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Another chance to see Yuna's chaos adventure?! sign me in! also why the freak this fic got bombarded with 1 star? honestly, did they even read the first fic? I'm guessing they didn't because if they do, they would have already knew Yuna's personality
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hmm forgot to rate books again lol and yes the story is great but read the part 1 first this is part 2 or season 2 of the story and happy reading.
Beware daoists! This fanfic nearly caused a qi deviation in my meridians!
WHY IS THIS NOVEL SO SEXIST TO MALES why is Yuna the biggest hypocrite and biggest narcissist in bleach? yuna never looks at her human flaws but at others, she hates people who are narcissists but she is the biggest narcissist in bleach and Yuna thinks she is perfect. yuna is a total sexist she hates all males in bleach but if you are female she kisses the ground you walk on. the big problem in this novel is Bleach juses Yuna she is so perfect with no flaws,
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the main female lead name Yuna is Yandere's child molester every chapter she abuses a child for no reason. the author has a fetish for child molesters..cmon yuna she is a million-year-old god and she acts like Yandere's child molester..for some reason she hates Ichigo she destroys his manhood and his spirit she those that to all the males in the world because she believe she is better than everyone and they are all losers.yuna is merry sue with plot armor
NOT NARUTO IN THE THUMBNAIL IMAGE?! BUT WHAIT.. wHeRe iS sAsUke aNd BiG fOrHeAd SaKuRuh???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
According to me, Writing Quality is good save for all those grammatical errors and the jumbled sentences sometimes (4 Star) Stability of update: Yeah... Nope(1 star) Story Development: Kinda rushed, not much added and if you don't remember reading Bleach manga, then you are stuck (4star) Character Design: ... 5 Star! No question asked World Background: 5 Star! No questions asked
Overall I would say: 1)Bad writing quality. 2) Completely unstable updates. 3) Improper story' development. 4)best character design. 5)world background is ok since it's a mix of Naruto, bleach and some sort of cultivation world.
In a flibber-flabbering world of wobble-jibberish, zippity-zoop zongled, wibbly-wobbly whatchamacallits whimsically whiz-banged while razzle-dazzling with a higgledy-piggledy zigzagoo
some persevered because of responsibility, some persevered because of hatred, some persevered because of excitement, and some persevered because of love… And Fang Yuan’s answer? He was still expressionless, he continued to move forward relentlessly. I had once screamed, gradually, I lost my voice. I had once cried, gradually, I lost my tears. I had once grieved, gradually, I became able to withstand everything. I had once rejoiced, gradually, I became unmoved by the world. And now! All I have left is an expressionless face, my gaze is as tough as a monolith, only perseverance remains in my heart. This is my own, an insignificant character, Fang Yuan’s — Perseverance!
Just like Maerry’s last novel, this one is also just absolutely hilarious and entertaining, 100% recommend for good action but also just pure entertainment
it's really good stuff and hilarious...btw can u made yuna go to cultivation world and mess up there and slap cold attitude of some ancestor
Disliking the Genre of Yuri: A Personal Perspective Literature and entertainment encompass a wide array of genres, each with its own unique appeal. However, personal preferences may lead individuals to gravitate toward certain genres while feeling less enthusiastic about others. In this essay, I will explore my personal perspective on the genre of Yuri, shedding light on the reasons behind my lack of affinity for this particular category. Body: Lack of Personal Connection: One of the primary reasons for my disinterest in the genre of Yuri stems from the lack of personal connection I feel toward its themes and narratives. Yuri, also known as "Girls' Love," predominantly explores romantic relationships between female characters. As someone who does not identify with this particular aspect, it becomes difficult to relate to the experiences and emotions portrayed within the genre. Overemphasis on Romantic Relationships: In many Yuri stories, the central focus tends to be on the development and progression of romantic relationships between female characters. While romance can be an integral and compelling element in storytelling, an excessive emphasis on it within Yuri works can overshadow other important aspects such as character development, plot progression, and thematic exploration. This imbalance often leads to predictable and repetitive storylines, limiting the genre's potential for broader engagement. Unrealistic Portrayals: Another factor that contributes to my lack of appreciation for the genre is the tendency of Yuri to portray idealized and often unrealistic relationships between female characters. While fiction inherently involves some level of fantasy, excessive idealization can make the characters and their interactions seem detached from reality. This can hinder the exploration of more nuanced themes and can result in a lack of depth within the storytelling. Limited Representation and Diversity: Although Yuri focuses on relationships between female characters, it is important to note that the genre often falls short in terms of representation and diversity. Many Yuri works tend to feature characters who conform to stereotypical roles, thereby failing to accurately represent the vast array of experiences and identities within the LGBTQ+ community. This lack of representation can be disappointing and alienating for readers seeking more authentic and inclusive narratives. Conclusion: While personal preferences play a significant role in shaping our interests, it is important to acknowledge that different individuals have varying tastes in literature and entertainment. In the case of Yuri, my lack of enthusiasm for the genre is rooted in a combination of factors such as a lack of personal connection, an overemphasis on romantic relationships, unrealistic portrayals, and limited representation and diversity. However, it is crucial to recognize that the genre holds value for others who may find solace, inspiration, or enjoyment within its narratives. Ultimately, diverse genres and perspectives contribute to a rich and multifaceted cultural landscape, accommodating a wide range of tastes and preferences.
I can't say much to describe this story. I can only think of perfection. The first part already ate my time so wonderfully and this story will do the same.
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i love the Goddess of ice and this chapter is the same. as for after Bleach what about Rwby.]
I Have reeded the first book tree time before and I love it and based on what I have read so far it won't let me down I highly recommended it.
The pacing of the book is expertly done, with each chapter ending in a way that compels you to keep reading. The author's crisp and concise writing style enhances the suspense and creates a sense of urgency throughout the story. The plot twists and turns are cleverly executed, keeping the reader guessing until the final pages.
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Please never stop writing!!! I love your works and its always fun to read your stuff (laughed so hard at some points) BIG THANKS FOR CREATING YUNA MAY THE DEGENERATE-POWER BE ALWAYS WITH HER [img=recommend]
Another chance to see Yuna's chaos adventure?! sign me in! also why the freak this fic got bombarded with 1 star? honestly, did they even read the first fic? I'm guessing they didn't because if they do, they would have already knew Yuna's personality
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hmm forgot to rate books again lol and yes the story is great but read the part 1 first this is part 2 or season 2 of the story and happy reading.
Beware daoists! This fanfic nearly caused a qi deviation in my meridians!
WHY IS THIS NOVEL SO SEXIST TO MALES why is Yuna the biggest hypocrite and biggest narcissist in bleach? yuna never looks at her human flaws but at others, she hates people who are narcissists but she is the biggest narcissist in bleach and Yuna thinks she is perfect. yuna is a total sexist she hates all males in bleach but if you are female she kisses the ground you walk on. the big problem in this novel is Bleach juses Yuna she is so perfect with no flaws,
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the main female lead name Yuna is Yandere's child molester every chapter she abuses a child for no reason. the author has a fetish for child molesters..cmon yuna she is a million-year-old god and she acts like Yandere's child molester..for some reason she hates Ichigo she destroys his manhood and his spirit she those that to all the males in the world because she believe she is better than everyone and they are all losers.yuna is merry sue with plot armor
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According to me, Writing Quality is good save for all those grammatical errors and the jumbled sentences sometimes (4 Star) Stability of update: Yeah... Nope(1 star) Story Development: Kinda rushed, not much added and if you don't remember reading Bleach manga, then you are stuck (4star) Character Design: ... 5 Star! No question asked World Background: 5 Star! No questions asked
Overall I would say: 1)Bad writing quality. 2) Completely unstable updates. 3) Improper story' development. 4)best character design. 5)world background is ok since it's a mix of Naruto, bleach and some sort of cultivation world.
In a flibber-flabbering world of wobble-jibberish, zippity-zoop zongled, wibbly-wobbly whatchamacallits whimsically whiz-banged while razzle-dazzling with a higgledy-piggledy zigzagoo
some persevered because of responsibility, some persevered because of hatred, some persevered because of excitement, and some persevered because of love… And Fang Yuan’s answer? He was still expressionless, he continued to move forward relentlessly. I had once screamed, gradually, I lost my voice. I had once cried, gradually, I lost my tears. I had once grieved, gradually, I became able to withstand everything. I had once rejoiced, gradually, I became unmoved by the world. And now! All I have left is an expressionless face, my gaze is as tough as a monolith, only perseverance remains in my heart. This is my own, an insignificant character, Fang Yuan’s — Perseverance!
Just like Maerry’s last novel, this one is also just absolutely hilarious and entertaining, 100% recommend for good action but also just pure entertainment
it's really good stuff and hilarious...btw can u made yuna go to cultivation world and mess up there and slap cold attitude of some ancestor
Disliking the Genre of Yuri: A Personal Perspective Literature and entertainment encompass a wide array of genres, each with its own unique appeal. However, personal preferences may lead individuals to gravitate toward certain genres while feeling less enthusiastic about others. In this essay, I will explore my personal perspective on the genre of Yuri, shedding light on the reasons behind my lack of affinity for this particular category. Body: Lack of Personal Connection: One of the primary reasons for my disinterest in the genre of Yuri stems from the lack of personal connection I feel toward its themes and narratives. Yuri, also known as "Girls' Love," predominantly explores romantic relationships between female characters. As someone who does not identify with this particular aspect, it becomes difficult to relate to the experiences and emotions portrayed within the genre. Overemphasis on Romantic Relationships: In many Yuri stories, the central focus tends to be on the development and progression of romantic relationships between female characters. While romance can be an integral and compelling element in storytelling, an excessive emphasis on it within Yuri works can overshadow other important aspects such as character development, plot progression, and thematic exploration. This imbalance often leads to predictable and repetitive storylines, limiting the genre's potential for broader engagement. Unrealistic Portrayals: Another factor that contributes to my lack of appreciation for the genre is the tendency of Yuri to portray idealized and often unrealistic relationships between female characters. While fiction inherently involves some level of fantasy, excessive idealization can make the characters and their interactions seem detached from reality. This can hinder the exploration of more nuanced themes and can result in a lack of depth within the storytelling. Limited Representation and Diversity: Although Yuri focuses on relationships between female characters, it is important to note that the genre often falls short in terms of representation and diversity. Many Yuri works tend to feature characters who conform to stereotypical roles, thereby failing to accurately represent the vast array of experiences and identities within the LGBTQ+ community. This lack of representation can be disappointing and alienating for readers seeking more authentic and inclusive narratives. Conclusion: While personal preferences play a significant role in shaping our interests, it is important to acknowledge that different individuals have varying tastes in literature and entertainment. In the case of Yuri, my lack of enthusiasm for the genre is rooted in a combination of factors such as a lack of personal connection, an overemphasis on romantic relationships, unrealistic portrayals, and limited representation and diversity. However, it is crucial to recognize that the genre holds value for others who may find solace, inspiration, or enjoyment within its narratives. Ultimately, diverse genres and perspectives contribute to a rich and multifaceted cultural landscape, accommodating a wide range of tastes and preferences.
I can't say much to describe this story. I can only think of perfection. The first part already ate my time so wonderfully and this story will do the same.
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i love the Goddess of ice and this chapter is the same. as for after Bleach what about Rwby.]
I Have reeded the first book tree time before and I love it and based on what I have read so far it won't let me down I highly recommended it.
The pacing of the book is expertly done, with each chapter ending in a way that compels you to keep reading. The author's crisp and concise writing style enhances the suspense and creates a sense of urgency throughout the story. The plot twists and turns are cleverly executed, keeping the reader guessing until the final pages.
Reveal Spoiler Please never stop writing!!! I love your works and its always fun to read your stuff (laughed so hard at some points) BIG THANKS FOR CREATING YUNA MAY THE DEGENERATE-POWER BE ALWAYS WITH HER [img=recommend]
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