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Chapter 2: Amanda is Warned

"Are you kidding me? Jane said…that Bella said that the excursion was cancelled" Amanda said and looked at Jane who looked away immediately.

"What are you saying Amanda?" Fraser asked with an imperceptible scoff.

Jake looked at Jane who was busy picking her index fingernail with a toothpick she saved after eating her fries.

"What? It was our idea…by the way" she replied Jake and he blinked.

"I said after the excursion not before the excursion"

"I don't wanna go to that dumb excursion too, I had no other choice too" Jane giggled.

"Okay…what is going on here?" Amanda was confused.

"Don't be scared about what I'm about to say right now okay, just….'

"And why do I have to hear it from you Fraser? Jake what is going on here?'

"Look Amanda….."

"Look Amanda, I'm the leader in this our little adventure okay, you don't have to disrespect your leader"

"I knew you will say that, I was waiting for it"

"Jane!!!" Amanda shouted and stood up from the couch.

"Why are you shouting my name?"

"What the fuck is wrong with you? You tricked me that the excursion was cancelled and you brought me down here for some shit I don't know about..and..and…what the fuck is really wrong with you Jane?" Amanda bawls.

"What the fuck is wrong with me? You wanna know what the fuck is really wrong with me? I will tell you what is wrong with me…I love you as a friend and I can't do things without you and if that irritates you or pisses you off, fuck you" Jane replied angrily, leaving the shop.

Jake looked at Fraser who looked back and shrugged imperceptibly.

"And where do you think you are going"

"To find peace somewhere else with someone else"

"I'm here Jane' Fraser giggled, raising her left hand up.

"Fuck you" she said, still going.

"You brought me here Jane"

"I don't know what you are talki…." David opened the door before Jane could finish what she wanted to say.

"Fine…fine...it keeps getting worse and worse" she frowned and went back.

"David!" Amanda was surprised to see David at the store.

"Thought you went for a excursion?"

"She don't wanna go for that excursion, we all never wanna go for it"

"Don't speak for me Jane, speak for yourself please" Fraser groaned.

"So…what are you doing here?"

"You invited me over to this address ten minutes ago" David replied, chuckled happily to Amanda and rubbed his right hand on his rough brown hair.

Amanda was confused and surprised at the same time.

"What did you say?" Amanda chuckled, staring at David who was busy staring at her.

"You invited me over to this address ten minutes ago" David replied again, still staring at Amanda who was also staring at him.

Amanda looked at Jane who was walking over to her with a phone.

"Took it when I hugged you" she whispered to Amanda and gave her the phone.

"Yea yea…I was wondering…maybe… you know"

"We were planning on going for an adventure in…"

"Adventure? Why do you keep calling it an adventure?'

"Because it's an adventure Amanda" Fraser yawned.

"What adventure are you both talking about?" David asked Jake and Fraser.

"Come on… let's go, we,ve stayed longer a lot" Jake said, leaving through the same back door.

"Y'all coming?" Fraser asked, following Jake.

"I know you don't wanna go for that school excursion, don't pretend and come on let's go. Don't blame me for any shit" Jane said and followed them.

"Don't tell me you're gonna…."

"Come on, let's go with them" David grabbed Amanda's hand and they followed the others.

Jane, Amanda, Jake, David and Fraser arrived at a very old white house with a big white gate. The white gate was widely opened with green plants growing all over the gate. The white house has obtained same plants on its wall. The big compound was filled with dirt from dead leaves and some old wooden benches were scattered in the compound.

'And….what are we doing here?" Amanda broke the silence

"Work" Jane sighed heavily.

"What do you mean?" David added.

"Okay listen, change of plan, we go in group instead but don't forget that…."

"Wait..wait..wait…wait" Amanda cuts Jake off.

"What plan are we talking about here?" she asked them.

"Didn't you hear about the chocolate girl this morning? Or do you think that the school excursion is better than death" Fraser faced Amanda.

"What is wrong with you guys? That was just news and it has nothing to do with you guys?"

"Oh you think so? Elsa is a girl like you and I who died mysteriously this morning, is that just…a news too?" Jane asked Amanda.

'That has nothing to do with me? That can't drag me into some unplanned plan that I don't know about and…and do some shits I hardly cares for"

"What the fuck!" Fraser frowned.

'Jake what ya guys up to?" David requested from Jake.

"Charlie told us what happened to Elsa" Jake replied.

"Who's Charlie?" David asked.

"Elsa's boyfriend"

"Elsa's boyfriend? And why is he not here with us?" Amanda asked with a scoff.

"He's hiding in a hospital" Fraser replied.

"What is that?" David asked loudly and coughed.

"He is a druggist" Jane joined.

"And you believed him. You said it yourself…he is a nerd Jake'

"I believed what he said, he meant it. He was with Elsa and her friends when it all started"

"Oh my God' Amanda groaned.

"So what's ya point Jake"

"It's a useless point David trust me, let's get outta here' Amanda turned back and began to leave.

"Amanda!!" Jane called.

"She's always like this" Fraser cried.

"Stopping that chocolate girl involves going into this house"

"I'm not doing that Jake, I'd rather go to the boring excursion than this" Amanda replied as she was leaving them.

"Fuck!" Fraser groans.

"Jake we will discuss about this later okay…you know, some other time" David followed Amanda.

"When it's late right?" Jane chuckled slowly and they all left.


Chapter 3: Where is Charlie?

11:00 am, Amanda's dad arrived home after a delivery to pick his coat in order to avoid the dangers of the cloudy weather. He opened the door slowly and walked into the quiet empty house.

He grabbed the coat which was laid on the arm of a blue plastic chair and headed towards Amanda's room.

"You home?" he asked, standing in front of the door but nobody replied. He opened the door a little and peeped inside. Amanda's packed luggage was still on the bed.

"She succeeded in cutting herself off the excursion" he chuckled and turned to leave.

In front of him, he saw a very beautiful girl wearing a purple gown and a white shoe. She was staring steadily at him. Damon was startled to see such a beautiful creature standing in front of him. Damon believed that she is lost or might be one of the refugees who stay under bridges and beside road, looking for charity. But this one in particular doesn't look like them.

"Hey little girl? What are you doing here? Are you looking for charity? You shoulda wait outside or knocked on that beautiful door….at least" Damon chuckled, bending down so she could see his chuckling face very well.

"Tiffany' the chocolate girl said and Damon paused the smile on his face.

"How did you know my daughter's name and what are you doing with my daughter's name?" Damon asked her.

"Tiffany" she said again, looking directly into Damon's eyes. Damon relaxed back and whispered.

"Who are you?" he asked her slowly.

"Tiffany wants some chocolates" Claire said again.

"Get outta here"

"Tiffany wants some…"

"I said get outta here little witch" Damon yelled at Claire.

Claire didn't even move a hair of her body. Damon scoffed.

She stood still, staring at Damon with her blue eyes. Damon moved closer to her and bent down to her length.

"Do you have some wool in your ear or are you naturally dumb? Who the fuck are you to mention my daughter's name out of your suffering mouth. I suggest that you get outta he…." Claire buried her knife into Damon's stomach before he could finish the sentence.

She shoveled the knife up and down his stomach and his intestine poured to the tiled floor.

Damon, taking his last breath, took a last gaze of Claire's beautiful face and blew the air in pain.

"Tiffany" Claire said to him and he died.

Amanda arrived home at 13:00 pm and knocked at the door, nobody replied. The door was open and she walked inside. It was a chaos to her.

Jane and David was the first that came to console her, Jake and Fraser came at last. Sitting besides David on a sofa, Amanda rested her head on his shoulder with pack of tears loaded on both eyes. Jane and the rest sat quietly on another sofa opposite them. They were feeling sad for Amanda's loss

Fraser got fed up of the quietness, he yawned and cleared his throat. They all knows that he is about to talk.

"Am sorry to say this but I think…."

"Where's Charlie?" Amanda cut him off immediately.

"Hiding in a hospital' Fraser replied and sighed.

"Which hospital?"

"Wait…you wanna go there?"

"Yea

"I'm going with you" Jake cleared his throat and looked at Jane. Jake smiled to him and frowned immediately after facing Amanda.

"You should say we..Jake' Fraser corrected and stood up.

"Let's go find out something, people' he yawned again.

"Okay then…let's go then' David said and they left.

13:35 pm, they arrived the hospital and was stopped by a yellow fat staff nurse who stood at the entrance counter.

"Hey hey hey people, this is a hospital and not another of your friend's house" she said, rushing to stop them.

"Oh…sorry we forgot, how are you?" Fraser asked her with a forced smile. The fat lady looked at Fraser's hair and returned the smile.

"I like your hair"

"I know'

"Cut it off Fraser, we're here for something else" Jane shunned Fraser.

"Please we are here to see a patient, Charlie Patricks" Jake inquired the staff.

"He's our friend, an old one" David added.

"I know" she replied and went back to the counter.

"So….?"

"He was discharged fifty minutes ago"

"What do you mean 'he was discharged fifty minutes ago" Jane asked, and moved closer to her.

"Which part of what I said don't you understand? The fifty minutes or the meaning of discharge?" she asked, staring at Jane.

"He was admitted here by nine this morning if I'm not mistaken" Jake asked.

"Nah ya not'

"Then how was he discharged fifteen minutes ago?" he added.

"He asked for it. The nerd was in a hurry to leave so we gave him what he wanted. He should fucking go and die somewhere else" the staff replied, penning things down on a book.

"I was expecting that from you though" Fraser chuckled.

Jake leaned back to where he was before and sighed.

"This is a mess guys, what do we do?" Jake asked.

"My dad died this afternoon" Amanda said slowly to the staff. The staff gazed at Amanda slowly and sighed.

"Does that…really has anything to do with me?"

"I believe Charlie can be a help to me…and my friends as well"

"He raises dead people?"

"Come on!" Fraser groaned, rubbing his left hand on his head while his right hand is resting on his waist.

"He knows what kill people" Amanda continued and the staff scoffed.

"What made you think I know where he lives? He's a stupid psycho"

"Please....help us" Amanda cries.

She stared at them for some seconds and cleared her throat.

"11 Caverton lane, South Fosterland. Don't ever meet me in your life again…leave please"

"Thank you' Amanda thanked her.

"We appreciate ma'am" David bowed.

"He's not gonna hide forever….come on let's go" Jane said as they were leaving the hospital.

"Bye, and don't miss me too much' Fraser said to the staff with another forced smile.

'I will try not to" she smiled.


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