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Everyone else is talking about repetition but they are forgetting the real problem yeah! The story is—- Well, you don’t need to have average IQ for it, yeah!! The storyline is below basic. I started reading because I don’t like over complicated plots yeah. But the reactions of the FL when she meets the cheating couple are literally st**pid. Not only that, the conversations between the ml and fl are uncoordinated. The ml says really absurd things and not in a good way. The author should work on her writing style. Let the characters go through the events and their emotions be exposed. The grammar, normally I’d ignore but I just can’t get over the continuous use of idoit instead of idiot. Also breath where breathe should be and breathe where breath should be. There’s also thier instead of their. And these are the ones that are often seen. The author badly needs an editor. I’m not encouraged to read further than I already have. But good luck
Wow. Am really impressed by this author's write up. I only read few chapters and I could tell this would be a book worth reading. Apart of a little bit of editing needed by the book, it's a fine story. Kudos author.
The story is really good and I would love it IF the author or translator didn't repeat almost 2/3 of every chapter from the previous chapters. Extremely frustrating for such a good story to barely progress even though you've paid for so many chapters. It's like paying for one chapter 5 times because the exact same content keeps taking up several paragraphs of the word count for the next four chapters!!! It's a waste of my coins.😥😖
too much repetition. but good content. so much corresponding to one's life. But can't read above page 30.. I lack tokens for that. they should make a different section for free books.
This book repeats paragraphs too much!! It had the ability to be a really good book. I will not continue reading!
THIS IS GARBAGE!!!! Apologies for the rudeness, sorry but this is garbage. There's to much repetition going on and some of the things that is happening in the story is weird with how it's written out.
I don’t know if it’s the author or the translator but they can’t just copy and paste every other paragraph. I couldn’t continue reading because I was getting irritated.
The author repeatedly copies and pastes paragraphs. There is almost no character or story development.
This book is perfect,mind blowing. I'm impressed. I highly recommend this book. Author's writing skill is also top notch.
Many parts of the chapters are copy and paste to make up for word count, so annoying so I'm drop this novel.
Though I haven't read the book yet, the synopsis already has me hooked. I can tell it will be a very good read. I have added it to my library and look forward to reading it.
finally leaving a review on my baby's book 😍😍😍 y'all should check it out and you wouldn't regret. Totally worth it 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
I love the way ran ran is trying to right all the wrong she did on her previous life... Please work on the editing that's the only problem apart from that the storyline is awesome...... Thank you to the author of this work[img=recommend]👏🏻
too much repetition in the story, I guess 1 para is repeated atleast 4 -5time . story plot ok ok , it would be good time reading story, if there's isn't much repetition....😶
I don't like it most of the chapters are repeated paragraph, every chapter are like 1 or 2 or 3 for entire 12 chapters and I stop in this chapter I don't like to continue to read
Everyone else is talking about repetition but they are forgetting the real problem yeah! The story is—- Well, you don’t need to have average IQ for it, yeah!! The storyline is below basic. I started reading because I don’t like over complicated plots yeah. But the reactions of the FL when she meets the cheating couple are literally st**pid. Not only that, the conversations between the ml and fl are uncoordinated. The ml says really absurd things and not in a good way. The author should work on her writing style. Let the characters go through the events and their emotions be exposed. The grammar, normally I’d ignore but I just can’t get over the continuous use of idoit instead of idiot. Also breath where breathe should be and breathe where breath should be. There’s also thier instead of their. And these are the ones that are often seen. The author badly needs an editor. I’m not encouraged to read further than I already have. But good luck
Wow. Am really impressed by this author's write up. I only read few chapters and I could tell this would be a book worth reading. Apart of a little bit of editing needed by the book, it's a fine story. Kudos author.
The story is really good and I would love it IF the author or translator didn't repeat almost 2/3 of every chapter from the previous chapters. Extremely frustrating for such a good story to barely progress even though you've paid for so many chapters. It's like paying for one chapter 5 times because the exact same content keeps taking up several paragraphs of the word count for the next four chapters!!! It's a waste of my coins.😥😖
too much repetition. but good content. so much corresponding to one's life. But can't read above page 30.. I lack tokens for that. they should make a different section for free books.
This book repeats paragraphs too much!! It had the ability to be a really good book. I will not continue reading!
THIS IS GARBAGE!!!! Apologies for the rudeness, sorry but this is garbage. There's to much repetition going on and some of the things that is happening in the story is weird with how it's written out.
I don’t know if it’s the author or the translator but they can’t just copy and paste every other paragraph. I couldn’t continue reading because I was getting irritated.
The author repeatedly copies and pastes paragraphs. There is almost no character or story development.
This book is perfect,mind blowing. I'm impressed. I highly recommend this book. Author's writing skill is also top notch.
Many parts of the chapters are copy and paste to make up for word count, so annoying so I'm drop this novel.
Though I haven't read the book yet, the synopsis already has me hooked. I can tell it will be a very good read. I have added it to my library and look forward to reading it.
finally leaving a review on my baby's book 😍😍😍 y'all should check it out and you wouldn't regret. Totally worth it 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
I love the way ran ran is trying to right all the wrong she did on her previous life... Please work on the editing that's the only problem apart from that the storyline is awesome...... Thank you to the author of this work[img=recommend]👏🏻
too much repetition in the story, I guess 1 para is repeated atleast 4 -5time . story plot ok ok , it would be good time reading story, if there's isn't much repetition....😶
I don't like it most of the chapters are repeated paragraph, every chapter are like 1 or 2 or 3 for entire 12 chapters and I stop in this chapter I don't like to continue to read