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I was worried at the start as the author was prepping the story for Cliche overload, but the deviation from the norm was a pleasant surprise. I was a little disappointed he didn't do more to the Step mom and Sis at the start like using the other Hole forcefully to make sure they didn't like it... But other than that I have no complaints.. I like the system is part of the story and is a character not just invisible till MC needs a power up to win... I am one who doesn't like MCs who always win above their level by BS means and this story so far doesn't have it. MC is calculating, looks at thing logically and strategically, ruthless, romantic, and caring as well. I have yet to have a situation where MC's actions make me look at the story confused and pull my hair out.. Author has put thought into the action and consequences of MCs choice and given the MC fairly high level functioning brain... As of 109 I am hooked and will be doing Privilege next month on this story instead of others.
THIS NOVEL IS BETTER THEN THE MAJORITY OF NOVELS CURRENTLY IN THE TOP 10 SO PEOPLE SHOULD READ IT!! [Now for my Review] This novel is absolutely excellent and I'd rather just list the things I love about it so thats what I will do. First the MC is awesome he his attitude and character is great, A person who is kind and loving to the people he cares about and respectful to people who deserve it but cold and merciless to those who cross him or become enemies. He isn't like the sissy MC that are in the bashful/dense/naive/bad with girls that has become an annoying trope lately. The MC is realistic with his actions and desires and does what I believe most men who are honest with themselves would do in his position. Next the World background is different and amazing I won't spoil it so keep reading cause it's not just a modern world. Next the character development is great with the MC and his harem who stay relevant in the novel unlike those novels where you forget about characters regularly. The story truly follows a different and fun path that I haven't seen in other novels and I have read quite a few I highly recommend this novel. If it wasn't as good as it is I wouldn't have written such a long Review so everyone should read it and make this novel that deserves to be supported take a spot in the top
Honest reviews are here.. [Spoiler Alert] This story can be categorised in fantasy terms, but it is more accurate to be romance-fantasy.. I saw the mature content in synopsis, but I won't imagine that the author means EVERY chapters have adult scene.. In MC mind, MC always thinks of "intercourse" with other girls, ALWAYS.. First, he "grape" (remove G in grape) his stepsister for revenge.. Then, he "grape" his stepmother in front of his father for revenge.. Well, I don't care much about it because the ways his stepsister, stepmother, and his own father treat him after his mother dead is up straight cruelty.. But I started to get this is not for me when the author put ALMOST EVERY chapter have these adult scene.. Kinda way too much of those scene.. And MC is not straight away OP.. He kinda grows stronger in time.. There is still a ton of people stronger than him.. He was just targeting someone who was weaker than him.. Yes, in this world, there are many non-awakened or normal humans.. The system is OP where the system can bend the reality itself.. As such, MC using a system point called reality point and then poof, reality change based on what MC wants to.. MC kinda use it to become someone rich family son, brainwash others people mind, change their perspective, and many more.. Of course, there are restrictions such as, the system also has a level of authority.. The higher the system level, the more thing MC can change.. If you read "Cultivation Online", the world background kinda same (slightly).. In Cultivation Online, MC started from the lowest realm, the 9th floor realm, and slowly increased his strength into the higher realm.. But in this novel, MC started on Earth, which is still in the lowest realm.. There are other worlds that are stronger than earthling, many types of race from higher realm, and so on.. This novel has potential, but these adult scenes have overwhelmed the story thus it kinda ruined everything.. So, you can try it first to see if you can stand it.. And please don't misunderstand, when I said this novel has slightly the same world background as "Cultivation Online" novel, I just mean the similarity of the "world building" itself.. Well, there are many other novels like that but Cultivation Online is the most popular one..
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Don't waste your time or money on the book. it was good for the most part but it got rushed towards the end. Then the author quit so it has no finish to it. I am highly upset and would like a refund.
read through chapter 100. the writing is not as bad as some novels but changing jax and John, several chapters where you have to infer what words should have been used, and just lazy character development make it a hard read. having said that I enjoy the thought behind the world and would read another book from the author if they managed to clean up the grammar.
great story... but author rushed to end story... very sad# Has potential for 2000 chapters.# world has 9 realm,great world building....# Has total 370 chaps, but mc is in 1st realm until 300 chapters.Last 70 chapters completely rushad and ruined a rare GEM 💎.
I would have love it more if you really made the mc a tyrant not a normal person... like that's the title! change it if you dropped the novel already. (at leat the other 2 novels are nice ngl)nice novel overall.
well the story was good and all rushed a lot towards the end.... also it felt thea the MC is highly dependent on the system.it was not good to see that the MC was a chess piece and the author could also have added more advanced concepts like space and time, void,etc..has a great potential to be remade into a fanfic type
great story until the end, idk how I feel about it can't really be mad bit still crushed
I found it a little rushed. I was enjoying it, unfortunately the author decided to close it. I thought the romance was good. Good
It was an enjoyable story especially in the beginning but the longer it went on it became more and more boring since the cycle keeps repeating on the events. I could have been fine with that, what threw me of is the harem collecting pokemon thing. You do know that doing this ruins the essence of potential romance in the novel. You're just collecting them all and at some point one or two of the FL causing it to ruin the story.
Despite the beginning being extremely off putting I really did enjoy this book! It took me a couple tries to begin read it because I couldn’t quite get passed the first couple chapters as it was really uncomfortable. But as soon as you get passed that, the book has a really thought out and creative power system he’s overpowered but not obnoxiously so the world building starts pretty good but becomes amazing later on. The only thing is that a couple hundred chapters in the author just decides they don’t want to write this book any more and totally speeds through the ending I couldn’t even finish it. They skip a whole bunch of the story through crazy time skips and completely ignore parts of the story. While I do recommend this story watch out because apparently the author does not.
Absolutely perfect! Even though I haven’t gotten far it is just paced perfectly and never seems to bore me. I also love how he doesn’t start so weak in the beginning that he is limited to everything he can do but is also not strong that he can dominate all the worlds, though that still would be cool hahaha. I think the writing so far has had mostly no mistakes and everything is just about him getting what he wants and it seems perfect he got his revenge fast and is now living a nicer life. love this novel!!! 🫡🫡😉😃
hope you focus more on fateless mage. also write the sequal of "the tale of void emperor"
I enjoyed it for the MC. It abruptly ended as the author wasnt making any money from the novel anymore as he had taken a long break from writing, when he came back he had no audience. It's sad that it ended in the middle of the story but it is what it is. I enjoyed it, I recommend other read it but know it will suddenly end and will not be finished.
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I loved this novel I let it build up some chapters when I was around chapter 200 but then I came back after all this time to see that the novel has actually ended it makes me sad that it’s finished but all good things must come to an end. Anyway I’ll be busy reading the remaining chapters but it’d be really cool if we get some side stories or even a continuation.
The beginning was good, great start… but then the story didn’t keep it up. Overall it was an enjoyable read.
is it really completed? it only has around 400 so i want to make sure before diving in
overall this book is excellent. the writer keeps your attention with every sentence! this is one of the better books that I am reading. I really suggest to anyone that might be interested to try reading the story. if it doesn't keep you on your toes and thinking, then you must not like books!
Lorem Ipsum errr, I don't remember the rest so let's move on. The story paints a vivid picture of the world where the action takes place. Through the usage of the tiny elements of the world, the author instantly immerses the reader into the rich in flavour world of his/her creation. I really hate speaking about the plot as I believe everyone should try it themselves. Despite that, solidly written cliches and relatively standard openings allows me to peer into what possibly this novel have in store. Execution of the further plot is what I'm actually curious about, as I have a feeling that it will exceed my expectations on this one. In the end, I cannot really say much about the story. It's a solid piece of the literature that promises a tasty piece of webnovel down the line. Now it's up to the author to live up to the promises his chapters give.
is this in the magie realm from tales of the void emperor? will he appear? Hoppe this novel is as good as his previous works!! Loking forward to reading it
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The cover reminded me of TBATE. The Novel is good, really good, should give it a try if you have n’t
So i'm reading this so far and am enjoying it thoroughly, however it seems you have stopped updating are you dropping it? if so i'm not gonna spend my coins but it would for sure be a shame
the story is great. however up until recently the updates. have left Living Voids fan base wanting and highly dissappointed. from 14 chapters a week in 2022 to less than a chapter a month in 2023. dispite LV reply to my comment on his chapter he has yet to deliver any new content. dont get me wrong life happens. but feels if its a dropped book at this point[img=faceslap]
The kingdom of God has come near. Repent and believe the good news! John3.16 For God so loved the world that he gave his one and only Son, that whoever believes in him shall not perish but have eternal life. 17 For God did not send his Son into the world to condemn the world, but to save the world through him. 18 Whoever believes in him is not condemned, but whoever does not believe stands condemned already because they have not believed in the name of God’s one and only Son. 19 This is the verdict: Light has come into the world, but people loved darkness instead of light because their deeds were evil. 20 Everyone who does evil hates the light, and will not come into the light for fear that their deeds will be exposed. 21 But whoever lives by the truth comes into the light, so that it may be seen plainly that what they have done has been done in the sight of God. For more information: youtube.com/@PastorPatrickWinfrey
dropped at ch 80.Its a really bad story. just another wish fulfillment story without any good characters or development. Of course, mc had a sad life. He suddenly gets a super powerful system, and boom, revenge taken. That's the only part I was surprised by, that revenge is completed within 5 chapters. I was looking forward to which path the story will go now, given that mc is portrayed as a tyrant, who doesn't care about humans, in the synopsis of story.. But bam, all the character development destroyed. mc turns into yet another mc, who cares for his harem. And he gets divine massage skill from system, and you know how he will use it.. And that's all of the story A very poor story only for teens.
I am loving this story!!!! It is definitely one of my favorite Webnovel stories. I am a big fan of the main character and I think the system is really interesting. I think this story does a great job of having an MC that is evil to evil people but a decent person to others. I have read several stories where the MC is evil to evil people but also terrible to other innocent people. Can’t wait for more chapters!!!!! Hopefully this story will continue for a lot of chapters. Thanks for the awesome story Author!!!!!
Author review here: Just gonna state some fax. The MC will follow his desires and move. He will be a Tyrant but also a schemer because he wants to live and not waste his life on stupid impulses. Ec-chi stuff. Reality System. -This is the name of the system. Op skills and powers. Fantastic layered worlds. Simple power levels, but still cool and much versality. Full on fantasy, mythical beings, etc. All kinds of finctions. Happy Reading. Peace Out ✌️ Enjoy.
I was worried at the start as the author was prepping the story for Cliche overload, but the deviation from the norm was a pleasant surprise. I was a little disappointed he didn't do more to the Step mom and Sis at the start like using the other Hole forcefully to make sure they didn't like it... But other than that I have no complaints.. I like the system is part of the story and is a character not just invisible till MC needs a power up to win... I am one who doesn't like MCs who always win above their level by BS means and this story so far doesn't have it. MC is calculating, looks at thing logically and strategically, ruthless, romantic, and caring as well. I have yet to have a situation where MC's actions make me look at the story confused and pull my hair out.. Author has put thought into the action and consequences of MCs choice and given the MC fairly high level functioning brain... As of 109 I am hooked and will be doing Privilege next month on this story instead of others.
THIS NOVEL IS BETTER THEN THE MAJORITY OF NOVELS CURRENTLY IN THE TOP 10 SO PEOPLE SHOULD READ IT!! [Now for my Review] This novel is absolutely excellent and I'd rather just list the things I love about it so thats what I will do. First the MC is awesome he his attitude and character is great, A person who is kind and loving to the people he cares about and respectful to people who deserve it but cold and merciless to those who cross him or become enemies. He isn't like the sissy MC that are in the bashful/dense/naive/bad with girls that has become an annoying trope lately. The MC is realistic with his actions and desires and does what I believe most men who are honest with themselves would do in his position. Next the World background is different and amazing I won't spoil it so keep reading cause it's not just a modern world. Next the character development is great with the MC and his harem who stay relevant in the novel unlike those novels where you forget about characters regularly. The story truly follows a different and fun path that I haven't seen in other novels and I have read quite a few I highly recommend this novel. If it wasn't as good as it is I wouldn't have written such a long Review so everyone should read it and make this novel that deserves to be supported take a spot in the top
Honest reviews are here.. [Spoiler Alert] This story can be categorised in fantasy terms, but it is more accurate to be romance-fantasy.. I saw the mature content in synopsis, but I won't imagine that the author means EVERY chapters have adult scene.. In MC mind, MC always thinks of "intercourse" with other girls, ALWAYS.. First, he "grape" (remove G in grape) his stepsister for revenge.. Then, he "grape" his stepmother in front of his father for revenge.. Well, I don't care much about it because the ways his stepsister, stepmother, and his own father treat him after his mother dead is up straight cruelty.. But I started to get this is not for me when the author put ALMOST EVERY chapter have these adult scene.. Kinda way too much of those scene.. And MC is not straight away OP.. He kinda grows stronger in time.. There is still a ton of people stronger than him.. He was just targeting someone who was weaker than him.. Yes, in this world, there are many non-awakened or normal humans.. The system is OP where the system can bend the reality itself.. As such, MC using a system point called reality point and then poof, reality change based on what MC wants to.. MC kinda use it to become someone rich family son, brainwash others people mind, change their perspective, and many more.. Of course, there are restrictions such as, the system also has a level of authority.. The higher the system level, the more thing MC can change.. If you read "Cultivation Online", the world background kinda same (slightly).. In Cultivation Online, MC started from the lowest realm, the 9th floor realm, and slowly increased his strength into the higher realm.. But in this novel, MC started on Earth, which is still in the lowest realm.. There are other worlds that are stronger than earthling, many types of race from higher realm, and so on.. This novel has potential, but these adult scenes have overwhelmed the story thus it kinda ruined everything.. So, you can try it first to see if you can stand it.. And please don't misunderstand, when I said this novel has slightly the same world background as "Cultivation Online" novel, I just mean the similarity of the "world building" itself.. Well, there are many other novels like that but Cultivation Online is the most popular one..
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Don't waste your time or money on the book. it was good for the most part but it got rushed towards the end. Then the author quit so it has no finish to it. I am highly upset and would like a refund.
read through chapter 100. the writing is not as bad as some novels but changing jax and John, several chapters where you have to infer what words should have been used, and just lazy character development make it a hard read. having said that I enjoy the thought behind the world and would read another book from the author if they managed to clean up the grammar.
great story... but author rushed to end story... very sad# Has potential for 2000 chapters.# world has 9 realm,great world building....# Has total 370 chaps, but mc is in 1st realm until 300 chapters.Last 70 chapters completely rushad and ruined a rare GEM 💎.
I would have love it more if you really made the mc a tyrant not a normal person... like that's the title! change it if you dropped the novel already. (at leat the other 2 novels are nice ngl)nice novel overall.
well the story was good and all rushed a lot towards the end.... also it felt thea the MC is highly dependent on the system.it was not good to see that the MC was a chess piece and the author could also have added more advanced concepts like space and time, void,etc..has a great potential to be remade into a fanfic type
great story until the end, idk how I feel about it can't really be mad bit still crushed
I found it a little rushed. I was enjoying it, unfortunately the author decided to close it. I thought the romance was good. Good
It was an enjoyable story especially in the beginning but the longer it went on it became more and more boring since the cycle keeps repeating on the events. I could have been fine with that, what threw me of is the harem collecting pokemon thing. You do know that doing this ruins the essence of potential romance in the novel. You're just collecting them all and at some point one or two of the FL causing it to ruin the story.
Despite the beginning being extremely off putting I really did enjoy this book! It took me a couple tries to begin read it because I couldn’t quite get passed the first couple chapters as it was really uncomfortable. But as soon as you get passed that, the book has a really thought out and creative power system he’s overpowered but not obnoxiously so the world building starts pretty good but becomes amazing later on. The only thing is that a couple hundred chapters in the author just decides they don’t want to write this book any more and totally speeds through the ending I couldn’t even finish it. They skip a whole bunch of the story through crazy time skips and completely ignore parts of the story. While I do recommend this story watch out because apparently the author does not.
Absolutely perfect! Even though I haven’t gotten far it is just paced perfectly and never seems to bore me. I also love how he doesn’t start so weak in the beginning that he is limited to everything he can do but is also not strong that he can dominate all the worlds, though that still would be cool hahaha. I think the writing so far has had mostly no mistakes and everything is just about him getting what he wants and it seems perfect he got his revenge fast and is now living a nicer life. love this novel!!! 🫡🫡😉😃
hope you focus more on fateless mage. also write the sequal of "the tale of void emperor"
I enjoyed it for the MC. It abruptly ended as the author wasnt making any money from the novel anymore as he had taken a long break from writing, when he came back he had no audience. It's sad that it ended in the middle of the story but it is what it is. I enjoyed it, I recommend other read it but know it will suddenly end and will not be finished.
Author review here: Just gonna state some fax.Author review here: Just gonna state some fax.Author review here: Just gonna state some fax.Author review here: Just gonna state some fax.
I loved this novel I let it build up some chapters when I was around chapter 200 but then I came back after all this time to see that the novel has actually ended it makes me sad that it’s finished but all good things must come to an end. Anyway I’ll be busy reading the remaining chapters but it’d be really cool if we get some side stories or even a continuation.
The beginning was good, great start… but then the story didn’t keep it up. Overall it was an enjoyable read.
is it really completed? it only has around 400 so i want to make sure before diving in
overall this book is excellent. the writer keeps your attention with every sentence! this is one of the better books that I am reading. I really suggest to anyone that might be interested to try reading the story. if it doesn't keep you on your toes and thinking, then you must not like books!
Lorem Ipsum errr, I don't remember the rest so let's move on. The story paints a vivid picture of the world where the action takes place. Through the usage of the tiny elements of the world, the author instantly immerses the reader into the rich in flavour world of his/her creation. I really hate speaking about the plot as I believe everyone should try it themselves. Despite that, solidly written cliches and relatively standard openings allows me to peer into what possibly this novel have in store. Execution of the further plot is what I'm actually curious about, as I have a feeling that it will exceed my expectations on this one. In the end, I cannot really say much about the story. It's a solid piece of the literature that promises a tasty piece of webnovel down the line. Now it's up to the author to live up to the promises his chapters give.
is this in the magie realm from tales of the void emperor? will he appear? Hoppe this novel is as good as his previous works!! Loking forward to reading it
Reveal Spoiler The cover reminded me of TBATE. The Novel is good, really good, should give it a try if you have n’t
So i'm reading this so far and am enjoying it thoroughly, however it seems you have stopped updating are you dropping it? if so i'm not gonna spend my coins but it would for sure be a shame
the story is great. however up until recently the updates. have left Living Voids fan base wanting and highly dissappointed. from 14 chapters a week in 2022 to less than a chapter a month in 2023. dispite LV reply to my comment on his chapter he has yet to deliver any new content. dont get me wrong life happens. but feels if its a dropped book at this point[img=faceslap]
The kingdom of God has come near. Repent and believe the good news! John3.16 For God so loved the world that he gave his one and only Son, that whoever believes in him shall not perish but have eternal life. 17 For God did not send his Son into the world to condemn the world, but to save the world through him. 18 Whoever believes in him is not condemned, but whoever does not believe stands condemned already because they have not believed in the name of God’s one and only Son. 19 This is the verdict: Light has come into the world, but people loved darkness instead of light because their deeds were evil. 20 Everyone who does evil hates the light, and will not come into the light for fear that their deeds will be exposed. 21 But whoever lives by the truth comes into the light, so that it may be seen plainly that what they have done has been done in the sight of God. For more information: youtube.com/@PastorPatrickWinfrey
dropped at ch 80.Its a really bad story. just another wish fulfillment story without any good characters or development. Of course, mc had a sad life. He suddenly gets a super powerful system, and boom, revenge taken. That's the only part I was surprised by, that revenge is completed within 5 chapters. I was looking forward to which path the story will go now, given that mc is portrayed as a tyrant, who doesn't care about humans, in the synopsis of story.. But bam, all the character development destroyed. mc turns into yet another mc, who cares for his harem. And he gets divine massage skill from system, and you know how he will use it.. And that's all of the story A very poor story only for teens.
I am loving this story!!!! It is definitely one of my favorite Webnovel stories. I am a big fan of the main character and I think the system is really interesting. I think this story does a great job of having an MC that is evil to evil people but a decent person to others. I have read several stories where the MC is evil to evil people but also terrible to other innocent people. Can’t wait for more chapters!!!!! Hopefully this story will continue for a lot of chapters. Thanks for the awesome story Author!!!!!
Author review here: Just gonna state some fax. The MC will follow his desires and move. He will be a Tyrant but also a schemer because he wants to live and not waste his life on stupid impulses. Ec-chi stuff. Reality System. -This is the name of the system. Op skills and powers. Fantastic layered worlds. Simple power levels, but still cool and much versality. Full on fantasy, mythical beings, etc. All kinds of finctions. Happy Reading. Peace Out ✌️ Enjoy.