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Gran historia de Peter en la que no tiene los poderes que le correspondía en una relación abierta com muchas de las waifus dónde no duda en matar y que dejó la escuela 5/5
Story is ok. Peter is absolutely nerfed and for being very strong and smart he is completely exploited and screwed by one or more groups or in the example: with his Venom-Spiderman-powers he still loses against Rhino and Sandman. I don't even want to talk about his harem. There are just too many of them.
The actual title is Whorhouse of Venom. great concept, love venom Peter start. not interested in your fantasys however, regardless how in sync with mine they are with my own.
Idk where to start. This story is for you if you like a supposedly smart character act dumb, if an OP power combo is unbelievably weak, he has venom Spiderman powers and lost to Rhino & Sandman. I'm not even gonna talk about the sharing and weird relationships going on in the "harem". It's not even his, "his" girls sleeps with others. Obligatory NTR warning.
Honestly, it's the best Venom fanfic I've ever seen, it literally has everything besides a brutal prologue and a captivating, dramatic, realistic, sincere plot where things are understood and understood instead of hiding things (Most of the time). I love the interactions that Peter has with his girlfriends and the way they build their relationships in a realistic, humane, honest, accepting and helpful way. It is also a great plus that many Marvel characters are added and not only the main ones from the Spiderman series (Like Tony Stark, Elektra, Liv Octavius, etc. I repeat it again, Peter's relationship with his girlfriends is healthy and realistic , I love it and my favorite female characters were always Gwen, Felicia and MJ, Gwen the first and she is also the one who keeps the whole group together, besides just wanting Peter to be happy, grant him many favors that most people would do us impossible to accept, she is a great woman and my favorite, forever. Felicia se fue pero es su vida y le deseo lo mejor, porque ella estuvo siempre para Peter cuando lo necesita, si ya no quiere estar con el romanticamente es mejor darle su espacio y que cada uno sea feliz sin mas, no arruinar su gran amistad por eso es lo importante
Eu parei no 50 e me decepcionei, eu não gosto de Yuri pra mim é traição e por outro lado eu não vejo problema nenhum se a pessoa permitir, só que isso daqui muda a sexualidade de cada uma das mulheres quase todas eram heterossexuais e por causa da Felícia a Gwen vira lésbica?, E nem sequer leva uns capítulos demora uns 2 pra ela vira lésbica, Eu vim para o último capítulo para desabafar e eu irei continuar lendo só que pulando cada capítulo NFSW, e se ao longo eu ler e ver um NTR... Eu droppo, tá agora pro Peter ele é um burro e denso, no original ele só era denso e um gênio e aqui ele tá um burro nível cósmico, eu amei como você colocou ele na sociedade, sempre existe algo mais forte que você e isso daqui usa bem faz ele aprender constantemente que ele ainda é pequeno
Not gonna like, I read about 50 chapters and I felt like I don’t know what’s going. Your concept said that Peter Parker will embrace the darkside and be venom, but I haven’t seen it. Every chapter he always said, “I‘ll I’m tired of the rich, Flash and his cronies bully him, Gwen Father, Jack, and others that wronged Peter but so far I haven’t seen any consequences that they deserved. Peter should have kill them. Another I don’t like is the whole Venom family. Only Peter gets venom and NO ONE ELSE! Idk why I had high hopes, but this story was just a waste of time.
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I was 2 chapters in and I didn't like how it was already i don't like mcs with yuri in their harems but I care not for a yuri couple as long as I don't have to read it it's fine. I decided to check the reviews after the felicia and gwen bit in chapter 1 I'm glad I did cause I hate ntr worst betrayal in my opinion
I heard there is NTR so here to give a review based on what I have read and to be honest after the 10th chapter the novel became stupid but somehow I can't bring myself to insult the author to write something so stupid to almost 400 chapters. At some point the story started to feel like a Chinese translation story
the world is a mess and a mumbo jumbo of different universes. peter with spider + venom somehow weaker than og peter. Yuri harem like seriously? don't bother wasting time reading this unless u like soyboy mc.
The yuri within the harem was bad, but still acceptable. The moment Felicia went outside of the harem it became ntr though. You can't defend it so don't try.
The concept of the story was cool a venom Spider-Man mix the grammar is good most of the time but I don’t have a NTR fetish the author like many other on this sight made a harem the made all the girl bi why so in conclusion this story is trash
You are a good writer hands down... I loved how you weaved the story(pun intended), you stayed consistent throughout. Had a good plot. now with all this i feel you have not yet reached your potential, or what I'm saying is that your writing that may be better than 98% of writers of fanfiction, feels could have more. To be more specific, the writing style seems a bit dragged, your not capturing attention enough... while i love you to develop a style that will help with enhancing your work. i think for action and fantasy try to make quick changes in scenes or do it your style but abit more gripping with less informative and more visal(if you get me). I actually would love to read a more mellow story in your current style. I hope this helps. all the best.
absolute garbage, each chapter gets dumber and dumber. absolute garbage, each chapter gets dumber and dumber. absolute garbage, each chapter gets dumber and dumber. absolute garbage, each chapter gets dumber and dumber. absolute garbage, each chapter gets dumber and dumber. absolute garbage, each chapter gets dumber and dumber.
Another trashy yuri harem with the mc acting as a stud. Pass. ...............................................................................
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Very enjoyable read steady power growth and not immediate jump into an OP character with no one to stand against which I appreciate. The harem is getting a little on the large side which I'm worried will start to distract more from the story and eventually bog it down but I'm trusting it won't, so far so good. This review was written when I was on chapter 180ish
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I don't like this this is a very very oc peter Parker. I mean he was bit by a radioactive spider then got the venom symbiotic in the same day, but yet it's like he has no powers and loosing to people he really shouldn't be loosing to. he doesn't have the spider sense or anything like the only thing he got was webs from the spider and even that was iffy. so I can't read this anymore
Status: arc five. chapter one hundred... an interesting take on spiderman/venom. Though the Harem quickly grew to much. Peter himself isn't an edge lord, thank goodness, but he's not the optimistic teen boy for the comics and movies. MC is OP no doubt, but when you have them in the same universe as EVERY Marvel character, he is still an ant. The Author definitely knows what villian or hero to use to make Peter, who has been waltzing through baddies, look like a toddler in comparison.
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It would actually be interesting but author nerfed Peter down to the ground even though he has Spider+venom powers he still is barely stronger than an avarge super human and he lost to Black cat of all things lol.
good story development but could use a few changes. I would have liked it more if he had killed flash and I would have preferred if other heroes also appeared and had a storyline. ps, what is your update schedule?
It would've been better if we actually had smart peter parker.... But if you like characters that are smart or dumb when the author feels like it you're good.
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Gran historia de Peter en la que no tiene los poderes que le correspondía en una relación abierta com muchas de las waifus dónde no duda en matar y que dejó la escuela 5/5
Story is ok. Peter is absolutely nerfed and for being very strong and smart he is completely exploited and screwed by one or more groups or in the example: with his Venom-Spiderman-powers he still loses against Rhino and Sandman. I don't even want to talk about his harem. There are just too many of them.
The actual title is Whorhouse of Venom. great concept, love venom Peter start. not interested in your fantasys however, regardless how in sync with mine they are with my own.
Idk where to start. This story is for you if you like a supposedly smart character act dumb, if an OP power combo is unbelievably weak, he has venom Spiderman powers and lost to Rhino & Sandman. I'm not even gonna talk about the sharing and weird relationships going on in the "harem". It's not even his, "his" girls sleeps with others. Obligatory NTR warning.
Honestly, it's the best Venom fanfic I've ever seen, it literally has everything besides a brutal prologue and a captivating, dramatic, realistic, sincere plot where things are understood and understood instead of hiding things (Most of the time). I love the interactions that Peter has with his girlfriends and the way they build their relationships in a realistic, humane, honest, accepting and helpful way. It is also a great plus that many Marvel characters are added and not only the main ones from the Spiderman series (Like Tony Stark, Elektra, Liv Octavius, etc. I repeat it again, Peter's relationship with his girlfriends is healthy and realistic , I love it and my favorite female characters were always Gwen, Felicia and MJ, Gwen the first and she is also the one who keeps the whole group together, besides just wanting Peter to be happy, grant him many favors that most people would do us impossible to accept, she is a great woman and my favorite, forever. Felicia se fue pero es su vida y le deseo lo mejor, porque ella estuvo siempre para Peter cuando lo necesita, si ya no quiere estar con el romanticamente es mejor darle su espacio y que cada uno sea feliz sin mas, no arruinar su gran amistad por eso es lo importante
Eu parei no 50 e me decepcionei, eu não gosto de Yuri pra mim é traição e por outro lado eu não vejo problema nenhum se a pessoa permitir, só que isso daqui muda a sexualidade de cada uma das mulheres quase todas eram heterossexuais e por causa da Felícia a Gwen vira lésbica?, E nem sequer leva uns capítulos demora uns 2 pra ela vira lésbica, Eu vim para o último capítulo para desabafar e eu irei continuar lendo só que pulando cada capítulo NFSW, e se ao longo eu ler e ver um NTR... Eu droppo, tá agora pro Peter ele é um burro e denso, no original ele só era denso e um gênio e aqui ele tá um burro nível cósmico, eu amei como você colocou ele na sociedade, sempre existe algo mais forte que você e isso daqui usa bem faz ele aprender constantemente que ele ainda é pequeno
Not gonna like, I read about 50 chapters and I felt like I don’t know what’s going. Your concept said that Peter Parker will embrace the darkside and be venom, but I haven’t seen it. Every chapter he always said, “I‘ll I’m tired of the rich, Flash and his cronies bully him, Gwen Father, Jack, and others that wronged Peter but so far I haven’t seen any consequences that they deserved. Peter should have kill them. Another I don’t like is the whole Venom family. Only Peter gets venom and NO ONE ELSE! Idk why I had high hopes, but this story was just a waste of time.
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I was 2 chapters in and I didn't like how it was already i don't like mcs with yuri in their harems but I care not for a yuri couple as long as I don't have to read it it's fine. I decided to check the reviews after the felicia and gwen bit in chapter 1 I'm glad I did cause I hate ntr worst betrayal in my opinion
I heard there is NTR so here to give a review based on what I have read and to be honest after the 10th chapter the novel became stupid but somehow I can't bring myself to insult the author to write something so stupid to almost 400 chapters. At some point the story started to feel like a Chinese translation story
the world is a mess and a mumbo jumbo of different universes. peter with spider + venom somehow weaker than og peter. Yuri harem like seriously? don't bother wasting time reading this unless u like soyboy mc.
The yuri within the harem was bad, but still acceptable. The moment Felicia went outside of the harem it became ntr though. You can't defend it so don't try.
The concept of the story was cool a venom Spider-Man mix the grammar is good most of the time but I don’t have a NTR fetish the author like many other on this sight made a harem the made all the girl bi why so in conclusion this story is trash
You are a good writer hands down... I loved how you weaved the story(pun intended), you stayed consistent throughout. Had a good plot. now with all this i feel you have not yet reached your potential, or what I'm saying is that your writing that may be better than 98% of writers of fanfiction, feels could have more. To be more specific, the writing style seems a bit dragged, your not capturing attention enough... while i love you to develop a style that will help with enhancing your work. i think for action and fantasy try to make quick changes in scenes or do it your style but abit more gripping with less informative and more visal(if you get me). I actually would love to read a more mellow story in your current style. I hope this helps. all the best.
absolute garbage, each chapter gets dumber and dumber. absolute garbage, each chapter gets dumber and dumber. absolute garbage, each chapter gets dumber and dumber. absolute garbage, each chapter gets dumber and dumber. absolute garbage, each chapter gets dumber and dumber. absolute garbage, each chapter gets dumber and dumber.
Another trashy yuri harem with the mc acting as a stud. Pass. ...............................................................................
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Very enjoyable read steady power growth and not immediate jump into an OP character with no one to stand against which I appreciate. The harem is getting a little on the large side which I'm worried will start to distract more from the story and eventually bog it down but I'm trusting it won't, so far so good. This review was written when I was on chapter 180ish
Reveal Spoiler I don't like this this is a very very oc peter Parker. I mean he was bit by a radioactive spider then got the venom symbiotic in the same day, but yet it's like he has no powers and loosing to people he really shouldn't be loosing to. he doesn't have the spider sense or anything like the only thing he got was webs from the spider and even that was iffy. so I can't read this anymore
Status: arc five. chapter one hundred... an interesting take on spiderman/venom. Though the Harem quickly grew to much. Peter himself isn't an edge lord, thank goodness, but he's not the optimistic teen boy for the comics and movies. MC is OP no doubt, but when you have them in the same universe as EVERY Marvel character, he is still an ant. The Author definitely knows what villian or hero to use to make Peter, who has been waltzing through baddies, look like a toddler in comparison.
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It would actually be interesting but author nerfed Peter down to the ground even though he has Spider+venom powers he still is barely stronger than an avarge super human and he lost to Black cat of all things lol.
good story development but could use a few changes. I would have liked it more if he had killed flash and I would have preferred if other heroes also appeared and had a storyline. ps, what is your update schedule?
It would've been better if we actually had smart peter parker.... But if you like characters that are smart or dumb when the author feels like it you're good.
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