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Write a reviewМне понравилась эта история. Хотя у гг и есть "золотой палец", который делает его путь и развитие плавным и быстрым, задумка довольно оригинальная. Также приятно видеть взаимодействие между членами экипажа, хотя капитан и постоянно тормозит и не пользуется возможностью в полной мере.
Translation is good, but Chinese trash is Chinese trash. Most interactions i can swallow but the f is happening in the latter half. Holy f does the mc have such a superiority complex and 0 morals to back up his character? Or if he does they are simply extremely hypothetical...
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ممكن الموقع الاصلي الروايه أو التكملة م فضلك وشكراااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااتاااااااااااااااااااااااااااااتااااااااااااااااااا
The story is exciting and is definitely worth reading! It's been 4 months since the last update and it's still on hiatus. That's the only downside I say.
es una historia extremadamente interesante no pude dejar de leer, pero es un poco lento al actualisar. espero qie alla mas. la fruta de bonnie que canbia la edad como ella quiere queda muy bien en la tripulacion del protagonista y puede estar viva ya que no sabemos la edad real que tiene y hay una pirata que tiene una fruta que maneja la suerte de las personas, esta en una pelicula y quedaria muy bien en la tripulacion. espero poder leer mas pronto
Reveal SpoilerDude love this fanfic but when are you going to post new chapters its been 2 months. you said you're going to write it after exams are finished.
----Mais capítulos por favor 🙏🏻---- O tradutor parou de traduzir numa parte muito interessante, a fanfic também é muito boa apesar de ser chinesa, recomendo que leiam
Love the story hope you update soon because now we are out of December and in January where you said you world upload again :-) :-):-):-):-):-)
The only thing this lacking is H scenes 😂, when this gonna continue? I WANT MORE MORE MORE ♥ ♥ ♥
Hello !! How many floors should a bag of rice have, how many floors should a bag of rice have, how much should you pay for a bag of rice, how much should you wash a bag of rice, each grain is muddy, to whom you gave a bag of rice! Spicy Tiansai! ! ! Jiraiya swimming in the sea of dragons and angelica, popsicles melting under the street lamp
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Ставлю 5 звёзд, потому что это смешно) Даже если автор забыл написать, откуда у MC хаки, рокушики и навыки фехтования .... Не, Ну серьёзно, откуда ?! В лагере его ничему не научили и выгнали. Остальное описано достаточно комично.
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El mejor fanfic que en encontrado ahora último, pocos de los nuevos son así de buenos, el MC es op, inteligente. La tripulación también es buena y los personajes están bien escritos, no te aburres al leer
Una buena historia para oasar el tiempo.Ademas de que sirve de algo para saber del manga de one piece.Se qué me estoy spoiler tofo pero ya que.
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first I want to congratulate the translator, for the excellent work and patience, oriental works, mainly Chinese, tend to be very confusing with names, dates and other numberings such as power potential scale and the like, the translator had the patience to fix this. The story is quite reasonable, of course, with time certain problems appear, but these are the author's problems, like most Chinese stories, he ended up making Mc arrogant, but about the work of the Translator I just have to congratulate him , I would just like to ask what is the original name of the work? so I can do some research later on.
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Reveal Spoilerthis isn't good at all, can't understand half the sentences with how badly written it is. Also lots of fake reviews, its completely impossible for this to have a 4.9
(Written at chapter 108) A very good fanfiction novel in One Piece. I very much enjoy this story since the plot is very good. This is a translation and although there are some mistakes between past, present progressive and future progressive, it is still very much readable and enjoyable. (I suggest the translator to get a beta reader to fix the mistakes, the translation is good so far with only some minor mistakes and the story itself is also excellent, it's a shame not to give this fanfiction the best treatment it deserves) Despite everything I wrote it will still get a 5 stars review from me since the plot is excellent and the chapter updates are very fast. And all in all, this is highly recommended to anyone who likes this gender.
Say hello to the one who... Hello!! Are we going to review this? Yes, we are!! Can we just give it 5-star and left? No!! But we just did... LOL!!
Мне понравилась эта история. Хотя у гг и есть "золотой палец", который делает его путь и развитие плавным и быстрым, задумка довольно оригинальная. Также приятно видеть взаимодействие между членами экипажа, хотя капитан и постоянно тормозит и не пользуется возможностью в полной мере.
Translation is good, but Chinese trash is Chinese trash. Most interactions i can swallow but the f is happening in the latter half. Holy f does the mc have such a superiority complex and 0 morals to back up his character? Or if he does they are simply extremely hypothetical...
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ممكن الموقع الاصلي الروايه أو التكملة م فضلك وشكراااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااااتاااااااااااااااااااااااااااااتااااااااااااااااااا
The story is exciting and is definitely worth reading! It's been 4 months since the last update and it's still on hiatus. That's the only downside I say.
es una historia extremadamente interesante no pude dejar de leer, pero es un poco lento al actualisar. espero qie alla mas. la fruta de bonnie que canbia la edad como ella quiere queda muy bien en la tripulacion del protagonista y puede estar viva ya que no sabemos la edad real que tiene y hay una pirata que tiene una fruta que maneja la suerte de las personas, esta en una pelicula y quedaria muy bien en la tripulacion. espero poder leer mas pronto
Reveal SpoilerDude love this fanfic but when are you going to post new chapters its been 2 months. you said you're going to write it after exams are finished.
----Mais capítulos por favor 🙏🏻---- O tradutor parou de traduzir numa parte muito interessante, a fanfic também é muito boa apesar de ser chinesa, recomendo que leiam
Love the story hope you update soon because now we are out of December and in January where you said you world upload again :-) :-):-):-):-):-)
The only thing this lacking is H scenes 😂, when this gonna continue? I WANT MORE MORE MORE ♥ ♥ ♥
Hello !! How many floors should a bag of rice have, how many floors should a bag of rice have, how much should you pay for a bag of rice, how much should you wash a bag of rice, each grain is muddy, to whom you gave a bag of rice! Spicy Tiansai! ! ! Jiraiya swimming in the sea of dragons and angelica, popsicles melting under the street lamp
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Ставлю 5 звёзд, потому что это смешно) Даже если автор забыл написать, откуда у MC хаки, рокушики и навыки фехтования .... Не, Ну серьёзно, откуда ?! В лагере его ничему не научили и выгнали. Остальное описано достаточно комично.
HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM
El mejor fanfic que en encontrado ahora último, pocos de los nuevos son así de buenos, el MC es op, inteligente. La tripulación también es buena y los personajes están bien escritos, no te aburres al leer
Una buena historia para oasar el tiempo.Ademas de que sirve de algo para saber del manga de one piece.Se qué me estoy spoiler tofo pero ya que.
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first I want to congratulate the translator, for the excellent work and patience, oriental works, mainly Chinese, tend to be very confusing with names, dates and other numberings such as power potential scale and the like, the translator had the patience to fix this. The story is quite reasonable, of course, with time certain problems appear, but these are the author's problems, like most Chinese stories, he ended up making Mc arrogant, but about the work of the Translator I just have to congratulate him , I would just like to ask what is the original name of the work? so I can do some research later on.
Good Good Good good Good Good Good Good Good good Good Good Good Good Good good Good Good Good Good Good good Good Good Good Good Good good Good Good Good Good Good good Good Good
Reveal SpoilerGood Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good
Reveal Spoilerthis isn't good at all, can't understand half the sentences with how badly written it is. Also lots of fake reviews, its completely impossible for this to have a 4.9
(Written at chapter 108) A very good fanfiction novel in One Piece. I very much enjoy this story since the plot is very good. This is a translation and although there are some mistakes between past, present progressive and future progressive, it is still very much readable and enjoyable. (I suggest the translator to get a beta reader to fix the mistakes, the translation is good so far with only some minor mistakes and the story itself is also excellent, it's a shame not to give this fanfiction the best treatment it deserves) Despite everything I wrote it will still get a 5 stars review from me since the plot is excellent and the chapter updates are very fast. And all in all, this is highly recommended to anyone who likes this gender.
Say hello to the one who... Hello!! Are we going to review this? Yes, we are!! Can we just give it 5-star and left? No!! But we just did... LOL!!
I really love this story so please keep it up.!