I give this story with a benefit of the doubt 4.6/5
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this is the first supernatural novel that has caught my interest without romance More enlightenment
a good novel to pass up time, the author should at least keep updating the chapters by 1 at week to give a meaningful coherency for us old lady of club reading [img=update]
So I’m kinda sad because this one was picked and it said taking a break but now it doesn’t say that anymore which usually means webnovel ignored the readers and chose something else
Very promising start. Not too dark of a setting and interesting combat system. Could use a bit less of the"arrogant young master" plot device, but I he's it comes with the genre.
this is literally just a ripoff of a Korean novel, author was confused on which parts to copy and make original so nothing makes sense in the story or synopsis
Another story about a system and its useless host. It's tiring to see the same stories over and over again. I quit after 4 chapters because it was terrible. The writing quality is aweful. The author is too anxious to play with the system that we know next to nothing about the world but we can see the MC doing nothing and getting stronger, got a rare treasure and draw the attention of the school belle. I repeat I stopped after 4 chapters. The MC transmigrated and the host previous life was terrible. Parents abandoned him and he got no friends. Very convenient when you are an author who doesn't want to develop characters.
This one, please release it now, the trial read is not enough we need more much more, both the pacing and the power scaling are currently going well so it would be good for this novel to get it's release.-
the main character is incredibly hateable, annoying and self entitled, and the synopsis is just wrong on many points
For those who normally complain about nationalism: In later chapters the story mentions the western race vaguely for a single chapter. However around chapter 357 it goes on to describe in greater detail how the yellow race is genetically superior and more evolved than other races. Now this isn’t actually nationalism and at this stage it only distinguishes a difference between east and west but I’m sure it will rub some readers the wrong way, so be aware that this story might not be for you if you can’t look past this.
If you like awesome reading material you can read this but be warned the author can’t keep the genders straight.
Reveal Spoiler Synopsis is wrong. He doesn’t have a F rank skill, but a B rank skill and it isn’t upgraded to SSR Rank. world background is similar to real life other than being awakened. Mc character design is garbage, at chapter 4 you might just cheer for the female lead. Ignore tag of high iq, more like entitled mc who already has a pretty decent talent but asks the system for a higher upgrade. The system is rather unnecessary in this novel as it should have been supplemented that everyone can see their own status in a game like screen. In fact, the mc asks system why he won’t get a higher upgrade, and while translation is terrible, the reason for that is because his body can’t handle it. The reason I say the mc doesn’t have a high IQ because upon exiting a mystic realm (dungeon training instance), he is asked by a man if the mc had gotten a skill drop. The mc replies he had and used it already. This is a huge red flag because now it just sets up the more enemies come because you had something rare trope, which will later invoke my boss’s boss or my brother’s master cliche to fill up the story Also the female lead tries to cheer up the mc saying that, “it is not the rank of the talent, but how you use and the effort you put in it”. MC ignores the female lead’s words thinking she’s insulting him. Translation definitely needs to be better as it takes away from the reading experience especially with an entitled mc who thinks that because he has a system and clones, he shouldn’t be working as hard.
It's a story with a good premise and lots of interesting developments. If you can get past the mistakes in the writing(translation) you too can enjoy the story and have a few laughs.
loved it...........[img=coins][img=exp][img=coins][img=exp][img=coins][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
Cool story but a lot of annoying small details that didnt translate. But overall worth the read for the free chapters, I will have to see what the future chapters bring once its translated.
~~ As of Chapter Forty ~~ The overall concept of this novel is pretty good. It is about an Mc with a cloning talent. Where he can make multiple copies of himself to fight, learn, and train with him improving the speed of growth he even learns how to make elemental clones. And with all the knowledge/experience they can, he can extract for himself, I say this is a rather OP ability. But the story itself at times can be very confusing one moment it says one thing another moment another thing. Basically contradicting itself, which is the only reason I did not give it a full 5/5. There is some grammar mistake but it is readable be prepared for a small amount of he/she mixup. Not the Mc that I have noticed but some side characters had that problem. So with all the mentioned and non-mentioned factors, I give this story with a benefit of the doubt 4.6/5
Reveal Spoiler this is the first supernatural novel that has caught my interest without romance More enlightenment
a good novel to pass up time, the author should at least keep updating the chapters by 1 at week to give a meaningful coherency for us old lady of club reading [img=update]